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18th November 2013, 04:01 PM
Tere khush rakhney ko jo aati hai sa’oobat hamein (sa'oobat = difficulty)
utna toh dushwaar nahin hai gham-e-qurbat hamein Bhigii aankhon me dekhi hamne woh neemkash nazar (neemkash = half drawn) tashnaakaam rakhey ho jab aaee hai furqat hamein (tashnaakaam = thirsty) Kaaghazee hai rishtaa mera tere dil se bandhaa hua (kaaghazee = delicate) sakhtee-kashaan me kahiin na aa jaaye ghurbat hamein Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein Ae ham-safiiron mere dildaar ke qareeb mat jaanaa (ham-safiiron = co-inhabitants) kahin tumhari shuhood me na mil jaaye hurmat hamein (hurmat = respect) Dekho “Safeer” ko gar tum ees kuchey se ghuzarte kahin toh yeh nahin ki kiya hai aaj dilbar ne rukhsat hamein ~ Safeer ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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18th November 2013, 04:40 PM
waaahhhhhhhh Aadeil saahab.... kyaa nagma buna hai aapne ehsaason ke taar se.... ek ek sher apne aalaatereen hone ki gawaahi de rahaa hai.... har lafz karishmaai hai... har andaaz jaadugari hai..... kyaa kehne.... dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko is kalaam ke liye....
Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein Shaad... |
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19th November 2013, 10:42 AM
Aadaab Shaad saab. Shukriya aapki daad aur chaahat ke liye.
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th November 2013, 11:14 AM
aadeil bhai aapne kya lafzon ko sajaya hai
waaaaaah daaaaaaaaaad pesh karte hai |
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20th November 2013, 03:50 PM
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ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd November 2013, 01:58 AM
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Bas ek guzarish hai, is line mein sakta huraha hai "Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko" Ager "shikast dil" ke aywaz "shikasta dil" woh to sher wazan bana rahye ga |
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22nd November 2013, 10:59 AM
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Aapke suggestionko hamne note kiya hai. YahaaN to ham tabdil nahiN kar paa rahe haiN par hamne isse apne note me change kar diya hai. Iss tarah suggestions dete rahiyega. Thaks a lot. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th December 2013, 07:49 PM
waaaah..waaaah..kya nagma hai...kya soch aur jasbaat hain...daad
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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9th December 2013, 11:13 AM
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Aapki daad qbul hai.... ~Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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30th December 2013, 05:10 PM
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:-) Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se, Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein... The Demon Prince...  |
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30th December 2013, 06:00 PM
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Adil ka salaam ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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