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karawa guzar gaye - 24th October 2002, 11:34 AM

hello friend

read this

meri mehboba ki tareef main
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kya shabab tha ki phool phool pyar kar utha
kya roop tha ki aaina bhi sihar utha
is taraf zameen or udhar asaman utha
tham kar zigar utah jo nazar mila utha
ek din magar yaha
aise kuch hawa chali
lut gayi kali kali or ghut gayi gali gali
or hum lute lute se
waqat se pite pite se
saas ki sharab ka khumar dekte rahe
karawa guzar gaya gubar dekhte rahe
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O MA GOD - 24th October 2002, 09:00 PM

O MY GOD HEY YAAR u hae written this one...it has touched my hrt..

hum bhi jaantey they kisiko jo hua aisey karte they
jab vvo hastey they phul bhi khila karte they,
aaj vo bhi nahi aur phool bhi nahi khiltey,
kyu ki aaj se vo aur hum aur nahi mila kartey

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Thumbs up gr8 - 24th October 2002, 09:21 PM

hi mr.ashiq
it's gr8 yaar!!!!!


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meri mehboba ki tareef main
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kya shabab tha ki phool phool pyar kar utha
kya roop tha ki aaina bhi sihar utha
is taraf zameen or udhar asaman utha
tham kar zigar utah jo nazar mila utha
ek din magar yaha
aise kuch hawa chali
lut gayi kali kali or ghut gayi gali gali
or hum lute lute se
waqat se pite pite se
saas ki sharab ka khumar dekte rahe
karawa guzar gaya gubar dekhte rahe
**********************************



phool phool bhi usko pyaar kar utha
.............................aaina bhi sihar uthaa
.......................................aasaman bhi khil uthaa
...........................................zameen bhi mehak uthi
.................................................a apka zigar or nazar usko dekhte hin
.............................har kali ghutt gayi
...................................galiyaana bhi ghut gayi
.........................................par aap lute lute se huye
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...................,,,,,,,,,,waq t pe pite pite se rahe
................................................sh araab ki khumaar dekhte rahe
.................................................. ...jisko dekhte dekhte hin
.................................................. ......kaarwaan gujar gaya.........


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6th October 2005, 06:53 PM

Bhadiya>>>>

Aur kya kaHuN ki hum waqai bebas haiN bohat ...

Bas dekhte hi reh jate hai ...

Aise hi likhte raho

Tumhara apna

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6th October 2005, 07:08 PM

wah bahut hi ahcha likha aashiq sahab bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap,bas dil khush ho gaya aapki is rachna ko padh kar.bahut hi ahcha likha hai aapne.

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Re: karawa guzar gaye - 7th October 2005, 09:54 AM

kya shabab tha ki phool phool pyar kar utha
kya roop tha ki aaina bhi sihar utha
is taraf zameen or udhar asaman utha
tham kar zigar utah jo nazar mila utha
ek din magar yaha
aise kuch hawa chali
lut gayi kali kali or ghut gayi gali gali
or hum lute lute se
waqat se pite pite se
saas ki sharab ka khumar dekte rahe
karawa guzar gaya gubar dekhte rahe

AASHIQ BHAI
BAHOOOT ACHI RACHNA PESH KI HAI AAPNE...magar aapne na jane kyun pooori nazm pesh nahin ki,,,,,,yeh nazm Gopaldas parsad "Neeraj" ki hai..film "nayi umar ki nayi fasal" mein Rafi saheb ka gaya yeh geet.." kaarwan gujar gaya gubaar dekhte rahe...".. se liya hai....yeh behad famous rachna hai neeraj saheb ki....agar aap poori nazm unke naam ke saaath pesh karte to aur bhi khushi hoti....
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manoj bhai
sabase pehle to der se wab dene ke liye mafi chonga par saath main yeh bhi ba atana chanoga ki apne sahi kaha hai ki yeh neeraj saba ki nazam hai par maine sirf do panktiya hi unki nazam se le hai karwa guzar gaya gubar dekhte rahe baki maine apne shabdon ko is nazam main pesh kiya hai mafi chahta hooin ki main in do panktion ko unke naam se pesh karna bhul gaya. chote bhai ki galti samaz ke maaf kar dijyega

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