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dil ki - 1st March 2006, 12:22 PM

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Keh do tumne likha hai ye bhi ... 2 saal pehle aaya tha aisa SMS mujhe ...


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Humko kis k gum ne mara...Wah Gulam ali sahab ki aawaz mein gazab ka jadoo hai..
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look - 2nd March 2006, 11:14 AM

look i dont write for u
if u had this
soo plz dont read my post
bcoz i dont need ur comments
i think i make myself very clear to u
   
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4th March 2006, 06:17 PM

so maiN bhi aapko clear kar dun ... ye chipkai hui shayriyaN nahi chaleNgi yahaN .. maiN praveen ji(moderator) se aaj hi kahuNga .. ye last hai tumhare liye .. ya to NOT MINE likha karo ...


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look - 4th March 2006, 07:50 PM

look mr sacha pyar
i love to make frn
but i never mind if any become my enemy
n how dare to speak like that
dont think ashi cant say anything
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4 sacccha pyar - 4th March 2006, 09:09 PM

hi kunal
main aapki baat ka samarthan karta hu . keep it uo
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Re: look - 4th March 2006, 09:31 PM

hey ashi

first of all i like to say that better dont give a d...n to him.....

u know this a appeal of a frustrated shayr to get a delibrate attention.........what u can say trick no 42 to get a girl attention.........(hahahaha)

wo tumhe uksa raha ladne ke liya,kyonki wo chahta hai ki tum usse lado.......so just forget what he says........u r doing a wonderfull job ...............

and ur replies in u r post suggest that u are getting attention of lot of people,and there are people who cannot resist ur instant fame..........and they always wanted to be the centre of attraction,but hey cant be...........and hey there is no obligation to write wheather this shayri is not urs or not,beacuse after all who is he make rules here................so do what u r doing......ur doing excellent job ........ur four liners are always crouded with replies..............it suggest that people want u........so tum apni bindas chipki hui shayri humlogo ko bindas chipkao..........

bya and take care always
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jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"


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4th March 2006, 10:05 PM

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Re: Re: look - 4th March 2006, 11:11 PM

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hey ashi

first of all i like to say that better dont give a d...n to him.....

u know this a appeal of a frustrated shayr to get a delibrate attention.........what u can say trick no 42 to get a girl attention.........(hahahaha)

wo tumhe uksa raha ladne ke liya,kyonki wo chahta hai ki tum usse lado.......so just forget what he says........u r doing a wonderfull job ...............

and ur replies in u r post suggest that u are getting attention of lot of people,and there are people who cannot resist ur instant fame..........and they always wanted to be the centre of attraction,but hey cant be...........and hey there is no obligation to write wheather this shayri is not urs or not,beacuse after all who is he make rules here................so do what u r doing......ur doing excellent job ........ur four liners are always crouded with replies..............it suggest that people want u........so tum apni bindas chipki hui shayri humlogo ko bindas chipkao..........

bya and take care always
passionate...........
Look mr wht u r ...

I dont want to be the centre of attrection & kunal ko kisi pehchaan ki jaroorat nahi ye site pe sab jaante hai ... maiNe yahaN jo kuch bhi likha mujhe koi shauk nahi tha kisi se jhagda karne ka .. but rules is rules... na hi mere paas waqt hai itna ... maiNe sirf is liye yahaN likha kyuNki .. usne bola ye uski likhi hui hai .. jabki nahi hai uski likhi ye post ... jaisa prove ho chuka hai ...

khair aapki suvidha ke liye ye link diye de raha huN ... shayad aapko phir samajh aaye ... aur ek baat .. ladki dekh ke uske peeche ho jaane wale mat bano .. apne attitude maiN wo dum banao ki duniya tumhare peeche ho .. itne andhe na bano ki sahi aur galat ka pher tumhari nazroN se hat jaye ... khair khuda tumhari har raah assan kare dua rahegi... is link pe gaur karna .. jo har forum ke sabse upar diya gaya hai ...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/announc...php?forumid=32

khuda khair kare

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Re: look - 4th March 2006, 11:18 PM

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look mr sacha pyar
i love to make frn
but i never mind if any become my enemy
n how dare to speak like that
dont think ashi cant say anything
understand
if u dont u better understand
& now u look ms.aashi..

