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Love aa baith mere naal - 12th January 2008, 05:30 PM

hello everyone, how r u all

baithe-2 khyalon main ek aks ubhar kar aaya hai
phir zazbatoon ko hamne shabdon ka libaas pehnaya hai

peshe -ae- kidhmat hai


aa baith mere naal zara do gala karle
kaise main raha tere bin mera haal tu sun le

yaddon main teri zab bhi moti meri aankh se koi tapka hai
be-mausam ki barsaton main tan man mera bheega hai
bhige badan teri yadoon main gujre hai jo woh saal tu sunle
kaise main raha hooin tere bin mera haal tu sun le

kaise main raha tere bin mera haal tu sun le

na teri tasveer ko dekhon na tere khaton ko pad paon main
ki palken band main karlon to tuzhko aankhon main paon main
tuzhe aankhon main rakhe-2 bune kai khawab hai maine
mere khawabon se ho ke rubaro aa ek khawab tu bunle

kaise main raha tere bin mera haal tu sun le
   
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31st January 2008, 02:35 PM

good i like it very much,,,,keep writing ,,,,


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1st February 2008, 02:32 AM

very nicely written,
thanks for sharing it.

regards
aarya


khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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1st February 2008, 09:11 PM

Very Nice,share karne ke liye shukriya


Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
   
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3rd February 2008, 03:58 PM

kishore ji, aarya ji, ekdharkan ji, aap sabhi ke replie ke liye shukriya zaan kar accha laga ki aapko meri post pasand aayi. hausla afzai ke liye shukriya.

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