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Arrow dosti mein khata ki hai.... - 7th February 2005, 09:37 PM

dil ki baat shabdon mein dhal rahi hoon
dil ki baat shabdon mein dhal rahi hoon
tujhe is dil ki sachchi baat bata rahi hoon
kuch kehne ki khwahish hai
aaj use lafzon mein utar rahi hoon

dil aaj roo raha hai
mujhse bas yeh keh raha hai
aisa kyun hua??
jis dost ki dosti ka dava kiya
use hi pareshani mein akela chod diya
jiski har dhadkan ko pehchanne ka dava kiya
use hi museebat mein akela chod diya
jisse har dukh banta
usi ke dukh mein yeh shaamil kyun nahi hua
aisa kya daur tha ki hum aapni dosti bhool gaye
aisa kya mod tha ki hum tumhe hi bhool gaye

mafi bas aaj ye maangte hain
tum ek galti samajh ke maaf kardo
bas yehi hai jo aaj tumse maangte hai hum
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8th February 2005, 01:32 AM

Sonal ji,
Kya baat hai, Kitna accha likha hai. Keep writing!
   
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hi parulji

thank u so much
achcha laga jaanke ki aapko pasand aaya

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8th February 2005, 03:37 PM

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8th February 2005, 09:39 PM

hi abhishek

reply karne ke liye bahut babut shukriya
achcha laga!!!

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9th February 2005, 01:18 PM

Nice share
bahot khub bahot khob

KAASH K QUDRAT NE YE DIL NA DIYA HOTA
DENA HI THA TO IS KO PATHER BANAYA HOTA


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9th February 2005, 02:51 PM

Sonal Jee,

Bahut khoob


dil ki baat shabdon mein dhal rahi hoon
dil ki baat shabdon mein dhal rahi hoon
tujhe is dil ki sachchi baat bata rahi hoon
kuch kehne ki khwahish hai
aaj use lafzon mein utar rahi hoon


Kya baat hai....zara humein bhi toh bataayen ki kisko dil ki baat kahi jaa rahi hai...


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9th February 2005, 07:04 PM

Hi Sonal jee.

Bahoot hi achha likha hai aapne. Apni bhavnaon ko kafi khubsurati se kavita ka roop diya hai aapne. Iske liye aapko badhai. Dont worry. Hum insaano se hi galtiyan hoti hai. Apne galtion ko realize kia yeh koi kam nahi.


Keep it up.


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9th February 2005, 11:08 PM

hi taherji n khaksaarji

izzaat afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
achcha laga yeh jaanke ki aapko sher pasand aaya

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9th February 2005, 11:11 PM

hi prakashji

bahut bahut shukriya
aur jahan tak galtiyon ki baat hai, hum bhi yehi mante hain ki apni galtiyon ko realise karna hi apne mein achchi baaat hai

aur jab dil mein bhavnayein hoti hain to kisi naa kisi tarah se kalam ke zariye kagaz pe utar hi jaati hain

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10th February 2005, 12:33 AM

Hi,

A poet is made not of 5 ingerdiants but just one.... and that is feelings.... Pain makes one more sensitive and kind. U have here written quiet well how it feels like what u feel.

Good job

I believe -

dard aitbaar me hua karte hain
dusman yaar me hua karte hein
kabhi yeh samaj kar itmenaan mat karna
ki sabhi wafadar hua karte hai

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10th February 2005, 10:53 PM

hi

well thank u so much for appreciating
i believe the same that i poet can only b a poet if he/she is sensitive n has feelings

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11th February 2005, 05:32 AM

Hi,

Briliant .... this is really nice work...

Keep up the good work..

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12th February 2005, 12:33 PM

hi rohinji

bahut bahut shukriya

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