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--Hasrat jaipuri


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Shayar is Hasrat Mohani Ji...! His real name was Syed Fazl ul Hasan, born in 1875 in Mohan near Unnao. He passed away on 16th May, 1951 in Lucknow.



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>>>>>>Ahmed Hamdani...

Like another sher of that ghazal

nahii.n hai tum se koii dostii bhii ab to magar
qadam qadam pe ye kaisaa vabaal aayaa hai

Next >>>>>>>

Mein So raha tha kisi yaad ke shabistaan mein
Jaga key chhod gaye Qafiley Shahar ke mujhe
Nasir Kazmi Ji...!

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Ek tou hai ke hamaari nahiN tujh ko parwaa
Ek hum heiN ke teraa naam liye jaate heiN







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Wrong...!

Shayar is Hasrat Mohani Ji...! His real name was Syed Fazl ul Hasan, born in 1875 in Mohan near Unnao. He passed away on 16th May, 1951 in Lucknow.


Mujhe badi mushkil se woh sher net per mila, per wahaaN bhi shayer ka naam nahi likha tha, maqte meiN hasrat naam dekhker maine "hasrat jaipuri" guess kiya tha......khair...chaliye koi baat nahi, isi bahane ek aur hasrat sahab ka pata chal gaya.....

Danny ji kahaan kahaan se dhoond ker laate ho aap yeh sher.....Maine tou pehle kabhi sune bhi nahi.......

per accha hai, isi bahane,hame kayi shayeroN ke baare me pata chalta rahega...

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Ek tou hai ke hamaari nahiN tujh ko parwaa
Ek hum heiN ke teraa naam liye jaate heiN




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Mujhe badi mushkil se woh sher net per mila, per wahaaN bhi shayer ka naam nahi likha tha, maqte meiN hasrat naam dekhker maine "hasrat jaipuri" guess kiya tha......khair...chaliye koi baat nahi, isi bahane ek aur hasrat sahab ka pata chal gaya.....

Danny ji kahaan kahaan se dhoond ker laate ho aap yeh sher.....Maine tou pehle kabhi sune bhi nahi...



--shamim jaipuri

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ik aisii raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
Aur issi liye aapke liye kissi aur Jaipuri Ji ki shayri dhunDh nikaala, Bitiya...!



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Mujhe badi mushkil se woh sher net per mila, per wahaaN bhi shayer ka naam nahi likha tha, maqte meiN hasrat naam dekhker maine "hasrat jaipuri" guess kiya tha......khair...chaliye koi baat nahi, isi bahane ek aur hasrat sahab ka pata chal gaya.....

Danny ji kahaan kahaan se dhoond ker laate ho aap yeh sher.....Maine tou pehle kabhi sune bhi nahi.......

per accha hai, isi bahane,hame kayi shayeroN ke baare me pata chalta rahega...



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na jaane kis liye ummiidavaar baiThaa huu.N
ik aisii raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
Faiz Ahmed Faiz

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lutf vo ishq me.n paaye hai.n ki jii jaanataa hai
ra.nj bhii itane uThaaye hai.n kio jii jaanataa hai


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8th June 2010, 11:48 PM

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Faiz Ahmed Faiz

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lutf vo ishq me.n paaye hai.n ki jii jaanataa hai
ra.nj bhii itane uThaaye hai.n kio jii jaanataa hai
Daag dehalvi saahab


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misaal isakii kahaa.N hai zamaane me.n
ki saare khone ke Gam paaye hamane paane me.n


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misaal isakii kahaa.N hai zamaane me.n
ki saare khone ke Gam paaye hamane paane me.n

..Javed akhtar sahab

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dard reh-reh ke ye karvaT-sii badaltaa kyaa hai?




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zainy Sher ka'ii baar paRhaa haii par Shaayar kaa naam nahii.n yaad aa rahaa !

ab aap hi bataa deejiye !

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ab aap hi bataa deejiye !

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WELL!!... shayar ka naam tou nahi bataungi.......

koshish kijiye...chaliye ek hint de deti huuN...sdc per posted hai yeh sher.....




