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Love khwabon men tasveer (ख्वाबों में तस्वीर) - 27th March 2014, 11:58 AM

Khwabon men tasveer banaataa hoon phir
husn tera us men dikhaataa hoon phir

rang badaa khub tera maah jabeen
us pe tera rang chadhaataa hoon phir

zulfen jo lehraaee tune gulbadan
lut ke khushboo wo lagaataa hoon phir

tan ye tera dekh ke marmar sa
uske liye **daar banaataa hoon phir

shauq,
Safeer, bas ise zindaa karoon
khoon-e-jigar deke jagaataa hoon phir





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हुस्न तेरा उस में दिखाता हूं फिर

रंग बड़ा ख़ूब तेरा माह जबीन
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27th March 2014, 01:42 PM

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[CENTER]Khwabon men tasveer banaataa hoon phir
husn tera us men dikhaataa hoon phir

rang badaa khub tera maah jabeen
us pe tera rang chadhaataa hoon phir

zulfen jo lehraaee tune gulbadan
lut ke khushboo wo lagaataa hoon phir

tan ye tera dekh ke marmar sa
uske liye **daar banaataa hoon phir

shauq,
Safeer, bas ise zindaa karoon
khoon-e-jigar deke jagaataa hoon phir


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waaahhhh kyaa khoob bayaani huii hai Aadeil saahab..... kyaa kahne, superbb and speechless..... ehsaason ke saath aapne badee eemaandaari nibhaayee hai .
alfaazon ka bahot khoob taanabaanaa hai aapki ye peshkash... ishkiyaa rangon me rangee khoobsurat tahreer.... ho zore kalam aur zyaadaa....

mukhlis.

Shaad....


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27th March 2014, 05:06 PM

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waaahhhh kyaa khoob bayaani huii hai Aadeil saahab..... kyaa kahne, superbb and speechless..... ehsaason ke saath aapne badee eemaandaari nibhaayee hai .
alfaazon ka bahot khoob taanabaanaa hai aapki ye peshkash... ishkiyaa rangon me rangee khoobsurat tahreer.... ho zore kalam aur zyaadaa....

mukhlis.

Shaad....
khush' aamadid, Sameerbhai..........

bas, aapkee dua hamaare saath rahe............

dua ke saath Adil ka salaam............



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29th March 2014, 05:13 PM

Bhai Aadeil sahab, achchi koshish ki hai aapne. Thoda sa aur maanjhne ki zarurat hai apne aap ko aur ghazal ki takneek ko. Aap bahut behtar kah sakte hain meri is salaah ke sath. Filhaal ek sher

rang badaa khub tera maah jabeen
us pe tera rang chadhaataa hoon phir

Yahaan gaur karne waali baat ye hai ke rang bada ya chhota nahi hota. To sher ki jo buniyaad aap khadi karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahi kachchi nikli is liye us khayaal ko poori tawajjo nahi mil payegi jitni ka sher haqdaar hai.

Koi ghalat baat lage to mazrat.
Khuda khair kare
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waah waah aadeil ji bahot hi khub kalam pes kiya................touching...................... ......!!!
   
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Bhai Aadeil sahab, achchi koshish ki hai aapne. Thoda sa aur maanjhne ki zarurat hai apne aap ko aur ghazal ki takneek ko. Aap bahut behtar kah sakte hain meri is salaah ke sath. Filhaal ek sher

rang badaa khub tera maah jabeen
us pe tera rang chadhaataa hoon phir

Yahaan gaur karne waali baat ye hai ke rang bada ya chhota nahi hota. To sher ki jo buniyaad aap khadi karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahi kachchi nikli is liye us khayaal ko poori tawajjo nahi mil payegi jitni ka sher haqdaar hai.

Koi ghalat baat lage to mazrat.
Khuda khair kare
Allaah haafiz
Sumit saab,
pehle to main aapka shukr guzar hoon ki aapne hamaaree ees rachna pe gaur kiya.....

aap ko yahaaN paa kar hum aapke mamnoon rahe hai.....

aapkee baat pe hum zaroor guar karenge....
sirf ek clarity, yahaaN rang ka badaa ya chhotahone kee baat nahiN kahi hai.......
balki, rang ka bahot khub hone ki baat kahee hai....... par shaayad aapka ye kehna hai ki kisee cheez ka khub hona apne aap men hi be-inteha hota hai? aur ees liye, badaa ya bahot kee koi gunjaaiish nahin hai?

main chahunga, aap ees pe thoda aur tabdeer farmaiye....
bakee ashaar pe bhee aapke bayaanaat kee ummeed rakhunga.... kyuN ki aapne kahaa hai, filhaal ye ek sher

duaoN ke saath....



