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Kaanton ki chuban humesha rehti hai phoolon ki khooshboo nahi
Gum saath hota hai humesha magar khushi nahi
tute aaene ko jod bhi doge to lakeer reh jaayegi
Tuta jo mera dil hai pyaar to phir bhi tumse yeh karega hi

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hello rohin ji...

kaanto ki chubahan gum darshata hai...
toota aayina zindagi ko tukdo mein bikharta dikhata hai...
pyaar to aakhir pyaar hai....
toota jo dil to gum aanko mein dikhata hai....

ek choti kosish ki hai....
   
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11th January 2005, 04:37 PM

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Kaanton ki chuban humesha rehti hai phoolon ki khooshboo nahi
Gum saath hota hai humesha magar khushi nahi
tute aaene ko jod bhi doge to lakeer reh jaayegi
Tuta jo mera dil hai pyaar to phir bhi tumse yeh karega hi

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hello rohin ji...

kaanto ki chubahan gum darshata hai...
toota aayina zindagi ko tukdo mein bikharta dikhata hai...
pyaar to aakhir pyaar hai....
toota jo dil to gum aanko mein dikhata hai....

ek choti kosish ki hai....
Sahi jawab priyankaji,

Jaise ki meine kuch aakhri sheron mein kaha,

Is thread mein jo likha hai woh shayad mein kabhi aur na kehta.
Likha isliye tha kyonki yeh mere dil pe gujar raha tha.

Aapki koshish vakhai bahut aachi hai.

Kaanton ke bin phool ke kya pehchaan
Tuta ho aaena phir bhi hai har ek min ek hi naam
Pyaar to pyaar hi hai
Gum mein doobe dil ko bhi aakhir ubhare ga pyaar

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Re: ...begana bana diya - 11th January 2005, 11:37 PM

Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

Hey, aise kabhi mat likhna...samjhe? I am a very lucky person **I know You wrote above about me**As You been there for me I hope I can be there for You too*Ab keya kahoun? Thank You kehna padega...? Nahin kehti...lol...Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...? Waise ek baat hain, You are a True Friend...Now, Don't say a word...Got my point? Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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Re: Re: ...begana bana diya - 11th January 2005, 11:51 PM

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Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

Hey, aise kabhi mat likhna...samjhe? I am a very lucky person **I know You wrote above about me**As You been there for me I hope I can be there for You too*Ab keya kahoun? Thank You kehna padega...? Nahin kehti...lol...Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...? Waise ek baat hain, You are a True Friend...Now, Don't say a word...Got my point? Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......
To kya socha tha aapne,

Hai yeh un sabhi doston k liye jo apna gum chupane ki koshish karte hain. Tum ne bhi ki. Magar pakdi gayin.

Hum aise hi kissi ko apna dost nahi kehte.
Dost keh ke begana nahi karte.
Asson poochte hain dost ke
hum gum cheen lete hain unke
aur Khushiyan hi sirf hain dete
Maut aajaye toh usse bhi lad lenge
Magar apne dost ko kuch hone nahi denge


Shayad is baar lavz theek na ho magar jald hi is kalam ko ek behtar roop mein pesh karoonga

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...begana bana diya - 12th January 2005, 01:04 AM

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To kya socha tha aapne,

Hai yeh un sabhi doston k liye jo apna gum chupane ki koshish karte hain. Tum ne bhi ki. Magar pakdi gayin.

Hum aise hi kissi ko apna dost nahi kehte.
Dost keh ke begana nahi karte.
Asson poochte hain dost ke
hum gum cheen lete hain unke
aur Khushiyan hi sirf hain dete
Maut aajaye toh usse bhi lad lenge
Magar apne dost ko kuch hone nahi denge


Shayad is baar lavz theek na ho magar jald hi is kalam ko ek behtar roop mein pesh karoonga

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Dosti aise hi honi chahiye Mujhe tou bohot achha laga..Younhi likhte rehna..Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**? Karan Jee ki shayri par replies..Nice to see.. Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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Re: ...begana bana diya - 12th January 2005, 01:13 AM

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Dosti aise hi honi chahiye Mujhe tou bohot achha laga..Younhi likhte rehna..Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**? Karan Jee ki shayri par replies..Nice to see.. Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......
hi Shimul,


Well thanks. Keep reading and then i am sure u will feel bettter so which one was the best here???

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12th January 2005, 01:20 AM

Best here? I will tell You later on, ok? Iss waqt tou yehi last jo Tumnein likhha wohi achha laga Duwaaon ke saath ijaazay...**Take Care...God bless You.

