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Ehsaas.. Did I deserve it??? -
8th January 2010, 06:37 PM
Dedicated to someone I love and always will.....
Nam aankho mein utara jo, Lahoo tha wo pighalata hua
Main yahan Lachhar khada hu bebas haath malta hua
Bade shauk se seencha tha kabhi, aks mere armano ka
Who dekho surkh lapton mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Peeth par ghopa chura jisne, hamdard khudko kehta hai
Aaj bhi Mere dil mein hi kaheen, mera qatil rehta hai
Hakiqat bankar guzra jo mujhpar, bura khwaab hota who kaash
Chhota bhai kehti thi kabhi, us behen ne hi bichha di laash
Main aaj bhi bawafa hu,maang kar dekhte meri jaan
Kasam aapki muskurahat ki, duniya kar deta aapke naam
Pravriti hai insaan ki shayad, abhibhav yahi hai chalta hua
Who dekho surkh lapto.n mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Ab talak bhi lachaar hi khada hai, Ehsaas haath malta hua
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beautiful moment.........
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8th January 2010, 07:27 PM
Amit,
its just awesome dear.... superb indeed..... tumhare ehsaas dil chhu gaye... tum hamesha se sabse alag ho aur tumhari kalam me bhi jaadu hai... keep it up... khush raho...
rep+++++++++++++++++ added...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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9th January 2010, 10:36 PM
ehsaas ji dard se sarabore ek ek shabd dil ka haal bata raha hai. bahut acchha likha hai.
~*~*~* उदास पथिक ~*~*~*
दिल की चीखे जब बढ जाती हैं
और जज्बातो की आंधी
रोके नही रुकती..
तो लिख लेती हू....
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10th January 2010, 07:18 PM
BOHAT KHOOB............................................. ...........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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11th January 2010, 08:15 AM
Amit ji,
Simply beautiful ...........
no words to express my feelings....
likhtey rahyee
khush rahyee
duaon ke saath
mandeep
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11th January 2010, 09:41 AM
Amit bhaa'ii:
namaste!
kaise hain aap? aapne jis tarah se ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii apni kavviSh meiN.. mere paas lafz nahiiN.. bahot hi umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n lagaa mujhe aapkaa! yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! bazm ki Shaan ko baRhaate raheN aage bhee! daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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12th January 2010, 12:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ehsaas
Dedicated to someone I love and always will.....
Nam aankho mein utara jo, Lahoo tha wo pighalata hua
Main yahan Lachhar khada hu bebas haath malta hua
Bade shauk se seencha tha kabhi, aks mere armano ka
Who dekho surkh lapton mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Peeth par ghopa chura jisne, hamdard khudko kehta hai
Aaj bhi Mere dil mein hi kaheen, mera qatil rehta hai
Hakiqat bankar guzra jo mujhpar, bura khwaab hota who kaash
Chhota bhai kehti thi kabhi, us behen ne hi bichha di laash
Main aaj bhi bawafa hu,maang kar dekhte meri jaan
Kasam aapki muskurahat ki, duniya kar deta aapke naam
Pravriti hai insaan ki shayad, abhibhav yahi hai chalta hua
Who dekho surkh lapto.n mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Ab talak bhi lachaar hi khada hai, Ehsaas haath malta hua
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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12th January 2010, 12:33 PM
Amit Jii,,
Dard se bharpoor aik lajwaab nazm,
issey phad kar dil dukhi ho gaya...
Nazm k aik aik hurf se ashk tapak
raha hai jese....(Rep+++)
Teh-e-dil se daad haazir hai,
qabool kijiye.....
Regardz,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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12th January 2010, 08:05 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
Amit,
its just awesome dear.... superb indeed..... tumhare ehsaas dil chhu gaye... tum hamesha se sabse alag ho aur tumhari kalam me bhi jaadu hai... keep it up... khush raho...
rep+++++++++++++++++ added...
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Thanks for the appreciation and the rep points..
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12th January 2010, 08:12 PM
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ehsaas ji dard se sarabore ek ek shabd dil ka haal bata raha hai. bahut acchha likha hai.
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Shukriya Udas Pathik Ji..................
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14th January 2010, 11:45 AM
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Ise kehte hain gandhigiri ek gaal par tamacha pade to dusra gaal aage kar do
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egg jactly ....................
