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1st March 2009, 01:23 PM
Doston aaj hum interview ka silsila aagay badhate huye...Dheer ji ka naam announce kar rahe hain...
Dheer ji is site ke ek bohat hi acche shayer hain,inki likhi har ghazal ek se badhkar ek hain, jinki lafzon me tareef karna na mumkin hai... aayiye aaj hum inke baare me inse hi kuch sawaal karte hain.... Dheer ji aapka yahan swagat hai.. 1:...sabse pehle to aap apne baare me kuch bataiye, aapki family, dost, education, profession,hobbies..etc 2:shayri ka shouq aapko kab aur kaise hua..?? 3.aapke pasandida shayer kaun hain? chaliye filhaal aap in sawalon ka jawaab dijiye..hum kuch aur sawalon ke saath phir hazir honge.. ZAINY Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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1st March 2009, 06:26 PM
dheeraj bhaaii,
interview ke is kaTghare me.n,mai.n aap ka swaagat karta huu.n... ummeed hai yeh interview ke zaiye aap ke kaafi un-chhuye pehlu ke baare me.n jaan,ne ka mauqa mileaa..  Mayank |
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1st March 2009, 10:32 PM
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namaste Zainy saHiba! zar'rah nawaazee ke liye shukriyaa. ab aap guftgoo ko interview kaa naam de to yuN hee saHeeH. maiN haazir e khidmat huN. Quote:
um'r 26 saal. kad 5 foot 8 inch aur rang gehuaa , dubla-patla shareermaiN Udaipur(Rajasthan) meN palaa-baRhaa huN. high school tak kee taaleem maine waheeN HaaSil kee aur phir Electronics & Communication meN B.Tech, NIT Warangal (AP near hyderabad) se kee. pichhle 3-4 saal se maiN GurgaoN, Haryana meN ek start-up hardware company meN kaam kar rahaa huN. meraa specialization ASIC(digital IC) designing meN hai. ***** mere parivaar meN maa-pitaa ji, dada ji aur meree dharam-patni(Abhilasha) hai. inke alaavaa meree teen bahneN haiN jinkee shadi ho chukee hai. maa-pitaa ji aur dada ji Udaipur meN hee rahte haiN aur maiN aur Abhilasha Gurgaon meN haiN. parivaar meN iklautaa huN so laaR-pyaar aur zimmedaaree, donoN ke lihaaj se ameer huN . ***** ab saHeb! dostoN ko doosaraa parivaar kahte haiN so meraa bhee yaheeN maan'naa hai. magar is parivaar kee population din-doonee raat chaugnee ho rahee hai . school ke dost, phir college friends, friends in professional life, social life and friends given by poetry. ***** uper waale kaa karam rahaa hai keh rishte-naatoN meN meraa bharosaa jaisa kal thaa waisaa aaj hai. !!aTooT!! ***** hobbies:- shauq kaee paale the magar ab shaa'iree aur sangeet hee bachaa hai! ************************************************** Quote:
shaairee paRhne kaa shauq sangeet sunte-sunte jaagaa. paRhte-paRhte sukhan kee qad'r karnaa aayaa aur usee se sanjeed'ah shaairee (writing) kee or meraa rujhaan huaa. college ke zamaane meN Drama ke liye chhoTee-moTee script aur rhyme(tuk-band)sentence banaanaa mere liye aasaan kaam thaa. dil o dimaaG kuchh had tak creative the aur dostoN kee Hoslaa-afzaayee ne unke par lagaa diye. saHeeH maay'ne meN mere sukhan kaa safar mid 2005 meN shuroo huaa, aisaa maiN kah saktaa huN. is se pehle meree shaa'iree , shaa'iree kam aur Dairy ziyadah thee. ************************************************** Quote:
sawaal mushkil hai. kabhee is or sochaa naheeN.maine ka'ee shaa'iroN ko paRhaa hai aur beshtar kuchh nah kuchh aisaa kah gaye jo mere pasandida meN shumaar haiN.phir bhee Iqbal, Mir, Ghalib, Jigar, Firaq etc.. list lambee hai aur jawaab thoRaa saa pheekaa, so mazaarat-khwaah huN. ************************************************** Zainy saHiba! aapke sawaaloN ne kaafee had tak piTaaraa khaalee kar diyaa. .is izzatafzaayee ke liye ek baar phir tah e dil se aapkaa shukriyaa adaa kartaa huN. ijaazat chaahtaa huN!! khairandesh Dheer |
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1st March 2009, 10:35 PM
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2nd March 2009, 11:42 AM
dheeraj bhaaaii,