Kunal also can say everything .. but i m just trying to correct u . with the simple & straight words... ki likhne pe manai nahi ... but u should give proper credit to the original writer... i m not wrong in any way .. well maiN ab yahaN kuch nahi likhuNga ... but maiN praveen ji se is baare maiN jaroor kahuNga...

tum aao friends banao .. i dont have ne prob.. bt agar is jagah ko khoobsoorat banaye rakho to jyada accha hoga ... link tumhe bhi de raha huN padh lena .. RULES BEFORE POSTING...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/announc...php?forumid=32

Khuda hafiz...

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5th March 2006, 12:44 AM

kunal ji ...

aapse ek baat kehna chahunga main
ye koi tareeka nahi hota kissi ki post par reply karne kaa


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so maiN bhi aapko clear kar dun ... ye chipkai hui shayriyaN nahi chaleNgi yahaN .. maiN praveen ji(moderator) se aaj hi kahuNga .. ye last hai tumhare liye .. ya to NOT MINE likha karo ...

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ye kaya kaha aapne ashi ko .......
dhamki de rahe the kya

agar aap ashi ko correct bhi karna chahte the to thode polite way mein kar sakte the magar aise reply karna koi acchi baat nahi hai .
yahan main aapko correct akrna chahunga
ki agar aap politly reply karte to aisa kuch nahi hota

aap se ek aur request hai

plz... apni EGO se zara utar ke baat kiya keejeeye ye main aapki bhalai ke liye hi keh raha hun

waise parveen ji se bhi mujhe ek request rahegi ki plz.... kuch aur rules bhi add kar len ... rules ki list mein
ki reply karne wala kissi pe rudely behave naa kare

hope u will consider what i m saying

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5th March 2006, 12:11 PM

Mere Aziz Doston............

ye bazm koi ladne ki jagah nahi...........sabhi pyar lene aate hain to sabko pyar baanto.............

jo Ashi ji ne yahan post kiya vo Ghulam ali sahab ki ek ghazal ka agaaz hai..........aur rules ke mutabik jo bhi yahan, gar koi bhi, kisi ka likha post karta hai.........use ya to shayar ka naam likha chahiye ya fir Not Mine (NM) jaroor mention karna chahiye................

aur is baat ko pyar se samjhya jaa sakta hai.....aur shayron ko ise positivly lena chahiye........

umeed hai aap sab bazm mein khushiyaan bikherenge........

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5th March 2006, 07:11 PM

dear ashi n all the respected members of this site,
please its a requet to mantain the dignity of the site.it really means a lot to us n just cant see everyday things messing up here or there.well first of all ashi if u post sumthing which isnt written by u just write not mine n if its urs feel free to write, in any ways we all r there to reply u.well now kunal its just a humble request as a senior member of site if our new ones take any step wrong plz try to be polite n make them sure they understand u wat u ought to say. u r correct on ur part but ur attitude to talk to a girl was wrong. its a humble request to everyone out here,plz stop this debate here itself. i wud love if no further arguments cum out in open. well try to be humble with each n everyone out here. dont pin point n expose in open. we all are here to share our feelings rather than creating issues.plz try to mantain a peaceful enviourment here. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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Hi - 5th March 2006, 07:19 PM

Hi jasleen didi i m totally agree with u.

We are not here 4 fight but 4 delight.

So both of u please keep just quite

and just follow the steps that is right

Honesty, and humbleness keep u bright.

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hi - 5th March 2006, 08:46 PM

Mere Pyaare Dosto

Mera bhi aesa hi sochna hai ki ye ek naram dil waalo ki jagah hai...Jise ladne ka sok hai wo kahi aur jaa kar ladai kare...

