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8th June 2016, 06:22 PM
“AAD ME”
aaine ki aad me apni surat chhupate ho... zindagee kya is kadar beparda si ho gayi.. jeene ki aad me tum bas marte se jaate ho.. zindagee kya is kadar beparwah si ho gayi.. ek baar to haso jab wo hasi si lage.. dil k jajbaat jaisa ho wo na bebasi si lage… khwabo ki aad me tum apni ninde udate ho… raate kya is kadar bewafa si ho gayi.. jeene ki aad me tum bas marte se jaate ho.. zindagee kya is kadar beparwah si ho gayi.. hasi ki aad me apne gum chhupate ho.. riste kya is kadar khokhale se ho gaye.. parchaion ki peeche bas daude se jate ho.. dil k charag kya is kadar dhundhale se ho gaye.. naummedi ki aad me dilaggi jiye jate ho.. aisi v kya tum se khata si ho gayi.. jeene ki aad me tum bas marte se jaate ho.. zindagee kya is kadar beparwah si ho gayi.. milenge aur bhi bahane jeene k kabil... bas tu hi ni tanha hai toota jiska dil wafa ki aad me khud ko tode se jaate ho... zindagee kya is kadar behaya si ho gayi... jeene ki aad me tu bas marte se jaate ho.. zindagee kya is kadar beparwah si ho gayi.. |
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9th June 2016, 04:05 PM
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Bahut khoob..........waaah..!! अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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9th June 2016, 06:28 PM
Bohat khoob nazm kahi hai aapne sailor sahib
Khoob tarteeb diya hai aapne tamaam misro Iss dilkash nazm pe khaaksaar ki daad qubool karey Duaao mai hamey bhi yaad |
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10th June 2016, 02:40 PM
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wahhhh bahut khoobsurat ehsaas..................  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th June 2016, 09:00 PM
buhet achaa likhaa hey aap ney
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12th June 2016, 02:26 PM
Awy ji....
ek khoobsurat rachana par dil se daad..  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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13th June 2016, 09:37 AM
Aap sabhi ko tahe dil se shukriya....
*apna hi tamasha banaya h humne sare bazzar... wo bhid ko dekh hamare kareeb v na aaye!!! |
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