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*****Dil toota hai*****
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Arrow *****Dil toota hai***** - 10th November 2001, 03:25 PM

zindagi ne yaar dard diya mujhko dil mera toota hai
maut pyari zindagi bhari mujhko dil mera toota hai

aarzoo thi meri ke ek din woh mere honge
ke ab woh na mile mujhko dil mera toota hai

tanhai ban chuki hai dost meri
mehfil na bhaaye mujhko dil mera toota hai

taqdeer se naraaz nahi hai aashiq
aap jo na mile mujhko dil mera toota hai

by: Aman (aashiq)


zamana saara aashiq ko diwana kehta hai
aashiq saare zamaane ko diwana kehta hai

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this one is great too
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Thumbs up this one is great too - 13th November 2001, 09:07 PM

yeh wala bhi kamal ka tha, aap bohot acha likhte hai...


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thanx - 15th November 2001, 02:22 AM

thanx for liking my poetry.......
aap ki tareef se dil ki kali khili hai......shayari ki duniya mein izzat mili hai


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wah ji wah
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wah ji wah - 15th November 2001, 08:53 PM

kya baat kahe hai, vasie jo shayer hote ha na, unko khilne ke liye kisse ke tareef ke jarurat nahin parti....


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tareef - 16th November 2001, 03:27 AM

Sonica ji:
tareef jo koi kare koi baat nahi
tareef jo aap kar gaye
aashiq ke liye choti baat nahi

adaab


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lol - 16th November 2001, 08:43 PM

Kya hua aashiq ji,??? Mere tareef mei konse special baat hai... I only praise what i like... aapke achi lagte hai eisilye, reply to every single one of them.. chaliyeh likhte rahiyeh..


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:) - 17th November 2001, 02:09 AM

Sonica ji:

taareef koi kare kitni bhi kare koi farq nahi padta
shaayar aap hai dard aap samajte hai
badalti hai duniya aap ke kehne se farq yahi padta

adaab
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kafffi bade bade baatein karte hai aap
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kafffi bade bade baatein karte hai aap - 19th November 2001, 08:39 PM

very sweet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


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