Vaise kehne ko bohat kuch hai sabhi k liye par bas itna hi kahunga mere dosto ko ki agar aapne use ek bar samjhaya
wo agar nahi maane to aap usse ladne k bajaye Hamare MODERATER sahab Praveen bhai ko hi suchit kar de naa ki khud usse ulajhe....


Mere dost passionate aapko bhi kehna chahunga ki personal baat ka nipatara dusri tarah se kare sabhi k samne karna theek nahi rehta bhai...


Kunal ek bar tumne samjhaya koi naa maane to khud kahe ulajh ho Haan ek bar samjhana achi baat hai par agar aap khud samjhdar ho to Praveen ko hi bolna chahiye tha Naa ki bar-2 kisi ko samjhana


Aman bhai ne jo kaha bilkul sahi aur unki baat se sehmat hu...

Jasleen ji ek baat kahu vaise to ashi ko yaha k rules ko dhayan rakhna chahiye aapne bilkul theek kaha par as a bro. ek baat puchhu shayri.com ko chhodkar kya hum jo rules hamari indian Govt. ne banaye hai kya wo sabhi mante hai...nahi isliye agar yaha koi nahi manta to koi badi baat nhi...




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aap sabhi logoN ko pehli aur aakhiri baat jaroor batana chahuNga ,, khash kar jas ... aur CUTE ASHU... ko ki maiNe pehle aashi ko bade polite way maiN bola tha ... usi ki ek post pe ....jo aap sabko is section maiN mil jayegi .. aur uska jawaab kaisa mila tha ye bhi aap log padh lijiyega ,,... ,,, aur jo mujhe ek ladki se baat karne ka paath padane aaye hai ...unhe bata dun .. ki maiN koi road ka paagal nahi .. na hi kisi ko patthar maarne ki aadat hai meri .. ladkiyoN ke peeche bhaagne ki meri aadat kabhi nahi rahi ... isi liye mujhe apni izzat ke khilaf ek lafz bhi pasand nahi ...

Ashu mere likhne ke tareeke pe eitraaz uthaya tumne ... sehmat huN tumse .. sorry bhi sabse us baat ke liye .. par kya tumne passionate lover ka reply nahi padha .. aagar mujhe likha to use bhi likhne ka tumhara farz tha ... khair mujhe is baat se koi farq nahi padta .. mujhe nahi lagta maine kuch galat kiya ... kyuNki aap logoN ki tarah aadhi baat ke peeche bhagne ki aadat nahi meri ...

phir se aap sabhi ko batana chahuNga ... maine pehle usse dhang se baat ki thi ... jab usne ulta dhang ikhtiyaar kiya .,.. tab maiN is post pe aaya ... aur seedhe lafzon maiN likha ... kyuNki yahoo pe jaake logoN ko dhamkane ki aadat meri nahi .. jo is post ki owner ne kiya ....

par tab bhi jinko mujhse shikayat hai .. unse muafi mangte hue bas yahi kahuNga ..

merhfil maiN mera tarana na gujenga ...
in galiyon maiN ab ye deewana na ghumega...

vinti karte hue vida

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Are yaar - 5th March 2006, 11:05 PM

arrre kunaal baahi aise shayri.com chhod ke mat jaaana, hame aap ki bahut kami mehsus hogi...

Khas kar ke aashi ko..........just kidding dear.........


merhfil maiN mera tarana na gujenga ...
in galiyon maiN ab ye deewana na ghumega...


aapne jo line bataayi usse mujhe chinta huiiii
mai aap ka fen hu.....

aur maaafi mat maango agar tum sahi ho aur tumko yakin hai ke tum sahi ho.......
chahe koi bhi mehfil ya koi bhi gali mai jaao ham jaise pyaare dost tume nahi milenge.....

ant mai yahi vaapas aaoge dear ....kunaaal



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Re: look - 6th March 2006, 09:26 AM

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look mr sacha pyar
i love to make frn
but i never mind if any become my enemy
n how dare to speak like that
dont think ashi cant say anything
understand
if u dont u better understand

