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13th June 2004, 09:07 PM
ajj..mausum bhi..apna..rookh dikha raha hai
zindgi jaise maut ko daaw par laga rahi hai asmaan mein ... kaale..baadal...chhaye hai.. lagta hai...ajj...fir...ek andhi ... si aai hai.. pyaar se kabhi jise apni parchhai kahta thha itna andkar hai ke woh bhi ab nazar nahi aa rahi hai ab to har pal...mere..sathh sirf meri tanhai hai... kaash...is suraj ki tarah mera...bhi jivaan dhal jata... kaash... maie bhi ghum ke samundar maie doob jaata par yah maan kaha baat maanta hai har roz ek sahra paar karta hai yahi soch kar .... maut se ladta hai reat ke dher maie zindgi ko chhupata haipar........ ajj..mausum bhi..apna..rookh dikha raha hai mera vajood hi mitaane aayi hai lagta hai...ajj...fir...ek andhi ... si aai hai.. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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Re: ek andhi ... si aai hai.. -
13th June 2004, 09:24 PM
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mere aaine, haan, tumne sach hi kaha hai.........ek andhi ... si aai hai.. par dost yah aandhi jo aaj is site par aayi hai... woh reat bhi khushbu se bhari laai hai............. tum yaha aaye............ tumhara dard bhi sathh aaya humae yunh laga ke .... jaise apna koi aaya... tum jab bhi likhte ho... dard ka sailaab jaise aa jaata hai par oose hum paar kar jaate hai.. kyun ki tumse hi pareewaar hai aaj aaye ab yunhi aate rahna. tumhari meena |
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hi -
14th June 2004, 04:57 AM
tanhai
kaise ho ? kahan gum the..boss or kitne dinon bad aye..yeh dard bhara klaam lekar nasirya klaam..kiya baat hay yar...bohat acha laga parh kar... yar kahne ka haq to nahi banta....magar phir bhi kahta hun.. k dobara gum nahi ho jana.... apna khyal rakhna..or likhte rehna agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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14th June 2004, 12:57 PM
M.A.T ji!
Kaii dino baad aapko yahaan dekh kar behad khushi hui! Aapke dost aapko kitna miss karte hain ye to aap jaante hi honge.. is bazm me bhi aapki kami mehsus hui hai.. aaj aapne is kalaam se wo kami kuchh puuri ki.. Humesha ki tarah har lafz dard e dooba hai.. bohat achha likha hai aapne.. yunhi likhte rahiyega..  |
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14th June 2004, 08:12 PM
Maneesh Bhai ..
Masroofiyat aisi bhi kya apnoN ko bhula do ? kaise ho .. bahut dinoN bad rabta hone ja raha hai Hum jab bhi aate the aapko talashte the magar har baar nigahoN kii hadoN se bahar pate the .. khair Hamesha ek jaisa likhte ho .. kabhi to topic change kiya kijiye bhai ite sare gum hum kaise sahenge .. waise iss baar aapne kuch raham kiya hai .. kam se kam apne aap ko mara to nahi hai .. HE HE kya karuN bhai tum rubru to kabhi mile nahi socha yahin pe thoda sa hasi mazaak kar liya jaye .. hai naa bahut achha likha hai Choti sii tareef humse bhi le lo Hamesha khush raho |
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14th June 2004, 10:38 PM
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14th June 2004, 11:13 PM
Dost..
Aaj bahut hi dino baad nazar aaye yaha par..sach,bahut khushi hui yahan dekh kar tume aaj!! Aur baat rahi kalaam i,tau main tau yahi kahoonga ke aaj fir aapne wahi saaj ched diya hai jiske aap maahir ho..wahi dar wahi bebasi aur wahi maut ki talaash.. Yunhi aate raha karo yahan.. Varinder |
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16th June 2004, 04:42 PM
Tanhai ji,
"aaj phir lagta hai ki ek andhi si aai hai..." bahut achchhi lagi aapki kavita-cum -shayri.. bahut din baad apki koi rachana padh raha hoon. likhate raha kijiye. shubhkamnao sahit Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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