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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
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ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.

beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.

mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.

ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.

beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!



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adaab shaad ji....

bahut khushi huyi bazm me aapki taza ghazal dekhkar kai baar padhi par thodi masroofiyat ke chalte subah se ab vaqt mila aane ka maufi chahoongi...yun to main kah bhi kya sakti hoon kalaam ki tareef me..aapka likha hamesha hee mere dil ko bahut pasand aata hai...

par aaj matla padhte hee ek chubhan sii mahsoos huyi....

dard aur bebasi ke ehsaas bakhoobhi bayaan huye hain ..aur jo asar matle ne dil pe chhoda maqta use aur ghahra kar gaya....

daad qubool kijiyega is behatreen peshash par..padhne ka mauka dete rahein....

zor e kalam aur zyada ho..

khush rahein..




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adaab shaad ji....

bahut khushi huyi bazm me aapki taza ghazal dekhkar kai baar padhi par thodi masroofiyat ke chalte subah se ab vaqt mila aane ka maufi chahoongi...yun to main kah bhi kya sakti hoon kalaam ki tareef me..aapka likha hamesha hee mere dil ko bahut pasand aata hai...

par aaj matla padhte hee ek chubhan sii mahsoos huyi....

dard aur bebasi ke ehsaas bakhoobhi bayaan huye hain ..aur jo asar matle ne dil pe chhoda maqta use aur ghahra kar gaya....

daad qubool kijiyega is behatreen peshash par..padhne ka mauka dete rahein....

zor e kalam aur zyada ho..

khush rahein..

behad shukriyaa aapka madhu saahibaa............... aap ne is darjaa kalaam ko pasand kiyaa aur apne khuloos se hame nawaaza uske liye main aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon........ aapka sath yunhi bana rahe...

aati rahiyegaa.....

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Kya khoob ghazal kaha aapne

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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.

mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.

ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.

beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!



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Kehte hai ki jab dard ki intehaa ho to lafz khud asardaar hone lagte hai, huu-ba-huu vaisi hi qalak ka asar chod gayi hai aapki yeh ghazal.

ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.


Dil ke malaal hai sab dil ki nagawaari har marasim ko tod dene waali majaal rakhti hai, kasak mein kitna asr hai is imteehaan se dil roz guzarta hai kabhi kargar hokar to kabhi sogwaar reh kar....

aapki is ghazal ko nacheez ka salaam.



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Kehte hai ki jab dard ki intehaa ho to lafz khud asardaar hone lagte hai, huu-ba-huu vaisi hi qalak ka asar chod gayi hai aapki yeh ghazal.

ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.


Dil ke malaal hai sab dil ki nagawaari har marasim ko tod dene waali majaal rakhti hai, kasak mein kitna asr hai is imteehaan se dil roz guzarta hai kabhi kargar hokar to kabhi sogwaar reh kar....

aapki is ghazal ko nacheez ka salaam.
behad inaayat aur behad shukriyaaa aapkaa mast saahab

jis andaaz se aapne kalaam ko apnaaya aur pasand kiyaa uske liye main aapkaa tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon....

tashreef laate rahiyegaa aur apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa

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Bohut pasand aayi aapki ghazal..

Daad kabool farmaiiye.
bahut bahut shukriyaaa aapkaa sarikaa ji........
passnd karne ke liye aur aapki daad ke liye tahe dik se shukrguzaar hoon....

aate rahiyegaa.....

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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
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mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
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ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.

beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!



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umdaah.. hamesha ki trh wahi roshni, wahi dard or wahi ek dil.. Shaad..

itne arse baad apki gazal padhi wahi sukoon dubara mehsus kiya dil mein.. yuhi likhte rahe kush rahe abaad rahe..


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umdaah.. hamesha ki trh wahi roshni, wahi dard or wahi ek dil.. Shaad..

itne arse baad apki gazal padhi wahi sukoon dubara mehsus kiya dil mein.. yuhi likhte rahe kush rahe abaad rahe..
bahut bahut shukriaa janaab.................... aap jaise dost hi sahaaraa hain udaas raahon ke......... aate rahiyegaa.

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Bahut hi shandaar aur khoobsurat kalaam......bhut pasand aaya hamen......bs padhe ja rhe hain aapko baar baar....dhero mubarakbaad shaad sahab


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wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

kya zabardast shair hai......Lajwaab.

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Shaad

Bahut Khoobsurat Rachna hay.Har ek lafz khoobsurat aur dard ke moti piroye hay.

Keep up the good work.

Di

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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.

mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.

ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.

haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.

beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!



Shaad....



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Shaad bhai

Namaste

Aapko padhnaa hameshaa se achchha lagtaa hai... bahot behterin andaaz ..dil se daad aur duaaen

Aapka

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Shaad

Bahut Khoobsurat Rachna hay.Har ek lafz khoobsurat aur dard ke moti piroye hay.

Keep up the good work.

Di
sukanya dee..... thanks for coming

bahut khushi hui aaj aapko is post par dekh kar aur sabse acchaa ye jaankar lagaa ke apako ye choti si koshish pasandaa gayee.... shukriya tahe dil se

aati rahiyegaa , hausla abadhaate rahiyegaa...

Shaad........


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Shaad bhai

Namaste

Aapko padhnaa hameshaa se achchha lagtaa hai... bahot behterin andaaz ..dil se daad aur duaaen

Aapka

Dhaval
Dhaval bhai.... bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka jo aapne waqt diyaa aur ise padhaa pasand kiyaa... aate rahiyeagaa......

aapkee daad tahe dil se kubool................

Shaad........


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Aaj bahauat-bahaut samay baad yahan aana hua aur in panktiyon per dhyaan gaya.............jo bahaut hee salikey se kahin gayi hai.
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Namaskaar Shaad
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Inhe parhna sach mein sukhad raha........yoonhi likhtey rahein

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Vipin bhaiya aadaab......

kaise hain aap, arse baad aaj apko jo bazm me maujood paaya to yaqeenan mere khushi ka thikana nahi rahaa...

muaafii ka talabgaar hoon jo aapki is post par itnii derii se nazar gayee....

aapki daad sar aankhon par, aur guzaarish hai ke aapka aana jaana yunhii bana rahe.... aate rahiyegaa

Shaad.......


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