aap aaiye, aap se zara baatcheet ho jaaye ab.. aap apni zindagii ke baare me.n kyaa kahna chaahe.nge? aap ke zindagii ka koii aisaa sabaq jo aap samajhte hai.n ki sosto ko bataana zaruuri hai, agar duniyaa ko sudhaaren e kiye zaruuri ho to bataaiye..... filhaal ke liye itna hii...... Mayank |
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2nd March 2009, 01:19 PM
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namaste Mayank bhaai!! ***** jo kuchh hai zindagee hai. maiN apnee zindagee se mutmayeen huN. koee gilaa naheeN, shikwa naheeN. sun'ne meN baat ajeeb lagtee hai magar is ne mujhe woh sab kuchh diyaa hai jo ise denaa chaahiye. ***** zindagee ke sabaq yeh khud hee sikhaatee hai, maiN kuchh kahuN to chhoTaa muNh baRee baat hogee. mere liye iskaa sabaq yaheeN hai ki "See the brighter side of each and every outcome. jo bhee hotaa hai , bhalaa yah buraa, yah to insaan donoN kee zimmedaaree khud le yah dono ko hee uperwaale kaa prasaad kahe. bhalaa kiyaa to maine kiyaa aur buraa huaa to uperwala, yeh soch qatai naheeN honee chaahiye." ***** duniya ko sudharne kaa meree nazar meN ek hee nuskhaa hai. woh yeh ki "akelaa chanaa bhaaR naheeN phoR saktaa" kahaavat ko bhulaa diyaa jaaye. apne hisse kee imaandaaree aur apnaa hisse kaa effort yeh soch ke naheeN lagaanaa ki is'se kyaa hogaa? to is soch ko ukhaaR pheNkiye. is or meree koshish sadaa rahee hai magar, insaan huN so kaheeN nah kaheeN mujh se bhee is soch kaa niraadar huaa hogaa. magar koshish jaaree hai. ***** mere jawaab philosopher's mind kee ijaad se dikhte haiN magar haqeeqat hai so arz kar Daalaa. bahut bahut shukriyaa Mayank bhaai. phir milenge! khairandesh dheer |
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3rd March 2009, 10:17 PM
Dheer ji ..main aap ki mamnoon-o-mutashakkir hoon ki aap ne mere sabhi sawalon ke maakul jawaab diye hain.
bohat hi khushnaseeb hain shayri.com ke sabhi members,jinhe aap jaise behtreen shayer ka saath mila hai. aapke har ghazal me hame kuch na kuch seekhne ko milta hai.. aaj kuch aur sawalon ke saath main hazir hoon: 1.waise to mujhe shayri ,aur urdu adab ka zyada ilm to nahi hai, jo kuch bhi seekha hai, yahi per seekha maine, phir bhi aaj jab aap jaise ustaad se kuch poochna ka mauka mil raha hai to itna zarur poochna chahungi,ke hame apni shayri mein wazn laane ke liye kya karna chahiye. 2.jab ehsaason ko,alfaazon me utarna mushkil ho raha ho to kya kiya jaye 3.accha shayer banne ke liye,acchi urdu ka aana behad zaruri hai,urdu zabaan per maharat kaise haasil ki jaaye..? 4.acchi shayri kaise ki jaaye,kuch tips dijiye hame.. filhaal itna hi.. zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd March 2009, 11:05 PM
AAdab Dheer Sahab,
Accha lag raha hai aap ko Is thread per dekhkar....AAp jaise Umda Shayar se Kuch sawaal karne ka hame.N bhi mauqa mila hai..... Maafi chahungi agar mere koi sawaal se pareshani ho to..... 1) 'Acchi Ghazal" ke liye Baher kitna maiine rakhta hai??? Kaise?? 2) AAp ki likhi huwi aap ki khas pasandida ghazal kaunsi hai?? 3) Apna koi aisa kissa hame.n bataye jab aap ne mahesus kiya ho "yeh ghazal likhna mere bas ki baat nahi" - agar aisa huwa ho to......... Filhaal to bas itna hi..... Fir haazir honge chand aur sawaalo.N ke saath... Tab tak..............  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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3rd March 2009, 11:46 PM
dheer ji aap se pehla sawaal mera ye hai ke
" aapki family main se perents ya behnon main se aapki shaksiyat per sab se ziada asar kis ka hai balke yun keh lain ke aapki terbiyat main ziada haath kiska hai" ? " aap ka baat kerne ka andaz behad mudalil hota hai to aapki gehri soch ke peeche kia cheez kaar farma hai koi waqiya koi kitaab ya koi insaan jis se aap behad mutasir hain koi to hoga "? umeed hai aap jald apne jawabaat se nawazain ge apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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4th March 2009, 08:51 AM
Zainy saHiba namaste!!
