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Ayk Nazm Doston K Naam! -
10th April 2012, 06:36 PM
Tasleemaat bhaiyo aur behno, aaj baythay baythay kuch halka phulka sa likhnay ko mann kia aur yay ghustaakhi kar baytha...ummeeed haye it'll bring a smile to some of you and help lighten up your tensions. PLEASE NOTE: Any resemblance to any Poets is purely intentional although factually fictitious!
Ayk trivia: Can you count how many poets are mentioned? Insaan baday mohtaram rahtay hayn yahaan par, Thandaon kay sang-sang garam rahtay hayn yahaan par! Kaheen fikr mayn hayn Fikr, islaah ko laykar, Kaheen shaad huay Shaad vivaah ko laykar! Ahmadayn huay Mast hayn aulaad ko paakar, Ishq o Radhika hayn khush Manshaa ko bulaaker! Zainy nay uthaa rakhi hay Aa Taish mayn bandook, Ghayal huay Hassaas inkaa aysa haye salook! Muhabbat wa shafaqqat yahaan chitkaatay hayn Naresh, Anaarhi ka Ajnabi ka Amaanush ka ho pravesh! Bismil wa Ufaq nay khila k rakhay hayn kanwal, Mushkil ghadee may kaam sadaa aatay hayn Dhaval! Rehtee haye yahaan ayk Pari, haye Raaz ki yay baat, Maikash hayn baythay Zidd mayn lay Fezan apnay saath! Zarraa bhi karay hayn yahaan Saahil ko ik Sifar, Abdul Qadeer nay sajaaya Noor say yay ghar! Zindagee haye ayk issay rehnaa nahee Anjaan, Aao badhaayayn milkay bazmay Shayri ki Shaan! .................................................. .................................................. .......... Ahmad Hyderabadi |
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11th April 2012, 08:09 AM
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Waaahhhh waahhh waahhhhh mere bhai... kya khoob samaabandi ki hai aapne subah subah padhkar ise yqeen maaniye meri khushi ka koi thikaana nahi hai... Subhan Allah...... bahot hi appreciable hai aapki ye Nazm, poora SDC utaar ke rakh diyaa hai aapne isme.. Meri jaanib se laakhon Daad qubool hoN bhai.... Kuch misre jinhe padhkar hasi nahi ruk pa rahi hai wo ye hain... Kaheen shaad huay Shaad vivaah ko laykar! hahaha kya bataaun bhai, aaapne to meree dil ki baat nikaal ke sab lke saamne rakh di....   Zainy nay uthaa rakhi hay Aa Taish mayn bandook, haahahahaha..... magar yahan par "no comments" warna abhi Zainy tapak padengi bandook uthaakar...  Mushkil ghadee may kaam sadaa aatay hayn Dhaval! ye aapne bilkul sacchi aur khari baat kahi hai saahab... ab koi maane ya na maane magar iska lafz lafz sach hai itni mujhe khabar hai... Ab jawaaab us baat ka jo apne poocha hai... to saahab mere khayal se yahan aapne shaayad 28 shaayaroN ke naam mention kiye hain... Ahmed bhai aapko Meri aur tamaam shaayri parivaar ki taraf se bahot bahot shukriyaa... jo aapne hum sab ko is laayaq samjha aur apna keemti waqt is khoobsurat Nazm ke liye diyaa... Allah yuNhi aapko Shaad rakhe, Aabaad rakhe... Shaad... |
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11th April 2012, 08:35 AM
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 Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th April 2012, 12:23 PM
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Janab AHMAD Sb... Wah Kia Kehnay.... Kia Khubsurat Nazm Se Nawaza Hai Aap ne .... Waqaae Parh Kar Bohot Lutf Mila.... Dheron Daad Or Mubarakbaad Qabool Farmaaiye... Khush Rhaiye Or Yunhi SDC Ki Raunaq Barhatay Rahen..... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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11th April 2012, 03:34 PM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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11th April 2012, 11:30 PM
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Shukriya mere bhaai is naacheez ki ghustaakhi ko bardasht karnay ka aur apnee anmol daad ki inaayat ka! Dil ko tasalleee huee k aapnay bura nahee manaya yay jaankar aur aapkay pyaar bharay kalimaat sunkar, once again a big thank You! Raha suaal shayraon ki miqdaar ka....aap qareeb hayn par kuch aur zaayid mawjood hayn ghaur farmayayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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11th April 2012, 11:33 PM
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Aapki aamad aur nawazish nay dil ko baagh baagh kerdaala. Ayk baar phir say maazrat chahoonga aap say aur deegar shuraa say agar mayree koee badtameezee say kisi ko bhi thays pahunchee ho. Dili sakoon mila aapko yahaan daykh. Duagoh Ahmad |
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14th April 2012, 04:24 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Aapki aamad wa purkhuloos kalimaat say nawaaznay ka tahay dil say shukriyaa! Aapko lutf aaya jaankar buhat khushee huee! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath nibhaatay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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14th April 2012, 04:29 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Baytakallufi kay liyay maafi talab haye, aapki aamad wa honslafzaai ka dili shukriaa! Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 04:57 AM
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15th April 2012, 09:57 AM
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mere khyaal se aapne 29 shaayro ke naam shaamil kiye hai. |
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15th April 2012, 12:15 PM
Zainy nay uthaa rakhi hay Aa Taish mayn bandook.......
