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Post Khushboo - 24th July 2014, 07:04 PM

SOOKHI PANKHUDIYAAN GULAB KI DEKHI TO
DIL SE EK AWAAZ AAYI
Na Jane unme Aisa kya tha
Jaise vo mujhse kah rahi thi kuch
Kah rahi thi ki hamse kuch Sabak lo
Vaqt bahut takatvar hai samajh lo
Ek din tum bhi toot kar bikhar jaogi
Apne aapko apni hi shakh se alag paogi
Main udas thi meri ankho me nami thi
Aur nahi koi aas thi
Tabhi usane Dheere se mere kano me
Kuch kaha
Jise chchoo sako,usake liye mat udas ho
Aaj vo tumhara ho,kal kya pata
Tum hi na usake paas ho
Us khushboo ko chchoo Jo
Atma me basi hai..
Kyon ki vahi hai Jo shakh se alag nahi hoti
Vahi hai Jo kabhi apni pahchaan nahi khoti...
Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....



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24th July 2014, 11:20 PM

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SOOKHI PANKHUDIYAAN GULAB KI DEKHI TO
DIL SE EK AWAAZ AAYI
Na Jane unme Aisa kya tha
Jaise vo mujhse kah rahi thi kuch
Kah rahi thi ki hamse kuch Sabak lo
Vaqt bahut takatvar hai samajh lo
Ek din tum bhi toot kar bikhar jaogi
Apne aapko apni hi shakh se alag paogi
Main udas thi meri ankho me nami thi
Aur nahi koi aas thi
Tabhi usane Dheere se mere kano me
Kuch kaha
Jise chchoo sako,usake liye mat udas ho
Aaj vo tumhara ho,kal kya pata
Tum hi na usake paas ho
Us khushboo ko chchoo Jo
Atma me basi hai..
Kyon ki vahi hai Jo shakh se alag nahi hoti
Vahi hai Jo kabhi apni pahchaan nahi khoti...
Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....
kaafi kaam ke sabak liye aapne sukhi gulaab ki pankhudi se bahut achhi lagi aapki kavita


hum se bhulaya he nahin jaata ek mukhlis ka chehra,

log jigar wale hote hain jo roz naya mehboob dhoond lete hain..

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Smile shukriya - 27th July 2014, 11:12 AM

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Impressive..........your thoughts are commendable, the way u execute ur nazms is very captivating, u capture readers interest speaking abt me i just luv reading u.....keep writing.
Aadaab naaz ji aapne is simple si nazm ki itni tareef ki shukriya....aapke comments hamesha dil ko chchoo jane wale hote hain ..aur likhne ka hausala dete hai.......thanks



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28th July 2014, 09:37 AM

waaahhhh Madhu saahiba..... kyaa khoob kavita likhii hai aaapne....

behad maarmik, behad samvedansheel.... ehsaas dil ko chuu gaye...

likhtii rahen



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shukriya - 28th July 2014, 03:59 PM

[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';463535]waaahhhh Madhu saahiba..... kyaa khoob kavita likhii hai aaapne....

behad maarmik, behad samvedansheel.... ehsaas dil ko chuu gaye...

likhtii rahen

Tareef ke liye shukriya shaad ji........................



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4th August 2014, 02:26 PM

Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....

wahh! Madhu Jii,,

Kamal hi kamal hai...
saari ki saari Nazm bharpoor jazbaat liye hai!..

DherooN daad qabool kijiye,
khas kar ke quoted lines ke liye..

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Smile shukriya - 4th August 2014, 04:55 PM

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Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....

wahh! Madhu Jii,,

Kamal hi kamal hai...
saari ki saari Nazm bharpoor jazbaat liye hai!..

DherooN daad qabool kijiye,
khas kar ke quoted lines ke liye..

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,

Thank you hasan ji. .......



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kaafi kaam ke sabak liye aapne sukhi gulaab ki pankhudi se bahut achhi lagi aapki kavita
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Shukriya madishanu ji........



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Waah...behad aala khayalat hai....
Bohot aachi kavita...

Aapka apna
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Khushbu ..Shabd se sugandh ki or lejati aap ki ek ek pankti apne aap mein
khusboo ka ehsaas chorti aur na jane kyon anzaam ko baar baar phool ke agaas se jorti ...

Madhu ji aap ki soch ko salam ..

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Khushboo - 24th July 2014, 08:04 PM
SOOKHI PANKHUDIYAAN GULAB KI DEKHI TO
DIL SE EK AWAAZ AAYI
Na Jane unme Aisa kya tha
Jaise vo mujhse kah rahi thi kuch
Kah rahi thi ki hamse kuch Sabak lo
Vaqt bahut takatvar hai samajh lo
originally posted by Madhu

Ek din tum bhi toot kar bikhar jaogi
Apne aapko apni hi shakh se alag paogi
Main udas thi meri ankho me nami thi
Aur nahi koi aas thi
Tabhi usane Dheere se mere kano me
Kuch kaha
Jise chchoo sako,usake liye mat udas ho
Aaj vo tumhara ho,kal kya pata
Tum hi na usake paas ho
Us khushboo ko chchoo Jo
Atma me basi hai..
Kyon ki vahi hai Jo shakh se alag nahi hoti
Vahi hai Jo kabhi apni pahchaan nahi khoti...
Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....

Madhu ji aap ki yeh kavita kuch Adhyatam k kareeb lagi achi lagi...

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Waah...behad aala khayalat hai....
Bohot aachi kavita...

Aapka apna
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.........Shukriya bhushan jee........



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Khushbu ..Shabd se sugandh ki or lejati aap ki ek ek pankti apne aap mein
khusboo ka ehsaas chorti aur na jane kyon anzaam ko baar baar phool ke agaas se jorti ...

Madhu ji aap ki soch ko salam ..

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Sanjay jii...kavita ko pasand karne ke liye bahut abhari hoon aapki...yoon hee sath dete rahiye aage bhi..yahi vinti..



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Khushboo - 24th July 2014, 08:04 PM
SOOKHI PANKHUDIYAAN GULAB KI DEKHI TO
DIL SE EK AWAAZ AAYI
Na Jane unme Aisa kya tha
Jaise vo mujhse kah rahi thi kuch
Kah rahi thi ki hamse kuch Sabak lo
Vaqt bahut takatvar hai samajh lo
originally posted by Madhu

Ek din tum bhi toot kar bikhar jaogi
Apne aapko apni hi shakh se alag paogi
Main udas thi meri ankho me nami thi
Aur nahi koi aas thi
Tabhi usane Dheere se mere kano me
Kuch kaha
Jise chchoo sako,usake liye mat udas ho
Aaj vo tumhara ho,kal kya pata
Tum hi na usake paas ho
Us khushboo ko chchoo Jo
Atma me basi hai..
Kyon ki vahi hai Jo shakh se alag nahi hoti
Vahi hai Jo kabhi apni pahchaan nahi khoti...
Khushboo bano aur doosaron ke
Dil me bas jao.....

Madhu ji aap ki yeh kavita kuch Adhyatam k kareeb lagi achi lagi...

rajinderseep
namaskar rajinder ji....kavita ki ghahrai ko samajhne aur srahne ka bahut dhanywaad..

aage bhi meri koshishon ko apki rai ka intzaar rahega....

regards
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