phir haaZir huN. aapke sawaal tafseel se jawaab ke qaabil the magar maine apnee baat short meN kahne kee koshish kee hai. dekh liijiyegaa. shukriyaa! Quote:
aap se dast ba dast vintee hai keh mujh nau-mashq ko ustaad kah kar nah bulaaye. maiN is laayek naheeN. filhaal naheeN. shaa'iree aur guftgoo meN farq hai to saleeke kaa. isliye agar aapkee baat meN waz'n hogaa to zaahir hai shaa'iree meN bhee waz'n aayegaa. kahne kaa matlab sirf yeh hee hai keh soch gahan(gahree) honee chaahiye.so agar kisee cheez kee zaroorat hai to roz-marra kee zindagee meN ghaur se jhaaNkne kee zaroorat hai. Quote:
waise to yeh kaareegaree dheere dheere hee aatee hai. shuruaat aam bol-chal kee bhaasha se kiyaa jaanaa chaahiye. agar shuruaat meN hee kathin alfaaz aur mushkil zabaaN kaa istemaal kareNge to baat naheeN banegee.initially jis par command ho usee zabaan kaa istemaal keejiye. Quote:
jab meraa hee urdu meN haath tang hai to maiN aapko kyaa raa'i duN. jis shaks kee maadre zabaaN (mother tongue) urdu naheeN hai uske liye urdu par mahaarat HaaSil karnaa teRhee kheer hai. Theek Thaak see urdu jo shaa'iree ke liye zarooree hai woh shaa'iree paRh kar hee seekhee jaa saktee hai. India meN ab shaa'iree kee kitaabeN hindi (devnagri) meN khoob milne lagee hai. so unheeN se faaidah uThaaye. Quote:
hmmm... yeh to unhee se poochhiye jo achchhee shaa'iree karte haiN .. maiN apnee baat kahe detaa huN. jaisaa keh maine uper kahaa, achchhee shaairee ke liye soch kaa achchhaa honaa zarooree hai.* achchhee shaairee woh hee kar saktaa hai jo achchhee shaairee paRhe. sab se pehle yeh jaan naa zarooree hai keh achchhaa kise kahte haiN. isliye jahaaN tak ho sake aur jitnaa ho sake asaatijah (famous poets) ke kalaamoN ko paRhiye aur baar baar paRhiye. * agar shaa'iree karne kaa shauq o jazbah ruhaanee hai to hee karnee chaahiye. kaee dost ise chaar din ke fashion kee tarah lete haiN aur uskaa nateejaa zaahir hai. urdu-hindi poetry kee haalat kisee se chhipii naheeN. * sirf aur sirf tabhee likhaa keejiye jab aapke paas likhne ke liye kuchh hoN. * jo khayaal shaairee (sher) meN Dhaalnaa hai woh dimaagh meN saaf honaa chaahiye. agar woh zehn meN hee uljhaa huaa hai to sher bhee uljhaa huaa hee niklegaa. * apne kalaam ko paraayii yah yuN kahiye dushman kee aankh se dekhiye. apnee mistakes khud hee ko door karne kaa is se aasaan tareekaa naheeN ho saktaa. * jahaaN tak ho sake bayaan saadaa hoN. sun'ne meN ajeeb lagtaa hai magar woh chaahe husn ho yah shaa'iree, saadagee kee apnee hee importance hai. * nek aur jaankaar dostoN kee raai lene se nah Dariye. achchhaa to yeh hai keh kisee ustaad kee rahnumaayee meN shaairee kee jaaye. magar aaj ke masroof haalaat meN aisaa honaa thoRaa mushkil hai. * aik aur aham baat... har ek hunar ke neeyam-qaayede hote haiN so shaa'iree ke bhee haiN. binaa shaairee kee technicalities (buniyadi baateiN) jaane, achchee shaairee ke baare meN sochaa bhee naheeN jaa saktaa. ************************************************** ************************* Zainy saHiba! jo dil meN aayaa woh kharaa kah diyaa. yeh sirf aur sirf meree soch hai. ahbaab in se ittefaaq rakhe , zarooree naheeN. khush rahiye. dheer |