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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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ROhin - 12th January 2005, 10:27 AM

accha likha hai.. bahoot deep
waise to hum kissi ke kalaam per jaya nahi karte
magar...
aapka naam dekhte he .. ruk gaye padhne ke liye
Very nice one..
Halka sa tabassum, labhon pe laakar
bhigi hui palkon ko chupana hunar hai,
Hawaaon se ladker,mitti ke gharonde
banana hunar hai,
izzajat
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Sahi jawab priyankaji,

Jaise ki meine kuch aakhri sheron mein kaha,

Is thread mein jo likha hai woh shayad mein kabhi aur na kehta.
Likha isliye tha kyonki yeh mere dil pe gujar raha tha.

Aapki koshish vakhai bahut aachi hai.

Kaanton ke bin phool ke kya pehchaan
Tuta ho aaena phir bhi hai har ek min ek hi naam
Pyaar to pyaar hi hai
Gum mein doobe dil ko bhi aakhir ubhare ga pyaar

Hope you liek my reply

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rohinji... aadab....

aapka jawab superb tha....
pyaar woh hai jo hado tak rulaye....
pyaar woh hai jo hado tak hasaye...
pyaar aakhir imtahan hi hai.....
jisme koi haar to koi jeet jaaye.....

rohinji bhale hi haar ho ya jeet is exam mein aapki bas itna yaad rakhna neeche yeh zameen aur upar ka aakash humesha aapke saath hai... matlab hum aapke dost jo zameen par rehte hai aur upar aasmaan mein rehne wale bhagwan .....

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12th January 2005, 03:28 PM

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accha likha hai.. bahoot deep
waise to hum kissi ke kalaam per jaya nahi karte
magar...
aapka naam dekhte he .. ruk gaye padhne ke liye
Very nice one..
Halka sa tabassum, labhon pe laakar
bhigi hui palkon ko chupana hunar hai,
Hawaaon se ladker,mitti ke gharonde
banana hunar hai,
izzajat
karan.q

Karan ji shukriya aap yahan aaye aur aapko humara kalam pasand aaya

Bhai hunar hum mein kahan.

Khair aate rahiyega.

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rohinji... aadab....

aapka jawab superb tha....
pyaar woh hai jo hado tak rulaye....
pyaar woh hai jo hado tak hasaye...
pyaar aakhir imtahan hi hai.....
jisme koi haar to koi jeet jaaye.....

rohinji bhale hi haar ho ya jeet is exam mein aapki bas itna yaad rakhna neeche yeh zameen aur upar ka aakash humesha aapke saath hai... matlab hum aapke dost jo zameen par rehte hai aur upar aasmaan mein rehne wale bhagwan .....

haste rahiye....

bye tata
Priyanka ji,

aadab

Ab kya kahein aapko.
Aap iss imtihan mein zaroor pass ho jayengi

Pyaar koi imtihan nahi,
Pyaar koi khel nahi
Yeh ek ehsaas hai
Ek din aapko bhi hoga...

Keep writing and keep coming again

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Priyanka ji,

aadab

Ab kya kahein aapko.
Aap iss imtihan mein zaroor pass ho jayengi

Pyaar koi imtihan nahi,
Pyaar koi khel nahi
Yeh ek ehsaas hai
Ek din aapko bhi hoga...

Keep writing and keep coming again

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hello rohin ji,

thanks for replying so quickly.....
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Shukriya - 12th January 2005, 04:08 PM

priyanka jain, friendnidhi, Shimul, yashmax, Pulkit_gupta, devdaas, meena chheda, $hivani, disha for u, banjara'''', chandni_jain, karan q

aur un sabka jinhone yeh thread padha

Tahe dil se har ek ka mein shukriya karna chahoonga.

Aap logon ne jawab likhe hosla badhaya..kuch logon ki issi bahane dost mili...Yeh mere liye bahut hi yaad gar thread rahega...

