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Love pyar ka mod - 6th August 2004, 10:11 PM

phir kyon woh
mod aaya hai zindagi mein
jise peeche chod aaye the hum
woh mod phir kyon aaya hai
jisse muh mod aaye the hum
phir kyon woh sawaal hai samne
jise adhoora chod aaye the hum
phir kyon layi hai zindagi us mod par
jahan unse naata tod aaye the hum
   
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7th August 2004, 02:30 AM

Sonal ji,
yeh to zindagi ka sach hai..
jo aata woh jaata zaroor hai.. aur jo chala jata hai, woh ek baar to laut ke zaroor aata hai..

Bahut achi kavita likhi aapne.. lekin yehi kuch aise sawaal hain, jinka jawaab shaayad har ek insaan dhoondta hai..

Bahut khoob...

khush rahiye..

~Priya



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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Bahut Khub - 7th August 2004, 12:09 PM

Hiii sonal,
how are you?

aankhon se jo kartain ho baatein,
jo sidhe dil ke paar hotii hain,
shabdo ke jadoo bikher kar,
jindagi pyaar main khoti hain,

jitni bhi tariif karu aapki
utni hai kam,
phir bhi aapki har baat har gazal par
humari dhadkan behaal hoti hai....


Likhte Rahiye...

byee and take care
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7th August 2004, 01:01 PM

hi priya ji

shukriya
aapko yeh pasand aaya
well aisa kyun hota hai ki jisse door jana chaha wohi aur kareeb aa gaya

why??

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7th August 2004, 01:06 PM

hi amit

well thanks for writing
u really wrote amazingly well

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hi again - 7th August 2004, 01:09 PM

hi again...........zindagi k baare me kya likha ha tumne.....

khuda ki kasam sahi likha ha.totally impressed

ye bahut accha tha

hamari dosti kabul kijiye

apna email address bhi dijiyega

bye tk cre


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7th August 2004, 01:12 PM

hi prashant

well thanks

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