Bindaas aashi,

Tumhari kisi baat se yeh nahi lagta ki you like to make friends. Aur tum to jiss ko jaanti bhi nahi uss ke bare me aaise shabd kabhi ishtemaal nahi karne chaahiye, what a dosti... hey u made me laugh… aur rahi baat likhne ki to tum nahi likhti ho uss me kya buri baat hain, simply not mine nahi likh sakti kya? maana agar tumhe maloom nahi rules, par jab koi pyar se samjhaaye to samjhne ke liye dimaag ko kasht to dena padta hain. Hope u understand…
   
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aap sabhi logoN ko pehli aur aakhiri baat jaroor batana chahuNga ,, khash kar jas ... aur CUTE ASHU... ko ki maiNe pehle aashi ko bade polite way maiN bola tha ... usi ki ek post pe ....jo aap sabko is section maiN mil jayegi .. aur uska jawaab kaisa mila tha ye bhi aap log padh lijiyega ,,... ,,, aur jo mujhe ek ladki se baat karne ka paath padane aaye hai ...unhe bata dun .. ki maiN koi road ka paagal nahi .. na hi kisi ko patthar maarne ki aadat hai meri .. ladkiyoN ke peeche bhaagne ki meri aadat kabhi nahi rahi ... isi liye mujhe apni izzat ke khilaf ek lafz bhi pasand nahi ...

Ashu mere likhne ke tareeke pe eitraaz uthaya tumne ... sehmat huN tumse .. sorry bhi sabse us baat ke liye .. par kya tumne passionate lover ka reply nahi padha .. aagar mujhe likha to use bhi likhne ka tumhara farz tha ... khair mujhe is baat se koi farq nahi padta .. mujhe nahi lagta maine kuch galat kiya ... kyuNki aap logoN ki tarah aadhi baat ke peeche bhagne ki aadat nahi meri ...

phir se aap sabhi ko batana chahuNga ... maine pehle usse dhang se baat ki thi ... jab usne ulta dhang ikhtiyaar kiya .,.. tab maiN is post pe aaya ... aur seedhe lafzon maiN likha ... kyuNki yahoo pe jaake logoN ko dhamkane ki aadat meri nahi .. jo is post ki owner ne kiya ....

par tab bhi jinko mujhse shikayat hai .. unse muafi mangte hue bas yahi kahuNga ..

merhfil maiN mera tarana na gujenga ...
in galiyon maiN ab ye deewana na ghumega...

vinti karte hue vida

Kunal
KuNal dear...

Tum bilkul sahi keh rahe ho aur yaha tumhari har baat sahi hain... kuch logon ko maloom hi nahi woh kya keh rahe hain. tumne jo kuch kiya hain woh bilkul sahi hain aur tumne wohi kiya hain jo tumhe karna chaahiye. maana agar koi samajh sakta to yeh baat itni barhi na hoti, mein samajh sakti hun. tumne kuch galat nahi kiya yeh baat tum bhi jaante ho so no need to be sorry dear...

aur yeh kya hain yaar?

mehfil maiN mera tarana na gujenga ...
in galiyon maiN ab ye deewana na ghumega

aaisi baaton pe tumne aaise hi kaise yeh keh diya?.. yaar tumse hi to yeh mehfil roshan hain. don't hurt your love ones for those who don't care and who don't understand. bas chhoro yeh sab baat yaha, aur be-wajah pareshan na raho dear! don't talk like this... khush raho yaar. all your friends in shayri.com needs u kUnal...

Bindaas aashi, you better understand or else make sure to use some manners in your words.........
   
