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Ahle bazam ko Adaab!!!
Ek nayi koshish lekar pesh-e-khidmat hu,
Gaur farmaiye.

Aapki rae ka Muntzir rahunga......



Nahi jaante hm ke tu Kya hai
Jaante haiN magar ke ye khuda Kya hai

Taqat-e-guftaar ko tum khudayee na kaho
Hme maloom hai ke ye majraa Kya hai

Apne jalwoN se mehfil ko bharmane wale
Kya tu nahi jaanta ke ye haya Kya hai

Butt-parasti me to dekha sab aalam gaffil
Na maloom shae-parasti ye bala Kya hai

Kar lenge hm bandagi bhi teri
Bata to sahi ke tujh me Kuch naya Kya hai

Nikal ja ghar ko tu bhi 'mastt' sa hi
Tu bhi nahi jaanta dar khuda ki hasti Kya hai


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Ahle bazam ko Adaab!!!
Ek nayi koshish lekar pesh-e-khidmat hu,
Gaur farmaiye.

Aapki rae ka Muntzir rahunga......



Nahi jaante hm ke tu Kya hai
Jaante haiN magar ke ye khuda Kya hai

Taqat-e-guftaar ko tum khudayee na kaho
Hme maloom hai ke ye majraa Kya hai

Apne jalwoN se mehfil ko bharmane wale
Kya tu nahi jaanta ke ye haya Kya hai

Butt-parasti me to dekha sab aalam gaffil
Na maloom shae-parasti ye bala Kya hai

Kar lenge hm bandagi bhi teri
Bata to sahi ke tujh me Kuch naya Kya hai

Nikal ja ghar ko tu bhi 'mastt' sa hi
Tu bhi nahi jaanta dar khuda ki hasti Kya hai

waah ......maza aa gaya padh k itna accha likhte ho aap log hum to padhte hi rehte hai bas...likhne ka yaad hi nahi aata......bahut khoob.......
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waah ......maza aa gaya padh k itna accha likhte ho aap log hum to padhte hi rehte hai bas...likhne ka yaad hi nahi aata......bahut khoob.......
Bahut bahut Shukriya Aapka Tannu ji.....
Lekin jitni taareef aapne ki hai abhi usse deserve nahi Karta. Koi baat nahi aapke saath saath hm bhi seekh jayenge...

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Nahi jaante hm ke tu Kya hai
Jaante haiN magar ke ye khuda Kya hai

Taqat-e-guftaar ko tum khudayee na kaho
Hme maloom hai ke ye majraa Kya hai

Apne jalwoN se mehfil ko bharmane wale
Kya tu nahi jaanta ke ye haya Kya hai

Butt-parasti me to dekha sab aalam gaffil
Na maloom shae-parasti ye bala Kya hai

Kar lenge hm bandagi bhi teri
Bata to sahi ke tujh me Kuch naya Kya hai

Nikal ja ghar ko tu bhi 'mastt' sa hi
Tu bhi nahi jaanta dar khuda ki hasti Kya hai
Vikram ji !....aapki yeh koshish mujhe khoob lagi...aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye...

duaaon ke saath...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Vikram ji !....aapki yeh koshish mujhe khoob lagi...aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye...

duaaon ke saath...
Naresh ji,

Bahut bahut Shukriya meri hausla afzai ke liye....
Aap agar aise hi meri achhi aur buri nazmo ke bare me aapne dil se rae denge, toh, inshallah, main bhi likhne lagunga.

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Ahle bazam ko Adaab!!!
Ek nayi koshish lekar pesh-e-khidmat hu,
Gaur farmaiye.

Aapki rae ka Muntzir rahunga......



Nahi jaante hm ke tu Kya hai
Jaante haiN magar ke ye khuda Kya hai

Taqat-e-guftaar ko tum khudayee na kaho
Hme maloom hai ke ye majraa Kya hai

Apne jalwoN se mehfil ko bharmane wale
Kya tu nahi jaanta ke ye haya Kya hai

Butt-parasti me to dekha sab aalam gaffil
Na maloom shae-parasti ye bala Kya hai

Kar lenge hm bandagi bhi teri
Bata to sahi ke tujh me Kuch naya Kya hai

Nikal ja ghar ko tu bhi 'mastt' sa hi
Tu bhi nahi jaanta dar khuda ki hasti Kya hai
Vikram ji,
Adaab....
Yeh nazam aapki hume behad achhi lagi.....
Magar urdu ke bade bade words ka matlab bhi saath likh denge to samjhne me asaani ho gi...

Likhte rahiye...
Vibhuti...
   
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Ahle bazam ko Adaab!!!
Ek nayi koshish lekar pesh-e-khidmat hu,
Gaur farmaiye.

Aapki rae ka Muntzir rahunga......



Nahi jaante hm ke tu Kya hai
Jaante haiN magar ke ye khuda Kya hai

Taqat-e-guftaar ko tum khudayee na kaho
Hme maloom hai ke ye majraa Kya hai

Apne jalwoN se mehfil ko bharmane wale
Kya tu nahi jaanta ke ye haya Kya hai

Butt-parasti me to dekha sab aalam gaffil
Na maloom shae-parasti ye bala Kya hai

Kar lenge hm bandagi bhi teri
Bata to sahi ke tujh me Kuch naya Kya hai

Nikal ja ghar ko tu bhi 'mastt' sa hi
Tu bhi nahi jaanta dar khuda ki hasti Kya hai

Vikram ji ko aadaab

aapki yeh gazal mujhe khoob lagi har shyr bhout hi umda hai ...aise hi likhte

rahiye...khush rahiye...

aapka

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Vikram ji ko aadaab

aapki yeh gazal mujhe khoob lagi har shyr bhout hi umda hai ...aise hi likhte

rahiye...khush rahiye...

aapka

vichitra
Vichitra ji,

Bahut bahut Shukriya...
Aapko meri yeh koshish Achhi lagi ye jankar achha laga...

Aapka Dost

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Vikram ji,
Adaab....
Yeh nazam aapki hume behad achhi lagi.....
Magar urdu ke bade bade words ka matlab bhi saath likh denge to samjhne me asaani ho gi...

Likhte rahiye...
Vibhuti...
Adaab Vibhuti ji,

Aapko hmari ye koshish achhi lagi hme bahut achha laga...
Aapki shikayat abhi dur kiye deta hu...

Main yahan istemaal kiye urdu ke lafzoN ka matlab likh raha hu...

* Taqat-e-guftaar: virtue of strong conversation
* Majraa: scene
* Haya: shame
* Butt-parasti: idol worship
* Shae-parasti: worship of man

Umm'eed hai ke aapki shikayat dur hui hogi.

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