 Ufffffff...hadd hai,....mujhe tou bandooooook ki spelling bhi nahi pata,...bandook uthana tou door ki baat,....masoom bachi per itna bada ilzaaam....not fair.......:-)..mere teddy bear ko hi dekh lijiye hamesha phool uthaye khada rehta hai...... Waise mere haath me bandook hoti tou phir baat hi kya thi.... Khair..regarding your question kitne shayer ke naam hain nazm me.....i guess 32,ahmadayn kehker khud bhi include kar liya hai aapne,quite smart... ....hmmmmmmm.......Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th April 2012, 01:23 PM
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Ishq o Radhika hayn khush Manshaa ko bulaaker! bohat sundar jis taraha nazm me shair ke naam ko shamil kiya .. accha laga very well .................... 
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15th April 2012, 06:05 PM
Ahmad Bhaa'ii:
salaam! mujhe bahot KhuShii huii ees koShiSh ko paDh kar... bhaaii ees Parivaar ko maine hameshaa apnaa Ghar hi maanaa haii.. aur aap sabhee dostoN ko apnaa saathi jinke saath maiN KhuShi aur Ghum donoN baaNT saktaa huuN... hum sabhee yahaaN par Shaa'iiree kee wajh se juDe huye haiN .. sab alag alag jaGah se haiN par rehte sab saath mein hai... duaa hai yeh saath hameshaa banaa rahen.. maiN Khudaa se hameshaa se hi yahee duaa kartaa huuN kii ees Parivaar meiN sab ke beech pyaar hameshaa banaa rahen...aapki koShiSh dil ko Chhu gayiiN.. hazaaro daad-o-mubaaraqbaad...! KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKhen duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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15th April 2012, 06:09 PM
Kaheen shaad huay Shaad vivaah ko laykar!
"Shaad Bhaa'ii"... aap ko "Vivaah" ke baad kitni KhuShi horahee hai bhaaii .. hamein bhee bataayeN.. ab huZoor qai'd ho chuke haiN Hahahaha kya bolenge aapka ~Dhaval |
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15th April 2012, 06:24 PM
nazam jitni chhoti ho utni hi sakhat hoti hai , fir bhi koshish achhi hai
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15th April 2012, 07:34 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Janaab haqeeqat tou yay haye ki aap sabhee dostoan ka apna apna maqaam is khaaksaar kay qalb may mahfooz haye, nazm mayn jagah tou kuch bhee naheen, aap logaon ka khuloos buhat muaynay rakhta haye. aapki inayat e daad sar aankhaon par! Ilteja haye aapsay yoon hee saath daytay rahayn. Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 07:38 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Aapki aamad wa pasandeedgi ka dili shukriaa. Khushee huee apko yahaan daykh. Bhaee You are close but kuch aur shuraa bhee shaamil hayn. Will tell the answer and the list soon. Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 07:49 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Buhat buhat shukriaa aapkee aamad wa jawaabdehi ka. Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath nibhatee rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad ps:- Agar behna aapnay ek iota bhi mind kiya haye tou muaafi talab haye verna you can keep it. |
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15th April 2012, 07:56 PM
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Aadaab Manshaa Behen, Welcome! Thank You for visitng , liking and not minding my poem. Dili shukriaa aapki aamad wa saraahna ka. Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath daytee rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 08:14 PM
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. Yay aap bhaaiyon aur beheno ka khuloos wa badappan haye jo isko bura nahee maana aur berdaasht kia. Mayn apkee duaon par aameen kehta hoon. Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 08:24 PM
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Aapki aamad, daad wa islaah ka dili shukriaa. Omeed haye InshaAllah aapkay zariyay ham talba kay ilm mayn izaafa hoga. Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 08:55 PM
Aadaab Bhaaiyo Aur Behno , choonkee yahaan is trivia jaysay micro exam mayn bhee kuch malpractice kay waaqiyaat paysh aayay hayn mayn answer ko abhee out ker deta hoon:
List of Shura/Poets is as follows: Fikr = Janumanu Bhaee Shaad = Sameer Shaad bhaee Ahmadayn= Ahmad Shakil bhaee + Myself Mast= Vikramjethi bhaee Ishq= Ishq ek Ibadat bhaee Radhika= Radhika behen Mansha= Manshaa Thakur behen Zainy= Zainy Behen Taish = Lucky bhaee Ghayal = Sajid Ghayel bhaee Hassaas = Masood Hassaas bhaee Naresh = Naresh Mehra Saab Anaarhi = Anaarhi (Name not known but Solid old member) Ajnabi= Ajnabi (Name not known, old member) Amaanish = Muskhil = Kishore Sahab Bismil = Pradhyumaan bhaee Ufaq = Uff Ak bhaee Pari = Praneeta behen Raaz = Yaasmeen Raaz Sahayba Maikash = Maikash Sahab ( See list of moderators) Zidd = Zidd bhaee Fezan= Fezan sahab( Old and solid member) Zarraa = Zarraa bhaee Saahil = Saahil sahab ( old and solid member) Sifar = Kunaal bhaee Abdul Qadeer = Abdul Qadeer Toopchi bhaee Noor = Aslam Noor Saahab Zindagi = Zindagi5 Saahab Anjaan = Sumit bhaee Shaan= Shaan Saahab ( An old and solid member) Ya'nee sahee jawaab aap sab apnay apnay tabassum ke peeche liyay ghoomtay hayn......yaaniki 32. Thank You All Ahmad |
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15th April 2012, 09:35 PM
Wow!,....matlab mera answer correct hai!...how smart of me.......:-P.....:-)
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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