Is thread mein mera aakhri kalam ummed hai aap sab ko yeh yaad rahega.. Yeh shayad meine peehle bhi kahin post kiya tha..magar yeh aap logon ke liye doobara kar raha hoon


yaad aate hain woh lamhe
beetgaye jo haste gaate
yaaron ka tha saath humesha
uchalna kudna masti karma
na koi chinta thi
na koi pareshaani
lagta tha hai sab apna
yeh dharti aur yeh amber uncha
barish ki woh rimjhim boondein
aur unmein terti kagaz ki nauein
Woh khil khilake hasna
roona dhona gana bajana
Doston ki woh toil
shararaton ki thi potli
Chachi ka humein woh datna
Aur humara usse sata kar bhag jaana
Raaton ko woh taaron ko takna
Chand ko apni muthi mein qaid karna chahna
Laut jaaon uss bachpan mein
yehi khayal aata hai har din

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12th January 2005, 04:13 PM

HEY ROHIN,

I DONT UNDERSTAND Y DO U DO THIS ALWAYS.....

I M ANGRY WITH U THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL THREAD ONE OF MY FAVOURITE ONE AND WHY ARE U DOING THIS.....

I M SORRY BUT NEW READERS WILL BE UNAWARE OF SOOOOO WONDERFUL WORDS.... ANYWAYS ITS UR WISH NA.....

   
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HEY ROHIN,

I DONT UNDERSTAND Y DO U DO THIS ALWAYS.....

I M ANGRY WITH U THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL THREAD ONE OF MY FAVOURITE ONE AND WHY ARE U DOING THIS.....

I M SORRY BUT NEW READERS WILL BE UNAWARE OF SOOOOO WONDERFUL WORDS.... ANYWAYS ITS UR WISH NA.....

Baap Re Baap itna gussa...Toba re toba..

Bahi hume jaldi thodi na marna hai jo ek khoobsurat ladki ka dil ko tod dein..

Toh bus aap ke liye ek aur kalam is thread par....Umeed hai aap apni narazgi chod kar yahan reply karne zaroor aayengi..

Haan doston Priyanka ji ke liye yh thread mein band nahi kar sakta aur ab yeh thread kabhi band hone nahi doonga...Akhir ek dost ne dost se kuch manga hai... mein to ek phakir hoon kya doonga do bol de raha hoon....

Kabar par mere jo phool hain
Kisi ne yaad kiya tha humein
uski nishani hain
Laga tha jab hum yeh duniya chod chale
Na koi apna hai, na koi yaad karne wala hai
Laga tha sabne humein
...begana bana diya hai.


Hope everyone likes it. Please do come here and keep this thread alive. As I don't wanna see a friend again cry..

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Re: Shukriya - 13th January 2005, 08:05 AM

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priyanka jain, friendnidhi, Shimul, yashmax, Pulkit_gupta, devdaas, meena chheda, $hivani, disha for u, banjara'''', chandni_jain, karan q

aur un sabka jinhone yeh thread padha

Tahe dil se har ek ka mein shukriya karna chahoonga.

Aap logon ne jawab likhe hosla badhaya..kuch logon ki issi bahane dost mili...Yeh mere liye bahut hi yaad gar thread rahega...

Is thread mein mera aakhri kalam ummed hai aap sab ko yeh yaad rahega.. Yeh shayad meine peehle bhi kahin post kiya tha..magar yeh aap logon ke liye doobara kar raha hoon


yaad aate hain woh lamhe
beetgaye jo haste gaate
yaaron ka tha saath humesha
uchalna kudna masti karma
na koi chinta thi
na koi pareshaani
lagta tha hai sab apna
yeh dharti aur yeh amber uncha
barish ki woh rimjhim boondein
aur unmein terti kagaz ki nauein
Woh khil khilake hasna
roona dhona gana bajana
Doston ki woh toil
shararaton ki thi potli
Chachi ka humein woh datna
Aur humara usse sata kar bhag jaana
Raaton ko woh taaron ko takna
Chand ko apni muthi mein qaid karna chahna
Laut jaaon uss bachpan mein
yehi khayal aata hai har din

Thanks

I owe it all to all my friends here
Rohin

rohin,

bachpan ki yaado ko is tarah piroya hai tumne .. ke maano abhi ki baat hai.
khush raho.

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13th January 2005, 08:07 AM

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Hi Everyone,

ek aur dil ki awaaz.

Umeed hai aage ki tarah aap logon ko yeh pasand aayega.

In the past few weeks lot has happened in my life.
In view of which this thread seems so painful.
But I am determined not to let this control my life and move on.

So here is one which hopefully will bring a smile to everyone.

