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Post main badal gayi hoon.. - 8th May 2015, 01:07 PM

Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...



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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...
Wah Wah..behad khoob Madhu ji kya khoob adaayegi huyi is nazm mein, zindagi ke panne palat rahe ho jaise..nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyeN...



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Bahut hi pyari nazm likhi Madhu ji aapne .. ek ek line dil ko choo gayee..Aap ke esare ehsaas bahut pasand aye , per ye bahut khoobsoorat laga mujhe ,,


Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..


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Wah Wah..behad khoob Madhu ji kya khoob adaayegi huyi is nazm mein, zindagi ke panne palat rahe ho jaise..nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyeN...
Sahi kaha mast jii yoon to zindgi har roz kuch naya sikhati hai....par kuch sabak zindgi ka rukh hee badal dete hain....
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Madhu jee

Namaste

Aik achchhi koshish ke liye dil se daad...likhte rahiye aise hi

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...
Dear Madhu.....bahut hi accha likha hai aapne aur khaas baat, postive soch muje bahut acchi lagi...zindgi meiN aage badna hai to khud kuch karo kisi se umeed na rakho...bahut khoob.

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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne madhu jee...... khaas taur se muje iski shuruaat acchi lagi

Main badal gayi hoon
Haan main badal gayi hoon

Kya baat hai.....har koi ise accept nahin karta....ek salaam aapki positive soch ko......khuda aapko badli hui zindagi mein khusiyan barsaaye.....



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bahut hi acchaa aur sacchaa likhaa hai aapne madhu ji....

hame behad pasadn aaye aapke jazbaat.... likhtii rahen.. khush rahen.... aati rahen

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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...
Madhu ji, hasb-e-muamuul aapki yeh peshkash ek alag sa andaaz aur bayaangi liye aayi hai. Bohot achhi lagi.


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Aik achchhi koshish ke liye dil se daad...likhte rahiye aise hi

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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Dear Madhu.....bahut hi accha likha hai aapne aur khaas baat, postive soch muje bahut acchi lagi...zindgi meiN aage badna hai to khud kuch karo kisi se umeed na rakho...bahut khoob.

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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne madhu jee...... khaas taur se muje iski shuruaat acchi lagi

Main badal gayi hoon
Haan main badal gayi hoon

Kya baat hai.....har koi ise accept nahin karta....ek salaam aapki positive soch ko......khuda aapko badli hui zindagi mein khusiyan barsaaye.....
arvind ji....shukriya aapko nazm pasand aayi...

aur jo sach ho use maan lena meri samajh me achcha hota hai..bajay iske ki koi doosra aapko aakar kahe...
badlaaw achchi baat hai jab ho sahi disha ki taraf le jayein...aisa manti hun main...bas usi ko vyaqt karne ki koshish thi....

aapko pasand aayi to dil khush ho gaya...
aise hee aage bhi sath dete rahiyega....

salamat rahiye...



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bahut hi acchaa aur sacchaa likhaa hai aapne madhu ji....

hame behad pasadn aaye aapke jazbaat.... likhtii rahen.. khush rahen.... aati rahen

Shaad.....
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Aapki rai ka hamesha intzaar hota hai hame..

Aate rahiyega

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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...

wah madhu jee wah bahut khoob.............................


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Madhu ji, hasb-e-muamuul aapki yeh peshkash ek alag sa andaaz aur bayaangi liye aayi hai. Bohot achhi lagi.
Aapko koshish pasand aayi khushi huyi..sagar ji..

Dil se shukriya aapka..

Aate rahiyega...

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Dil pehlan jeha nai reha ae kathore ho gaya
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Aur bahut achchi lines share ki.....sahi kaha ehsaas kafi milte hain......

Aati rahna....

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Bahut shukriya fakhiri sahab.....

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Behad Shukriya ishq sahab............

Aate rahiyega........

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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..



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Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...

bahut hi achhi rachnaa rahi aapki Madhu ji..............dil khush ho gyaa padh kar.............


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bahut hi achhi rachnaa rahi aapki Madhu ji..............dil khush ho gyaa padh kar.............
aapko pasand aayi achcha laga jankar..

aate rahiyega..

hausla afzai ka behad shukriya...



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Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon...

Behad umdah...waaah
Madhu ji bohot gehrai se likha hai aaone ye kalam.......nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
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Behad umdah...waaah
Madhu ji bohot gehrai se likha hai aaone ye kalam.......nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
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Khushi hai kalaam pasand aaya apko..

Aate raha karein....



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Badalav zindagi ka ek ahem hissa hai... har ek shakhs apni zindagi me thoda bahot badal jaata hai...

aap ne jis badalav ko ehesaas k dhaago se piroya hai wakayi kabil-e-taarif hai...

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Badalav zindagi ka ek ahem hissa hai... har ek shakhs apni zindagi me thoda bahot badal jaata hai...

aap ne jis badalav ko ehesaas k dhaago se piroya hai wakayi kabil-e-taarif hai...

maza aa gya padh kar
bilkul purvi ji har cheez badal jati hai vaqt ke sath insaan bhi......

mujhe achcha laga ye dekhkar ki aapne mere ehsason ko na sirf padha balki mahsoos bhi kiya...

aati rahiyega aage bhi apke sath ki zaroorat rahegi...

apna khayaal rakhein..



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