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Lijiye maiN hi bata deti huuN

--"Jamal panipati"


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hameiN ye zom raha ab ke woh pukarenge
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Wonderful poetry by Wasi Shah

dayaar-e-gair mein kaise tujhe sada dete
tu mil bhi jata to tujhe gawa dete
(dayaar-e-gair=alien/unknown place, sada=voice, call)

tumhi ne ham ko sunaya na apna dukh warna
dua woh karte ke ham aasmaan hila dete

hamein yeh zom raha ab ke woh pukaarenge
unhein yeh zid thi k har baar ham sada dete
(zom=illusion)

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ye mujhe chain kyuu.N nahii.n pa.Dataa
ik hii shaKhs thaa jahaan me.n kyaa


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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ye mujhe chain kyuu.N nahii.n pa.Dataa
ik hii shaKhs thaa jahaan me.n kyaa


Jaun Eliya

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nahii.n jaante kuchh ki jaanaa kahaa.N hai
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Answer==Jigar muradabadi

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Sar jhukaoge to patthar devta ho jaayega
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Answer==Jigar muradabadi

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15th July 2010, 12:56 PM

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Lakh maujon main ghira huN, abhi dooba to nahiN
Mujh ko saahil se pukaaro ke mein zinda huN abhi






-Sudarshan Fakir jiii


next sher
kal suboh ke daaman meiN, tum hoge na hum honge
bas reth ke seene par kuch laksh kadam honge


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15th July 2010, 09:30 PM

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-Sudarshan Fakir jiii


next sher
kal suboh ke daaman meiN, tum hoge na hum honge

bas reth ke seene par kuch laksh kadam honge
Na, na, Chotti Behen…!

Yaha sher Mohsin Ji ka likha houa hai…! Pesh kar rahe heiN hum poora kalaam…! J

Mere qaatil ko pukaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi
Phir se maqtal ko sanwaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Ye shab-e-hizr to saathi hain mere barson ke
Jao so jao sitaaron ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Ye pareshaan se geysoo dekhe nahi jaate
Apni zulfon ko sanwaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Laakh maujon mein ghiraa hoon abhi dooba to nahi
Mujhko saahil se pukaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Qabr se aaj bhi ' Mohsin ' ki aati hai sadaa
tum kahaan ho mere yaaron…? ki main zinda hoon abhi

Sudharshan Fakir Ji ne issi radeef ka istamaal kiya hai ek dusri shaayri main jo niche chipkaa rahe heiN hum…!

Kissi ranjish ko hawaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi
Mujhko ehsaas dilaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Mere rukne se meri saaNse bhi ruk jaayeingi
Faasle aur ba.Daa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Zahar piine ki to aadat thi zamaanewaalo
Ab koi aur dawaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Chalti raahon main yuN hi aaNkh lagi hai ' Faakir '
BheeD logon ki haTaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Yaha knowledge aap se baaNtne ke liye hum reps ke yogya houe, hai na...?

Take very good care of yourself, ok...?

With blessings



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Na, na, Chotti Behen…!

Yaha sher Mohsin Ji ka likha houa hai…! Pesh kar rahe heiN hum poora kalaam…! J

Mere qaatil ko pukaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi
Phir se maqtal ko sanwaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Ye shab-e-hizr to saathi hain mere barson ke
Jao so jao sitaaron ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Ye pareshaan se geysoo dekhe nahi jaate
Apni zulfon ko sanwaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Laakh maujon mein ghiraa hoon abhi dooba to nahi
Mujhko saahil se pukaaro ki main zinda hoon abhi.

Qabr se aaj bhi ' Mohsin ' ki aati hai sadaa
tum kahaan ho mere yaaron…? ki main zinda hoon abhi

Sudharshan Fakir Ji ne issi radeef ka istamaal kiya hai ek dusri shaayri main jo niche chipkaa rahe heiN hum…!

Kissi ranjish ko hawaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi
Mujhko ehsaas dilaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Mere rukne se meri saaNse bhi ruk jaayeingi
Faasle aur ba.Daa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Zahar piine ki to aadat thi zamaanewaalo
Ab koi aur dawaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Chalti raahon main yuN hi aaNkh lagi hai ' Faakir '
BheeD logon ki haTaa do ki mein zinda hoon abhi

Yaha knowledge aap se baaNtne ke liye hum reps ke yogya houe, hai na...?

Take very good care of yourself, ok...?

With blessings




hmmmmmmmmmmmmm......................

bhaiya tusi gr8 ho........
aur sacchi mein aap es valueable information ke liye reps ke haqdaar haiN.....!
aur aisa mokka bhi kabhi kabhi aata hai ki chotti behaN bade bhai ko reps de...

reps +++ added

bhaiya maine kuch din pahle sudarshan jii ki yeh gazal kahiN padi thi, mere dimaag mein kafiya aur radeef yaad tha, to aapka diya sher padkar muje laga yeh sudarshan jii ki hi hai...

bahut bahut shukriya....aapne dono gazleN ek saath padne ka mokka diya.

regards
aapki chotti baheN




next sher
kal suboh ke daaman meiN, tum hoge na hum honge
bas reth ke seene par kuch laksh kadam honge




very sorry bhaiya, abhi reps nahi de paa rahi hoon :-(


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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