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Love geele panne pe likhi thi - 14th February 2013, 05:59 PM

Geele panne pe likhh thi ibarat apni,
Uske mitne se pehle koi mita na saka,

Likha tha chattan pe naam apna,
Uske tootne se pehle koi hata na saka,

Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka,

Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka,

Bizli see giri pyaar pe apne,
Uske chamakne se pehle koi bacha na saka.



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15th February 2013, 07:46 AM

good one....

aru ji daad hazir hai.

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15th February 2013, 09:02 AM

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Geele panne pe likhh thi ibarat apni,
Uske mitne se pehle koi mita na saka,

Likha tha chattan pe naam apna,
Uske tootne se pehle koi hata na saka,

Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka,

Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka,

Bizli see giri pyaar pe apne,
Uske chamakne se pehle koi bacha na saka.


Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka


waahhh Aru bhai bahot khoob kalaam likha hai aapne.. ye sher khaase pasand aaye....


Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka


is sher ne to rajinderseep bhai ki yaad dilaa di...

just kidding, pls dont mind rajinder bhai.....

bahot accha likha hai Arvind bhai, likhte rahiye......


Shaad...


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15th February 2013, 09:42 PM

Good one Aru ji..............................




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16th February 2013, 07:04 PM

Aru ji...indeed beautiul composition.

aap ka flow of words bahut bhata hai mujhe.

keep writing..
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19th February 2013, 09:52 PM

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good one....

aru ji daad hazir hai.

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Thanx rajinder jee...................



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Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka


waahhh Aru bhai bahot khoob kalaam likha hai aapne.. ye sher khaase pasand aaye....


Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka


is sher ne to rajinderseep bhai ki yaad dilaa di...

just kidding, pls dont mind rajinder bhai.....

bahot accha likha hai Arvind bhai, likhte rahiye......


Shaad...
Thanx sameer shaad jee........aur yaar kabhi to majak chhoda karo ....ha ha ha..



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