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my dohas....... -
21st February 2006, 08:45 PM
these are some dohas which i wrote...hope for some replies..
naa mera koi naam hai, naa hai koi pehchaan. Prabhu charnon ka daas hoon, bas itna hai gyaan. --------------------- ruk jaa manwa ruk jaa, bhaaga koso koss, par ko dekha bahot hai, ab dekho antar dos. -------------------------- deenanath se milan ka, 'sushil' ek hi rasta, pahaad chadhe na mile, woh toh antar mein basta. ----------------------------- aatam hi woh tirth hai, jisme sai hoy, baahar dhoondhe naa mile, mile aapan mein khoy. ------------sushil |
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arvind vyas |
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arvind vyas -
20th February 2007, 08:50 PM
Shushil ji,
Bahut achchhi rachnaye hai. bahut achchhe vichaar hai 2 line me hai bade achchhe hai Aap aise likhte rahe......aasha karta hu...... yeh dohe jaise hai.......per dohe nahi dikhte.......kyo ki doho me 11..13...11..13 matraye hoti hai........ Dhanyabad Arvind Vyas "Pyas" |
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18th March 2007, 04:56 AM
sahaab ji
they r awesome |
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24th March 2007, 07:29 PM
thanks friends
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai. |
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7th July 2009, 05:20 PM
Bohat khoob Sushil Saheb...........
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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3rd August 2009, 07:24 PM
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bahot acha likha hai aapne..god bless u..kuch dohe mere apne bhi aapke samaksh rakhta hun: Sant fakir kahe sun raahi idhar-udhar mat dekh, Manjil teri ek hi, chahe rahe ho anek; Bhagwe me bhagwaan ko dhundhe murakh insaan, Sar ke baal badhane se hi milta nahin hai gyaan; Tera bhagwaan tu hi jaane main na jaanu bhai, Main to jaanu itna, aaj kisine aadhi roti khai. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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