 |
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
Dheere Zaraa... |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
  
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
Dheere Zaraa... -
15th August 2011, 03:53 PM
DostoN ek nayee koshish ko ghazal kaa anjaam de raha hooN, Shaayd aashiqaana lage... Aapke views/opinion ke intezaar me
Dekhaa KarooN Rastaa teraa har ek Shaam ko, Deedar apnaa De bhi De ik Din Ghulaam Ko. Aate nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N, Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhte ho Mere Kalaam ko. GhazloN Mein merii jab huaa Zikre-Sanam kabhi, LafzoN meiN kho kar DhooNdtee ho apne Naam ko. Dil to yeh Chaahe Saath Uske DaastaaN banuuN, Ab tak magar tarsaa hi hooN ik ik Salaam ko. Shabnam se AaNsu haiN, PaseeNa motiyoN sa hai, Inkaa Nashaa Utre to phir, SochuNgaa Jaam ko. Is Dil ne maanaa hai agar Sarkaar Aap ko, To Aye Sanam Dheere zaraa KheeNcho Lagaam ko. ""Shaad"" |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
A Passing Stranger
Offline
Posts: 149
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: Terra Nullius
Rep Power: 15
|
15th August 2011, 10:29 PM
Sameer 'Shaad' sahib ko aadaab arz hai, ek ba-husn,ba-saroor,tar-e-ishq ghazal ki takmeel par dhairon daad qaboul kijiye. Mujhe ajeeb laga a mean taajjub hai k itni dair huay post is Jameel-O-haseen ghazal per kisi ne comment nahi kiya...I mean this particular piece is ir-resistable. Jisske liye likhi hai usper rabba khair karay
 Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee! Ajnabi |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 43
Join Date: Apr 2011
Rep Power: 0
|
20th August 2011, 10:46 AM
Quote:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
21st August 2011, 01:43 AM
Quote:
Shaad.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
|
A Passing Stranger
Offline
Posts: 149
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: Terra Nullius
Rep Power: 15
|
21st August 2011, 05:51 PM
Quote:
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee! Ajnabi |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
Webeater
Offline
Posts: 716
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Bathinda-Punjab-India
Rep Power: 20
|
21st August 2011, 07:19 PM
thanks for sharing this wonderful post
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
22nd August 2011, 06:51 PM
Thanks once again for your support and encouragement Ajanbi and Mittal jee..
Do keep coming, Take care... Shaad... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
|
'Bismil'
Offline
Posts: 773
Join Date: Mar 2006
Rep Power: 38
|
7th September 2011, 08:05 PM
Quote:
 god blessaapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
9th September 2011, 09:03 PM
Quote:
 baharhaal shukriyaa bahot bahot kalaam ko waqt dene ke liye... aate rahiye Shaad.... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 65
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: india
Rep Power: 17
|
10th September 2011, 05:56 AM
Quote:
pal pal sadiya si lage her sham begani ek tere aane ki aahat se chanchal naina bhari |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
10th September 2011, 08:44 AM
Quote:
shaad... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
10th September 2011, 08:46 AM
Quote:
Shaad. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 32
|
24th September 2011, 11:17 AM
Shaad - Well written... every writer has a strength.... yours lie in choice of words... great... keep writing....
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
25th September 2011, 01:12 PM
Quote:
Itnii tareef kar di aapne ke bas kyaa kahuN.. Aapki bareek nazroN ke liye intehaai shukrguzaar hooN.. aate rahiyegaa.. Shukriyaa Shaad... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
to feel & to be felt...
Offline
Posts: 1,311
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: On minds
Rep Power: 22
|
3rd October 2011, 07:16 PM
Aate nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N,
Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhte ho Mere Kalaam ko Wow Indeed it happensIs Dil ne maanaa hai agar Sarkaar Aap ko, To Aye Sanam Dheere zaraa KheeNcho Lagaam ko. Qatl... Good ending....that may prompt the beginning in someone's heart... ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
3rd October 2011, 10:10 PM
Quote:
may be it would help to become a beginning for a beautiful relation called Love but it totally depends on fate of a person... in my case, luck didn't support me and i was unable to utilize these lines... hope anyone else can use these to full his emotions with beauty... thanks Shaad... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
Aapki dost
Offline
Posts: 7,325
Join Date: Feb 2008
Rep Power: 57
|
4th October 2011, 06:51 PM
Aate nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N,
Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhte ho Mere Kalaam ko. GhazloN Mein merii jab huaa Zikre-Sanam kabhi, LafzoN meiN kho kar DhooNdtee ho apne Naam ko. wah wah!!...kya kehne...................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#18)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
5th October 2011, 07:23 PM
Quote:
Shukriyaa Zainy Sahiba.. Inaaayat aapki... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