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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14th January 2010, 12:06 PM
Amit Ji......Dil ka dard bayaan karti .....aapki yeh nazm mujhe behad pasand aai....superB creation........yuhi likhte rahen...khush rahiye...
dil se daad hazir hai...
apna khayal rakhen..
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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19th January 2010, 01:00 PM
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BOHAT KHOOB............................................. ...........
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19th January 2010, 01:01 PM
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Originally Posted by mann_chand
Amit ji,
Simply beautiful ...........
no words to express my feelings....
likhtey rahyee
khush rahyee
duaon ke saath
mandeep
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Har kadam par saath aur vishwaas dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Mandeep Ji
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19th January 2010, 01:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Amit bhaa'ii:
namaste!
kaise hain aap? aapne jis tarah se ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii apni kavviSh meiN.. mere paas lafz nahiiN.. bahot hi umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n lagaa mujhe aapkaa! yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! bazm ki Shaan ko baRhaate raheN aage bhee! daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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Shukriya Dhaval bhai ki aapne waqt nikalkar is Ehsaas ko padha aur saraha... Achha laga
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19th January 2010, 01:05 PM
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19th January 2010, 01:20 PM
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Kamal hassan ka movie yaad hai....hahaha
There was not a single dialogue in that movie.... Lekin samajh mein ajati thi story.
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19th January 2010, 01:39 PM
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Amit Jii,,
Dard se bharpoor aik lajwaab nazm,
issey phad kar dil dukhi ho gaya...
Nazm k aik aik hurf se ashk tapak
raha hai jese....(Rep+++)
Teh-e-dil se daad haazir hai,
qabool kijiye.....
Regardz,,
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Hassan Ji,
aapne apne keemti waqt nikalkar, is Ehsaas ko saraha aur tareef ke kaabil samjha, iske liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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19th January 2010, 02:07 PM
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Ise kehte hain gandhigiri ek gaal par tamacha pade to dusra gaal aage kar do
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Aur isse kehte hain begaani shaadi mein abdullah deewana.... Ya fir maan na maan, main tera mehmaan
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19th January 2010, 02:09 PM
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egg jactly ....................
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Tu bhi same to same and copy to all...... haina Mr. egg jactly....
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19th January 2010, 02:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ehsaas
Dedicated to someone I love and always will.....
Nam aankho mein utara jo, Lahoo tha wo pighalata hua
Main yahan Lachhar khada hu bebas haath malta hua
Bade shauk se seencha tha kabhi, aks mere armano ka
Who dekho surkh lapton mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Peeth par ghopa chura jisne, hamdard khudko kehta hai
Aaj bhi Mere dil mein hi kaheen, mera qatil rehta hai
Hakiqat bankar guzra jo mujhpar, bura khwaab hota who kaash
Chhota bhai kehti thi kabhi, us behen ne hi bichha di laash
Main aaj bhi bawafa hu,maang kar dekhte meri jaan
Kasam aapki muskurahat ki, duniya kar deta aapke naam
Pravriti hai insaan ki shayad, abhibhav yahi hai chalta hua
Who dekho surkh lapto.n mein, who mera ghar hai jalta hua
Ab talak bhi lachaar hi khada hai, Ehsaas haath malta hua
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ehsaas jii....aapke message ke baare to nahi jaanta lekin behad khoobsurat likha hai...achha laga padh kar....May God Bless You...!
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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19th January 2010, 03:13 PM
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Kamal hassan ka movie yaad hai....hahaha
There was not a single dialogue in that movie.... Lekin samajh mein ajati thi story.
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Lekin isme tere liye ek dialogue tha, mera signature
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19th January 2010, 03:15 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Amit Ji......Dil ka dard bayaan karti .....aapki yeh nazm mujhe behad pasand aai....superB creation........yuhi likhte rahen...khush rahiye...
dil se daad hazir hai...
apna khayal rakhen..
duaaon ke saath...
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Itni hausla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Naresh Ji.......
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22nd January 2010, 03:48 PM
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ehsaas jii....aapke message ke baare to nahi jaanta lekin behad khoobsurat likha hai...achha laga padh kar....May God Bless You...!
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Shukriyaah Vikram Ji....................
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