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4th March 2009, 09:27 AM
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kitnaa achchhaa hotaa ke mujhe aapkaa naam maaloom hotaa. seedhe aur binaa takalluf ke baat ho jaatee .aapke kisee sawaal ne mujhe pareshaan naheeN kiyaa. woh jaaiz haiN aur achchhe haiN. shukriyaa! aapkee baatoN kaa jawaab de rahaa huN. Quote:
jaisa keh maiN Zainy saHiba ko diye jawaab (last point) meN kah hee chukaa huN keh buniyaadee baatoN ke binaa shaa'iree meN pukhtagee naheeN aa saktee. phir aapne to 'ghazal' kaa naam liyaa hai, jiske neeyam qaaideh kuchh ziyadah hee hai. beh'r bhee unheeN buniyaadee baatoN kaa hissa hai. uske binaa ghazal ko ghazal naheeN kahaa jaa saktaa. aap khud hee sochiye keh agar yeh buniyaadee baatieN nah ho to shaa'iree aur Dairy meN kyaa farq rah jaayegaa? Quote:
imaandaaree se kahuN to kisee kee bhee (chaahe khud kee) pooree ke pooree ghazal pasand aanaa behad mushkil hai. haaN famous poets kee baat alag hai. haaN maiN apnee ghazloN ke woh ashaar likh saktaa huN jo mujhe pasand haiN. apne sawaal kaa khaamiyaaza bhugatne ke liye taiyyaar ho jaayiye. ***** tiree ik hee bindiyaa kamaal thee, yuN lagaa keh solah singaar thee, kaheeN jism sone se lad gaye, magar husn tujh saa khilaa naheeN! har din to naheeN baaGh, bahaaroN kaa Thikaanaa! guldaan ko kaaGaz ke guloN se bhee sajaanaa! kal kee socho to bhalee hee socho soch achchhee hai to achchhaa hogaa! ek hee shart pe baaNTungaa khushee tere gham meN miraa hissaa hogaa! neeyat e raahbar parakh lenaa, har koee rahnumaa naheeN hotaa! raat ashkoN se fasaan'ah e muhab'bat likh kar, sham'ma bujhte hee yeh tehreer miTaa dete haiN log! ahl e dunya bhee woh maange hai jo paanaa hai kaThin, isliye gul kee ahmiyat ko baRhaa detaa hai khaar! zindagee! teri ibaadat meN kaTee um'r tamaam, maine har saaNs meN,saaNsoN kaa chukaaya hai udhaar! is se pehle ki KhizaaN khaak meN dafnaa de use, gul ko, maalaa meN piro leN to mukam'mal hogaa! dil ke bahlaane ko iqraar e muhab'bat kar le, dil to naazuk hai kharee baat se ghaayal hogaa! tumhaaraa choomanaa peshaani ko meree, mire maathe kee har salwaT miTaataa hai! ek din gul apne his'se ke luTaa kar dekhiye, mud'datoN tak un kee boo haathoN se jaayegee naheeN! tuu saraapaa khoob-soorat thee, magar ai zindagee! ham ne paayee hee naheeN woh dekhne waalee nazar? ham ghareeboN ke muqad'dar meiN bhalaa kaisee bahaar? hamne kaaghaz