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Sad chand se battein - 30th August 2003, 10:30 PM

hi friends after a long time i am here hoping that my all friends willbe allright.
posting something for all of you
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dosto, ek baar main chand se bateein kar raha tha

maine poocha chand se tum kaise ho
chand ne kaha tumhere jaisa
maine kaha ho hi nahin sakta
chand boola sabit kar ke dikhao
maine kaha ha................
chand boola

jab tuze dard hua tune bahaye lakhon aason pyare
upar nazar maar yeh aason hai mere lakhon tare

tune dil par sahe lakhon zakham yaara
yeh jo daag dekh rahe ho yeh woh zakham hai jo mohabbat ne hamko maare

dard ko sahene ke liye tumne apne aap ko vyast(busy) kiya
muzhe dekho maine bhi to nirantar(regular) chelne ka pran hai liya.

aur bhi khubiya hai hum tum main ek jaisi
jaise khayi chot jigar par hum tumne ek jaisi
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doston ab aap hi bataye ki kya chand sahi hai agar ha to kyoun.
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jawab ke intzaar main
aapka
hara ashiq
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tuti phuti keh liya kerta hooin
dil ke jajbato ko likh liya karta hooin
muze to mallom nahin
dost kehte hain
ki thodi si shayri kar liya kerta hooin.
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31st August 2003, 11:51 PM

Ashiq ji
Likha to bohot khoob hai aaap ne.
Lekin chand ka dard,meri rai mein,may be aap ki rai aur doosron ki rai alag ho,sirf poetry mein hi ho sakta hai reality mein chand ke paas dil hi nahin hota to dard kahan se hoga.
But whatever description u gave in ur poem that was really nice.
Usey padhte hue ek pal yeh bhool sakta hai insaan ke chaand ka dil nahin hota.
Keep writing n smiling


~~~~~~~Khushiii~~~~~~~
smile n make others also smile

those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
the majestic walk
the cheerful talk
truly charming personality
Guess,thats enough abt me :D
   
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