Andhiyan aayenge, Toofan aayega
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Tapti dharti registan ki milengi
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Barfele pahado ke uchaiyan hongi
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Aayenge rah kanton bhari
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Kyunki...
jisne mani nahi hai haar
Har mushkil ko banaya aasan
Hai Jeet ta woh hi har baar
Mila ussi ko hai bhagwan

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rohin,

manjil mile na mile chalte rahna hai
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13th January 2005, 12:51 PM

Meena di,

Aap ka tahe dil se shukriya. Haan zaroor hum aage badte rahenge.

Aap aaye to bahar aaye.
Isliye zaroor aate rahiyega

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Re: Shukriya - 13th January 2005, 08:23 PM

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aur un sabka jinhone yeh thread padha

Tahe dil se har ek ka mein shukriya karna chahoonga.

Aap logon ne jawab likhe hosla badhaya..kuch logon ki issi bahane dost mili...Yeh mere liye bahut hi yaad gar thread rahega...

Is thread mein mera aakhri kalam ummed hai aap sab ko yeh yaad rahega.. Yeh shayad meine peehle bhi kahin post kiya tha..magar yeh aap logon ke liye doobara kar raha hoon


yaad aate hain woh lamhe
beetgaye jo haste gaate
yaaron ka tha saath humesha
uchalna kudna masti karma
na koi chinta thi
na koi pareshaani
lagta tha hai sab apna
yeh dharti aur yeh amber uncha
barish ki woh rimjhim boondein
aur unmein terti kagaz ki nauein
Woh khil khilake hasna
roona dhona gana bajana
Doston ki woh toil
shararaton ki thi potli
Chachi ka humein woh datna
Aur humara usse sata kar bhag jaana
Raaton ko woh taaron ko takna
Chand ko apni muthi mein qaid karna chahna
Laut jaaon uss bachpan mein
yehi khayal aata hai har din

Thanks

I owe it all to all my friends here
Rohin


Hey Rohin,

aap ne iss thread ko itne pyar se shuhru kiya hai to aap iss thread ko thehra mat dena.......Itne acche nazm aur sher padhne milte hai hume to hum dosto ke saath aise to na kariye mere bhai..

And thanks to Priyanka ji ...unke waajahe se thread end nahi ho raha hai........Shukriya sabhi doston ka......

And may this thread remain as a special thread as in the process of reading this thread I found good friends.......

So Keep writing buddy......

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Hey Rohin,

aap ne iss thread ko itne pyar se shuhru kiya hai to aap iss thread ko thehra mat dena.......Itne acche nazm aur sher padhne milte hai hume to hum dosto ke saath aise to na kariye mere bhai..

And thanks to Priyanka ji ...unke waajahe se thread end nahi ho raha hai........Shukriya sabhi doston ka......

And may this thread remain as a special thread as in the process of reading this thread I found good friends.......

So Keep writing buddy......

tc
bye
have a wonderful time......
Hi yogesh,

Well sirf priyanka ke liye hi nahi kuch au doston ne mujhe bahut gali di thi yeh post ko rokne ke liye. Magar ab doston ne kaha hai to mein kaun hota hoon rokne wala.

Well keep coming and i will try and match ur expectations from the thread

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Aap logon ke liye meri kuch aur panktiyan,

I am not sure if it is very simple to understand one of my most favorite composition till date.... But I hope you all like it


Duur duur tak bus registan
Tapti hui dharti
Jawala ugalta suraj
Na koi badal aasman mein
Jalla de sabko aise hawa
Aankhon mein thakan
Hoton par dararein
Paseene mein latpat badan
Saanse kapti hui
Dhadkane rukti hui
Jaan thi ab jani
Duur dikha kuch pani
Chehre par ek aasha
Utha, ladkhadaya, bhaaga
Nirasha ke rekha the mathe par
kuch nahi tha, bas banzar dharti
Do boond pani ke liye
taras raha tha kanth
Bus ab aur nahi...
Himat ab mujh mein nahi..
Magar asha abhi khoi nahi...
Utha dekha duur tak
Mil gayi manzil apni
Samundar paani hi paani...

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hi rohin,
aap bhi bahut accha likhte hai.par aapke sab sher mein bahut dard hai,shayad isiliye itne khubsurat hain.


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aap bhi bahut accha likhte hai.par aapke sab sher mein bahut dard hai,shayad isiliye itne khubsurat hain.
Hi Sohini,


Dard mein insaan tanha hota hai....
Aur jab woh tanha hota hai to woh
to woh bahut sochta hai...
Aur shayad tabhi yeh khayal uske zeham mein aate hain

Aap ko mere kalam pasand aaye unme jo dard hai owh dikha...Uske liye shukriya


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Baap Re Baap itna gussa...Toba re toba..

