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Smile Khat aane lage....... - 19th August 2003, 11:13 PM

Jahan Ped Par Chaar Daane Lage,
Hazaaron Taraf Se Nishaane Lage.

Huyee Shaam, Yaadon Ke Ek Gaaon Se,
Parinde Udaasi Ke Aane Lage.

Ghadi Do Ghadi Mujhe Palkon Pe Rakh,
Yahan Aate Aate Zamaane Lage.

Kabhi Bastiyan Dil Ki Yun Bhi Basi,
Dukaanein Khuli, Kaarkhaane Lage.

Wahin Zard Patton Ka Kaleen Hai,
Gulon Ke Jahan Shamiyaane Lage.

Padhaai Likhaai Ka Mausam Kahan,
Kitaabon Mein Khat Aane Jaane Lage.

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20th August 2003, 07:57 AM

Pari Jee, achha likhha hein aapne.
Andaz aapka bayan karne ki bhi achhe lage.
Likhte rahiyega. Thanks. Take care.
God bless.
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Re: Khat aane lage....... - 20th August 2003, 11:09 AM

Jahan Ped Par Chaar Daane Lage,
Hazaaron Taraf Se Nishaane Lage.

Huyee Shaam, Yaadon Ke Ek Gaaon Se,
Parinde Udaasi Ke Aane Lage.

Padhaai Likhaai Ka Mausam Kahan,
Kitaabon Mein Khat Aane Jaane Lage

hi pari ji
agar mein jyada tareef karunga to aap kahengi ki mein aap ko khush karne ke liye keh raha hoon....magar yakeen janiye,waqai behad acha kalaam likha hai aapne.bas aap se guzarish hai..aise hi likhte rahiye...daad kabool farmayen..
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bhut khoobh - 20th August 2003, 12:17 PM

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hello - 20th August 2003, 04:37 PM

pari ji,

behad pasand aaya mujhe. aapki yah rachana kabeele tarif hai. laga hi nahi ki yah shayri hai, laga jaise main shayri, nahi kuchh aur dekh raha hoon. really, thanks for this cute words.



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hi - 20th August 2003, 05:34 PM

Hi shimul ji,
Koi reply de ya naa de...sabse pehle aapka hi reply milta hai...bahut achha lagta hai padh kar..aise hi hamesha meri hosla afjai karte rahiyega...

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hi - 20th August 2003, 05:37 PM

hello lovebug ji,
Welcome to shayri.com.....bahut achha pic hai
aapka.....well aate hi aapne meri hi rachna padi aur wo aapko pasand aa gayi to chalo ye achha hai...kam se kam mera first impression to kharab nahi pada..........
take care..
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Akant ji,
Kaise hai aap??Aur kya chal raha hai aajkal........amber ji kaise hai....unhe mera hello kahiyega...
Aapko meri ye rachna pasand aayi....thanx for that..........aise hi likhte rahiyega..
bye and take care..
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hi - 21st August 2003, 12:58 AM

hello pari ji,
Kaisi ho aap...hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi aapki hi gazal mujhe sabse umdaa lagii........padhai mein jara busy hu isliye roz site pe aa nahi sakti isliye jab bhi aati hoon aapki saari gazlein sabse pehle padhti hoon...is shayri ki ye lines behad achhi lagi..

Padhaai Likhaai Ka Mausam Kahan,
Kitaabon Mein Khat Aane Jaane Lage.

aapke lafj aise lagte hai jaise mere hi jajbaat ho........aise hi likhti rahiyega hamesha..

aapki ek fen....
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Smile shukriya - 21st August 2003, 03:07 PM

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hello - 21st August 2003, 03:15 PM

Pari ji,

main achchha hoon. asha kerta hoon ki aap bhi achchhi hongi. vahi purana apana kaam chal raha hai , kuchh naya kerne ke pichhe lage hue hain.

Amber ji achchhe hain. maine abhi abhi unko aapaka hello kah diya. vo bhi aapko hello bole hain. unki ANHAD magjine publish ho gayi hai, jiske ki vo khud hi sampadak hain. unki kavitaaye kai magzino mein publish huie hai. so yah good news aapke liye . unka contact number main yahi likh raha hoon. ho sake to kabhi contact ker sakti hai aap. number hai..

mobile no. 09830275762

asha kerta hoon ki aap enjoy kerengi.
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21st August 2003, 03:42 PM

Dear Pari Jee, mein toh sath deti rahungi tab tak jab tak Khudane chaha. Aap ka reply ke liye sukriya. Aap hume aapna dost samjhiyega. Hum toh hein hi aapki dost.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
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hi - 22nd August 2003, 04:12 AM

Thanx a lot mansha ji akant ji lovebug ji aur shimul ji........aap sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya ada karti hoon...aur hamesha kosish karungi behtar likne ki.........

Akant ji ..amber ji ki magzine ka sun ke waqui bahut achha laga...
mein kosish karungi phone karne ki..........aap unhe is kaamyabi per meri taraf se badhai dijiyega........
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helloo... - 27th August 2003, 07:43 PM

Dear Pari....kese hooo!!!! badi dilkash hai teri har ada par dil bhi diya hota tujhe..??????

yaar hum ap ki post ki tarif karne nahi aaye hai ye batane aaye hai kii ye jo kalaam ap ne post kiya hai unn shayr sahaaB ka naam bhi sath mai likhdete tau baRaye mehaRbani hotii...khaiR ye kaam hum kiye dete hai...

janaaB Bashir badr sahab ka ye kalaam hai aor sabut bhi chode jaa rahe hai apke doston ke liye...

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