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Do chehre Duniya ke..... - 28th October 2002, 05:18 AM

Doston,

Apni rai se nawaaziyega zaroor........



Do chehre duniya ke hain, Do chehre hain tumhare,
Duniya to humari thi hi nahin, Tum bhi rahe na humare !!!

Duniya Jhoot bola karti thi, sachi thi aankhein tumhari,
In aankhon nein youn rang badlaa, dikhaa di duniyadaari,
Inhin aankhon ke tassavur mein, kaat leinge din saare,
Do chehre duniya ke hain, Do chehre hain tumhare !!!

Har lamhaa tumhaara, sajtaa thaa mere liye,
Har lavz tumhaara, sajdaa thaa mere liye,
Lamhe beet gaye tamaam, lavzon ke mayine mit gaye saare,
Do chehre duniya ke hain, Do chehre hain tumhare !!!
   
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28th October 2002, 06:02 AM

ehsaas jee:


aapki baatein paDi to kuch kehne ki jurrat kar rahe hai. do chehre to shayad is duniya mein har cheez, har insaan ke hai. Lekin un sab cheezoN ke saath, sachaaii ke bhii do chehre hote hai aur zaruuri nahi ki jo ek insaan ka sach ai, vohi doosre ka ho. Gar apne gamoN ko is baat ko nazar mein rakh kar dekhe, to shaayad aapka kuch dard kam ho jaaye.

vaise likhne mein yeh sachaai aapne jis andaaz mein beyaan ki hai nihaayat-i-khoobsurat hai........likhte rahiyegaa.

duaayon ke saath

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Shukriya - 28th October 2002, 07:54 AM

Deepa Ji,

Yeh kuch ukhde hue lamhon mein kahyi gayi baatein shayri ke libaaz mein pesh ki thi. Waise aapki baat bilkul durust hai. Kisi nehaayti samajhdaar insaan nain kabhi kahaa thaa ki " The only thing constant in life is Change". Waqt bade se bade zakhm ko is saadgi se bhar deta hai ki humein ehsaas bhi nahin hota.
Har dard ke do pehlu hote hain aur inhein dekhne aur samajhne ki taaqat waqt hi dilaata hai. Jab meine yeh nazm likhi thi, tab mein shaayad aap se sehmat nahin hota. Lekin aaj ek nayaa din hai aur ek nayaa nazariyaa bhi. Aaj mein bhi yahi maanta houn ki do chehron ke peeche hameshan do wajah bhi hoti hain, jinhen samajhna nehaayti zaroori hai.
Taareef ka tahe-dil se shkriya. Aage bhi koshish rahegi ki yunhi likhta rahoon.
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28th October 2002, 08:36 AM

Achin jee:

hame khabar na thii ke aapne yeh kin lamhoN mein likhaa thaa aur un lamhoN ko guzre kitna waqt ho gaya. Hamne jo kaha is khayaal se kaha ke gar aapka zakhm bhara na ho to shaayad hamaari baatoN se aapko kuch tasalli, kuch hauslaa mil jaaye. Ukhde huye lamhoN mein likhne ki jurrat to bandi khud bhii kar chuki hai.....gar yeh ukhde huye lamhe na hote, to shaayad shaayari hi na hotii.

aapki shayarii apni jagah par bahut khoob thii........hamaari kahi baatein bas aapka dil behlaane ke liye thii. Lekin aap un baatoN se sehmat hai, jaankar bahut khushi huii.

duaaoN ke saath

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Bahut Khoob - 20th May 2003, 05:16 PM

Achin,

Huzoor, Aapki Shayaari padh ke mein spellbound (sorry mujhey uska urdu word nahi aata ) ho gaya hoon...

Aap to har rukh, har jazbe, har ehsaas mein ek dum lajawaab ho.

Kitni sachhai hai aapki baaton mein main bayaan nahi kar sakta. Itni kam umr mein itna sab kuch mehsoos karke itni achchi taraf bayaan karna sachmuch kaabiley tareef hai...

Mujhey sabse achchey yeh lavz lagey...
"Har lamhaa tumhaara, sajtaa thaa mere liye,
Har lavz tumhaara, sajdaa thaa mere liye"

Really Beautiful yaar....

Too Good...

Kaash.... Main bhi yeh sab soch paata
   
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Ehsaas....waah..ye bhii ek hakiqat haiN...bohot khub likah haiN apne..swapnn
   
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Wah!.. Kya khoobi se sach kaha hai aapne.. sach, jadoo hai apke kalaam me.. bohat hi khubsoorat hai... ab aapki tareef ke liye kuchh naye lafz dhoondne honge..


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hi - 20th May 2003, 10:53 PM

Ehsaas ji,

waqui kya khoob likha hai aapne......khas ke ye do lines..........
Duniya Jhoot bola karti thi, sachi thi aankhein tumhari,
In aankhon nein youn rang badlaa, dikhaa di duniyadaari,

wah wah.
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