Bahi hume jaldi thodi na marna hai jo ek khoobsurat ladki ka dil ko tod dein..

Toh bus aap ke liye ek aur kalam is thread par....Umeed hai aap apni narazgi chod kar yahan reply karne zaroor aayengi..

Haan doston Priyanka ji ke liye yh thread mein band nahi kar sakta aur ab yeh thread kabhi band hone nahi doonga...Akhir ek dost ne dost se kuch manga hai... mein to ek phakir hoon kya doonga do bol de raha hoon....

Kabar par mere jo phool hain
Kisi ne yaad kiya tha humein
uski nishani hain
Laga tha jab hum yeh duniya chod chale
Na koi apna hai, na koi yaad karne wala hai
Laga tha sabne humein
...begana bana diya hai.


Hope everyone likes it. Please do come here and keep this thread alive. As I don't wanna see a friend again cry..

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thank u dear friend rohin.....

thanks a lot

aapne hume acha friend mana is liye bhi aur humare liye yeh thread shuru rakha is liye bhi....

aapka sher bahut khoob tha..

wajud nahi wo hasti kis kaam ki,
maja na de woh masti kis kaam ki,
jahan dil na lage wo basti kis kaam ki,
aur aapka kaha na maane woh dosti kis kaam ki.....

so i think aapne humara kaha maanke dosti proove kar di....

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hi - 17th January 2005, 04:59 PM

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thank u dear friend rohin.....

thanks a lot

aapne hume acha friend mana is liye bhi aur humare liye yeh thread shuru rakha is liye bhi....

aapka sher bahut khoob tha..

wajud nahi wo hasti kis kaam ki,
maja na de woh masti kis kaam ki,
jahan dil na lage wo basti kis kaam ki,
aur aapka kaha na maane woh dosti kis kaam ki.....

so i think aapne humara kaha maanke dosti proove kar di....

shukriya
Thanks Priyanka,

Naraz hone ka haq shayad ladkiyon ko hi hota hai...Kyon?????

Ek naya kalam

Yaadon ko apne man ki ret se mita do
Gum ke sagar ko aasoon mein baha do
Dard ke awaaz ko hassi ke shor se daba do
Udass chehre ko muskan se khila do
Andhere ke saye ko Din ke ujale se hata do
Kyunki aaj , Aaj ek Naya din ek nayi shuruat hai...

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Hi Chandni,

aap ko yahan par post kiye hue kuch khayal ache lage...Yeh jaan kar mujhe bahut acha laga....Ummed to yehi hai dost ki yeh thread humesha chalta rahe...

Mein na rahon to kya gum hai
Magar yeh carvan chalta rahega
Mera saath chut jaaye to kya hua
Mera saaya humesha saath hoga
Main nahi to koi aur shayar
Yeh afsano ka silsila kayam rakhega..

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Bhai Rohin!

Sunne me aya ke tum is therad ko band karne ki socha rahe tthe? kyun meri collectrion ko badhne se rokna chahte ho? Good that u changed ur mind


yaad aate hain woh lamhe
beetgaye jo haste gaate
yaaron ka tha saath humesha
uchalna kudna masti karma
na koi chinta thi
na koi pareshaani
lagta tha hai sab apna

Nice Words.. and very true.... Bachpan ke din alag hi thhe...

Yaadon ko apne man ki ret se mita do
Gum ke sagar ko aasoon mein baha do
Dard ke awaaz ko hassi ke shor se daba do
Udass chehre ko muskan se khila do
Andhere ke saye ko Din ke ujale se hata do
Kyunki aaj , Aaj ek Naya din ek nayi shuruat hai...

Thats better....

Ek sher tumhare liye... Not written by me.. but I like it a lot...

Koi tadbir ki naa koshish ki,
Khud ba khud chha gayi thi shabanam si,
Ek sangat hai, ek bandish hai,
Dosti apani hai tarnnum si


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Koi tadbir ki naa koshish ki,
Khud ba khud chha gayi thi shabanam si,
Ek sangat hai, ek bandish hai,
Dosti apani hai tarnnum si


Hi Pulkit,

Sach this sher is really sweet... thanks for adding it to the thread..


Raat abhi hai bakki..
Paymane mein hai jam bhi baki..
Bahut hain abhi baatein baki...
Sheron ki kaami nahi hogi...
kyunki Zindagi mein gum hain baki..
behta hai dard ban ankhon ka pani...


