Watan

[yasmeenraaz]

WATAN
Watan hai ger azeez to,watan ki rah main jaan do
Hara, bhara, zameen do,,haseen aasmaan do

Phatak na paayae raah-zen,Lutae kahin na ae watan
Gali,gali,ho pur-aman,Hara,bhara rahae chaman
Watan hai ger azeez to,zara sa ae dhiyaan do.......

Ae dooriyaan,ae faasilae,Isae gilae,usae gilae
Ae dushmani kae silsilae,Batae hovae ae khafilae
Watan hai ger azeez to,Wafa ka imtihaan do.........

Ae zaat,paat aur dharam,Banaayae sub ko bae-rehem
Ghalat taerae maerae khadam,Diloan main bae-wajha wehem
Watan hai ger azeez to,Shehed bhari zabaan do......

Sisak rahi hai boordhi maan,Yahan dhowaan,wahan dhowaan
Hain aabroo ki dhajjiyaan,Kae bik rahi hain baetiyaan
Watan hai ger azeez to,Unnhaen bhi ek makaan do.......

Ho "RAZ"daan watan kae tum,Ho paasbaan chaman kae tum
Piyaam ho aman kae tum,Sitaarae ho gagan kae tum,
Watan hai ger azeez to diloan ko tum Quran do
Watan hai ger azeez to,watan ki rah main jaan do

"RAZIA YASMEEN RAZ"

[manoj kureel]

Ae zaat,paat aur dharam,Banaayae sub ko bae-rehem
Ghalat taerae maerae khadam,Diloan main bae-wajha wehem
Watan hai ger azeez to,Shehed bhari zabaan do......

Sisak rahi hai boordhi maan,Yahan dhowaan,wahan dhowaan
Hain aabroo ki dhajjiyaan,Kae bik rahi hain baetiyaan
Watan hai ger azeez to,Unnhaen bhi ek makaan do.......

Ho "RAZ"daan watan kae tum,Ho paasbaan chaman kae tum
Piyaam ho aman kae tum,Sitaarae ho gagan kae tum,
Watan hai ger azeez to diloan ko tum Quran do
Watan hai ger azeez to,watan ki rah main jaan do

Razia sahiba
sach....aapne is nazm se mujhe behad jazbaati kar dia....mein salaam karta hoon aapki watanparasti ,aapke jazbe aur aapki kaabiliyat ko...bahoot bahoot khubsurat kalaam kaha hai aapne...magar mujhe afsoso hai ki shayri ke kisi bhi qadardaan ki nazar kyun nahin gayi ab tak is kalaam par....
waqai....aapke jazbaat,,aapke alfaaz,,aapki soch ,aapki jubaan,,aapka lehja..jab sab mil kar kalaam ka roop lete hai to mein kho sa jata hoon aapki shayri ki gehrai mein...jis saleeke se aap gazal kehti hai wo ek jazbba sa paida karta hai...aap ke kadmon ke nishaanon par chalne ka...
aapki is nazm ne mujhe Sahir aur Manjar Bhopali saheb ki yaad dila di...aapka lehja sach mein peshwarana hai...
meri bharpoor daad kubool kijiye..aur yeh nazm to aapko dard section mein bhi post karni chaiye thi....sab log padh sakte ...
-MANOJ