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ashi and kunal its for both of u.............................
as i know both of u i don think so that u both r the person who fights yaar...............

dekho kunal bhai aisa bhi ho sakta hai ashi ne ye fazal suni ho aur likhte samay wo yaad aa gayi ho aur unhone likh di.....yeh baat ashi ko bhi yaad na hogi

aur ashi agar aapne yeh kalam kisi ki copy karke ya ye gazal sun ke mistake se likhi ho to maafi mangne main kya harz hai galti samjha karo use nazar andaaz na karo........

an kunal bhai u r not going anywhere............ bcoz this site is urs its lightning bcoz of u if u went there will be total darkness over here....................so plz.........

aur passionate itne besamaj kaise ho gaye tum, itne samajhdar hone ke bawjood gusse main kya kya likh dala aapne, kabhi nahi socha tha ki kisi ko neecha dikhane ke liye aap itna kuch likhoge......... sach kahu to galti sabse badi aapki hai aaapko itna nahi kehna chaiye tha


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Re: dil ki - 6th March 2006, 10:07 AM

Ashi Sahiba

Ye bahas maiN kaafi arse se dekh raha huuN. Behtar hai ke aap maan leN ke aapne is post meiN jo sher chaspaaN kiye haiN wo aapke naahiN haiN. behtar hai ke aap ye baat saadgi se maan leN aur aur apni language par dhyan deN. Kyunke usmeiN koi shayrana ya dostana baat nazar nahiiN aati. Ummeed hai aap Khayal rakheN gi.

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Dil ki chauton ne kabhi
chain se rehne na diya
Jab challi sard hawa,
maine tujhe yaad kiya...

Is ka gham naheen,
kiyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
Is ka gham hai
ke bhot dair mein barbaad kiya...
luv ashi


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ashi - 6th March 2006, 11:18 AM

achee shayree ko pasand kara buree baat nahee ashi. aur har koyee khud to likhta nahee ham bhee suna dete hain doosre shayron kee baten par jahan kuch na kaha gaya ho yahee lagata hai ki tum kahna chahte ho ki tum ne kahee hai. aur jab kisee ko pata chalega ki ye tumhree nahee hai aur tum ne ye clear bhee nahee kiya thora gussa to ayega hee mujhe bhee parhte hee laga tha aur gussa aya tha kunal ne bas thora sa gussa dikhaya hai us ke gusse ko samjho jab ham doosre ka gussa samjhana seekh jate hain ham shayree aur zindgee dono main aage barhte hain . shayer ko jab bhee pata chalata hai ki kisee ne koyee shayree kisee aur kee apane nam se kah dee to gussa aa hee jata hai. doosre shayron kee bahut see shayree sab ne parhee hai is liye use yahan na post kiya jaye balke us ke liye isee site pe koyee jagah hai wahan post keejiye shayer ke nam ke sath. ashi shayree main kadam rakahana hai to thora vinamr hona chahiye sabhee ko. shayree main to chot dene wale ko bhee kabhee baddua nahee dee jatee aur agar ye vinamrta ka hunar nahee ho to bahut see doosre fileds hain jahan ham log apane gusse ka istemal kar sakte hain. bindas sach kahane ke liye hona chhiye larne ke liye nahee. bas ek khwahish hai tum apana kuch likho achha bura jaisa bhee us par ham charcha karen ek dosore se seekhen theek hai na meree baat agar buree lagee ho pyar se kah dena main zaroor sunoonga tumhe
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well - 6th March 2006, 07:09 PM

well i just want to say
if anybody dont like so plz simply say straight forward
n if u want that i should say sorry so plz dont think i will
as i really dont know that its is other shyar post
so its not my fault but this is also not the way to tell anyone
as this show who people are rude in shyari.com
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suno ashi - 6th March 2006, 07:15 PM

ek to sab aap se hindi-urdu main baat kar rahe hain aap shayed angrezee zyada pasand kartee hain. jab angrezee hee pasand hai tab urdu shayree ko azad karo is angrezee se aur kaheen eng site pe batcheet karo. doosree baat

i really dont know that its is other shyar post ye kaha aap ne
hard to bealive ke koyee kuch post kare use ye bhee na pata ho ki us ne likhe hai ya kisee aur ne tumhree hee baat se pata chalata hai ki tumhe nahee maloom tha ke ye kisee aur ne likha hai? aisa hota hai kya? mujeh ay sabhee ko pata hota hai shayree unkee hai kisee aur kee aap bhee pata kar len to behtar hoga
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6th March 2006, 09:42 PM

