Sawaali

[chanderp]

Wo dar pe mere sawaali ban ke aaye hai,
aankho me ansuo ka sailaab laye hai.
Shikwa karu unse ya gale laga lu,
Aaj fir dil ke daag zamane ko nazar aaye hai.

Waqt ki har chaal ka tazruba hai ab,
Raah-e-zindagi me har baar haar khaye hai.

Khaamoshi ki raah jo akhtiyaar thi hame,
usi raah-e-gujar pe lab ladkhadaye hai.

Waqt ho gaya hai ab pur sukoo nind ka,
Barso baad hum aaj khul ke nuskuraye hai.

[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by chanderp

Wo dar pe mere sawaali ban ke aaye hai,
aankho me ansuo ka sailaab laye hai.
Shikwa karu unse ya gale laga lu,
Aaj fir dil ke daag zamane ko nazar aaye hai.

Waqt ki har chaal ka tazruba hai ab,
Raah-e-zindagi me har baar haar khaye hai.

Khaamoshi ki raah jo akhtiyaar thi hame,
usi raah-e-gujar pe lab ladkhadaye hai.

Waqt ho gaya hai ab pur sukoo nind ka,
Barso baad hum aaj khul ke nuskuraye hai.

ahsaas acche lage hame, par shayad kahin kahin spell mistake hai...jaise last sher meiN aapne Muskuraye ko nuskuraye likha hai, likhne ke baad agar aik baar khud pad liya jaaye to en kamiyoN se bacha ja sakta hai...anyways hame aapke ahsaas bahut acche lage...keep it up.

god bless u

[chanderp]

sunita ji aapko salaam,

Pehle to aapka bahut bahut shukriya is hosla-afjai k liye aur khamiya batane ke liye bhi. Ji ye to hai ki kuch aisi galtiya hui hai jo nahi honi chahiye thi, me aage se hamesha aapki is advise ko dhyan me rakhunga.

Fir se bahut bahut shukriya.