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waah waah aadeil ji bahot hi khub kalam pes kiya................touching...................... ......!!!
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1st April 2014, 12:06 PM

Aadeil Sahib .

Aapki khayalon se saji tasveer bahut bhayi humein.
Apka bayan Rang Bara Khoob ....bilkul durust hai kyunki
mujhe parne pe mehsoos hua ki yahan rang ko saraha gaya
hai bara khoob keh kar jo ki theek hai .

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Aadeil Sahib .

Aapki khayalon se saji tasveer bahut bhayi humein.
Apka bayan Rang Bara Khoob ....bilkul durust hai kyunki
mujhe parne pe mehsoos hua ki yahan rang ko saraha gaya
hai bara khoob keh kar jo ki theek hai .

God bless.

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Sanjayji,

Aapka teh-e-dil se shukra guzar hooN.....
bas yun hi hausla afzaaee farmate rahiye.............
Aur agar kahiN aapko kuch bhee galat lage, beher ya bayaanaat jisse ki gazal ya sher galat ho raha hai toh be zeejak aap hameN bata sakte haiN....

SDC ke aap jaise shaayar hi hamare guru haiN, toh hum bilkul bura nahiN manenge

aapka bahot bahot shukriya.......

Adil ka namaskaar......



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Sumit saab,
pehle to main aapka shukr guzar hoon ki aapne hamaaree ees rachna pe gaur kiya.....

aap ko yahaaN paa kar hum aapke mamnoon rahe hai.....

aapkee baat pe hum zaroor guar karenge....
sirf ek clarity, yahaaN rang ka badaa ya chhotahone kee baat nahiN kahi hai.......
balki, rang ka bahot khub hone ki baat kahee hai....... par shaayad aapka ye kehna hai ki kisee cheez ka khub hona apne aap men hi be-inteha hota hai? aur ees liye, badaa ya bahot kee koi gunjaaiish nahin hai?

main chahunga, aap ees pe thoda aur tabdeer farmaiye....
bakee ashaar pe bhee aapke bayaanaat kee ummeed rakhunga.... kyuN ki aapne kahaa hai, filhaal ye ek sher

duaoN ke saath....
Pahle to mazrat mere pichhle bayaan ke liye. Shayad us waqt main kisi uljhan meN theek se padh hi nahiN paya aur bade chhote jaisi ek betuki si raay qayam ki. Aap ka khayaal apni jagah durust hai. Aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiye


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Pahle to mazrat mere pichhle bayaan ke liye. Shayad us waqt main kisi uljhan meN theek se padh hi nahiN paya aur bade chhote jaisi ek betuki si raay qayam ki. Aap ka khayaal apni jagah durust hai. Aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiye
Sumitji,
hamne bilkul bura nahiN mana hai

hum samajh sakte haiN ki humen bahot si uljhaneN aur zimmedaariyaN hoteee hai. bas aap yun waqt nikaal kar yahaaN aate raheN

aapka bahot bahot shukriya............

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aadil jee.......na jaane kaise is kalaam se door reh gaya.......aaj pada to bahut afsos hua......kamaal je ehsaas hain aapke....daad kubul karein.



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aadil jee.......na jaane kaise is kalaam se door reh gaya.......aaj pada to bahut afsos hua......kamaal je ehsaas hain aapke....daad kubul karein.
Arvindji,
aapka hamaare qalaam se rubaroo hona aur aapki hausla afzaaee ke liye mamnoon hooN......

bas, aapki duaoN ka arzmand hooN..........

Namaskaar.............



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Waah waah waah Aadeil ji !!! Is ghazal ki shokhi aur deewanagee dekhte hi banti hai !!! Dher saaree daad aap ko !!!
   
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Waah waah waah Aadeil ji !!! Is ghazal ki shokhi aur deewanagee dekhte hi banti hai !!! Dher saaree daad aap ko !!!
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