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Thanks Priyanka,

Naraz hone ka haq shayad ladkiyon ko hi hota hai...Kyon?????

Ek naya kalam

Yaadon ko apne man ki ret se mita do
Gum ke sagar ko aasoon mein baha do
Dard ke awaaz ko hassi ke shor se daba do
Udass chehre ko muskan se khila do
Andhere ke saye ko Din ke ujale se hata do
Kyunki aaj , Aaj ek Naya din ek nayi shuruat hai...

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thanks kis baat ka rohin.....

ab aap kehte hai to maan lete hai ki naaraz hone ka haq sirf hum ladkiyo ko hia....

mohabbat ke naam se darte the,
dil ki dhadkan dhadka gaya koi...
hum anjani raho pe chal rahe the,
achanak manzil dikha gaya koi.....
   
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Hi - 17th January 2005, 06:40 PM

Hi Priyanka,

Raah ka to pata nahi magar dost zaroor mil gayein hain...


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ROHIN JI AB JAB DOST MIL GAYE HAI TO UNHE PAKADKAR RAKHNA JAANE NA DENA.....

LIJIYE MUJHE AAPKE LIYE EKDAM SAHI MESS YAAD AAYA YEH MUJHE EK SMS MEIN AAYA THA....

IF U FIND A FRIEND ,
HOLD ON TIO HIM WITH BOTH YOUR HANDS..
COZGOOD FRIEND COMES ONLY ONCE IN LIFETIME..
NOW.....

LEAVE ME YAAR SAB DEKH RAHE HAI...

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Hi Priyanka,

Shaayad kuch kahoon jo theek na ho magar galti sudhar dena

Badalon ko kaid nahi kar sakta...
Hawa ke rukh ko badal nahi sakta
Paani ke bahaw ko rok nahi sakta...
Samay ke paaye ko thaam nahi sakta
Paanche ke udaan kam nahi kar sakta
To phir to tum sab dost ho mere ...
tumhara, badhna, uddan, bahaw, rukh,
yeh sab mein aise rok sakta hoon???
Tum humesha dost ho mere aur rahoge
Tumhe mein yaad rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum humesha mujhe yaad rahoge
Ek Dost...

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HI ROHIN,

I HOPE WE WILL ALWAYS BE FRIEND.. AND EVEN U WILL BE ALWAYS REMEMBERED BY ME....

NOW 4 U,

A SMILE IS THE LIGHTENING SYSTEM OF FACE,
COOLING SYSTEM OF HEAD,
AND HEALING SYSTEM OF HEART,
SO KEEP SMILING.. ALL DAY AND ALL LIFE....



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Thanks Priyanka...

You will also remain my friend...

i will try

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hi rohin!!!!!!!

U R ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS HERE!!!!!!!!! and i honestly mean it........all that u have written is so touchy and full of feelings and the way u put it into words is damn goooooooood......pleeeeeeease keep writing..bye 4 now! take care!!!!


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Shivani,

thanks keh kar aapke feelings ko chota nahi karna chahta but all i can say is i try to write i am not sure its good or not...When my family that is all of you read it you see a member of ur family writing it and you all always encourage me...So no thank you to u

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Thanks Priyanka...

You will also remain my friend...

i will try

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Hi Priyanka,

Aap sab doston ka hukum sar ankhon par....
Ab aap sab ko mere chehre par muskurahat hi nazar aayegi...


Ashk ke aansoon sukh gaye hain
Chod gaye hain chehre par lakerein
Hoton par reh gaya hai namkeen swaad
reh gayi hai man mein meethi meethi yaadein

Kash.............................

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Hi Priyanka,

Aap sab doston ka hukum sar ankhon par....
Ab aap sab ko mere chehre par muskurahat hi nazar aayegi...


Ashk ke aansoon sukh gaye hain
Chod gaye hain chehre par lakerein
Hoton par reh gaya hai namkeen swaad
reh gayi hai man mein meethi meethi yaadein

Kash.............................

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hieee rohin,

howz u i liked the above sher a lot specially the line "hoton par reh gaya hai namkeen swad"....

we also wish that u be happy forever ......

HAR KADAM INTAHAN LETI HAI ZINDAGI,
HAR WAQT NAYE SADME DETI HAI ZINDAGI,
HUM ZINDAGI SE SHIKWA KAISE KARE....
AAP JAISE ACHE DOST BHI DETI HAI ZINDAGI....

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