well i just want to say
if anybody dont like so plz simply say straight forward
n if u want that i should say sorry so plz dont think i will
as i really dont know that its is other shyar post
so its not my fault but this is also not the way to tell anyone
as this show who people are rude in shyari.com
well i just to say thanks for every comments of all member


i wanna make one thing clear to every one...
first of all i hav no intentions of gettin involved in to this...but...then i was tempted to reply...when i saw the above lines frm ashi...
so...u mean to say tht...u n ghulam ali ji got the same idea...and exactly the same words!!!...don u think u r messing up the issue...
if truth is on ur side...then it makes sense if u r rude n nt so polite...it is like defending ur self probably...but its clear that it is not written by u...n still u r not ready to accept the fact that some one else wrote...u jus said i dint knw that some other shayar wrote...but u dint say i dint write...that is the problem here...
now its up to u...u say tht u r here to make friends...n if u wanna make friends jus by impressing the members here using some one else's works...then may b its not such a good idea...
accept ur mistakes first n then tok abt other's mistakes...
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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6th March 2006, 09:53 PM

and ur replies in u r post suggest that u are getting attention of lot of people,and there are people who cannot resist ur instant fame..........and they always wanted to be the centre of attraction,but hey cant be...........and hey there is no obligation to write wheather this shayri is not urs or not,beacuse after all who is he make rules here................so do what u r doing......ur doing excellent job ........ur four liners are always crouded with replies..............it suggest that people want u........so tum apni bindas chipki hui shayri humlogo ko bindas chipkao..........


hello mr...
well...if only u wanna write or post here for countin the number of replies...then it makes no sense...
n may b u go up to her n say tht...u hav 28 replies on this post...great job...but then its becoz of a mess created here...replies r there...u got my point?
don count the number of replies...or if u r gettin any replies or not...it is abt ur contentment...if u love it like any thin but ppl don like it...still it can b ur favourite poem...
so plz...don make it a site jus for gettin replies...n jus for impressing people...
n its a very big mistake to say that kunal is tryin to get the attention...well...he doesnt need to...we know wht he is capable of...hez nt a guy who writes for replies...hez a genius at work...n there are ppl who love readin his works...i'm one of them...
n we all r here to defend him if u tok all that crap abt him...
wud hav been fine had u talked abt his reply...may b he was a bit rude...y did all this come up...attention ego...n all...jus to make it more complex...
any ways...
take care
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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6th March 2006, 10:26 PM

OH MY GOD! just stop all the arguing!
i mean, come on, ok, so miss ashi or whtever the hell her name is, has copy pasted, but why the heck are we stooping down to such a level tht we are making such a big deal abt it? i agree with kunal on this...but kunal, u shld have done this quietly, making a big deal of it is juss gonna ignite some flames in everyone else's hearts! see, now i cldnt help but reply

one more thing, mr. passionatelover...are u saying tht kunal is jealous of ashi's fame? wht fame? copy pasting is not called fame, its called plaigarism! and u are talking to kunal, a wht i lyk to say "professional" shayar....he is one of those ppl on this site who are 54852115 times better than all copy pasters

so plz...stop the fighting

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6th March 2006, 11:26 PM

kripya karke meri baaton pe dhyaan dijiye .... plzz..


aapko bas itna kehna chahunga .... maine jo isse pehle likha tha vo bas isliye likha tha ke kunal ji ne thoda ajjeb dhang se reply kiya tha .....i didn't mean to hurt anybody ..... anybody of u.

plzz...... stop all this now ....

aur main nahi chahta ke koi bhi member iss site ko chod ke jaaye ....... agar koi bhi problem hai to main hi chod dunga .........
main nahi chahta ki meri wajeh se koi problem khadi ho .... main abb isss baat pe mai naur kuch nahi discuss karna chahunga .... kyunki mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai ki seniors members ke saath aisa ho raha hai ..... mere dil ko bahut thaiss pahunchi ye sab replies dekhne ke baad.... main bilkul nahi chahta ke kissi ko meri wajeh se bura lage .....so plzz... forgive me agar maine koi galati ki hai to ...

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