ke guloN pe itra chhiRkaa um'r bhar! ab teree muHabbat bhee ik bhoolaa fasaanah hai, [q] ik band lifaafaa hai, ik khwaab puraanaa hai! ab mujh se, bataa too hee, ummeed-e-wafaa kaisee? woh aur zamaanaa thaa, yeh aur zamaanaa hai! bahaar ik um'r se barham to patjhaR meh'rbaaN mujh par, mujhe gulshan se apne door hee rak'kho to achchhaa hai! sivaa kuchh aaNsuoN ke daagh,ab us meiN bachaa kyaa hai? naye rangoN ko ab tasweer meiN bhar do to achchhaa hai! baRhaa ke raftaar zindagee kee, na jaane kyaa kar liyaa hai HaaSil, junoon e manzil meiN kisliye ham, sukoon e hastee gavaa rahe haiN! roz e av'val see hee safh'e zeest ke paRhtaa rahaa, thaa dil e naadaaN nah tab kaamil, nah ab kaamil huaa jab soch koee sher meiN, Dhalne ko tarastee hai, tab raat qalamkaar kee, bekhwaab guzartee hai! mat chheR abhee zakhm se ,ik hook si uThtee hai, sholoN ki tapish raakh meiN kuchh der to rahtee hai! kahaaN apne hii pairaahan pe jaatee haiN nigaaheN, yahaaN bas gair ke daaman pe jaatee haiN nigaaheN! namii baakii rahe aaNkhoN meN, daaman tar naheeN karnaa, rahe gauhar samandar meN, unheN beghar naheeN karnaa! rasoyee meN rakhe bartan to zaahir hai ki khankenge, zaraa sii baat par haal e watan badtar naheeN karnaa! aaftaab-e-zindagee hotaa hai raushan ek baar, ek qat^rah bhee nah too is noor kaa Z^aaye kare! raat se zakhmoN ne phir yaarii nibhaayii, raat aayii aur ye kambakh't ubhre! ik nazar Daale binaa jo khat jalaataa thaa mire, bhejataa hai aaj paigaam e muhabbat kisliye? aaNkh se jab bhii maange to motii mile, ye samandar bahut hii baRaa dil rakhe! maiN tirii raah kaa koii pat'thar naheeN, ThokareN maarataa maarataa kyoN chale? mausam-e-hijr meN abr-e-gham kaa sitam? daaman-e-yaar bin, tar-batar dil rahe! us band puraane kamre ko, jo aaj achaanak khol diyaa, tasweer lagii thii maiz pe jo, dekhii nahii gayii,pheNkee nah gayii! terii kashtii ko jaate dekh ke sochaa maine, aisaa us paar samandar ke, jaane kyaa hogaa? miTTii se banaa miTnaa hii hai, miTTii me.n use milnaa hii hai! ik rut hai mukarrar har gul kii, har gul ik din khilnaa hii hai! baaloN meN sajaa lenaa,mandir meN chaRhaa denaa, gul shaakh pe murjhaaye, aisii nah sazaa denaa! meHloN ke chiraaGhoN ke rakhwaaloN se keh do yeh, bastii ke diyoN ko bhii,bujhte se jalaa denaa! chalo toofaan ko aane do, khud ko aazamaayenge, jigar ho sindabaad apnaa, bhalaa phir kyoN Daraa karnaa! zah’n thaktaa nahiiN thak jaataa hai badan lekin, saaNs rukte hii yeh raahii bhii Thahar jaayegaa! kudarat bhii amaawas kaa kaalaa libaas laayii, chandaa nah thaa nah taare the jab raat banii dulhan!3) Quote:
haalaaN'k mushkil zameen meN fikr karnaa bhee aham hai. magar abhee tak maine itnee sakht zameen lee hee naheeN jis par dikkat pesh aaye. haaN yeh ahsaas rahtaa hai keh original ghazal ke comparision meN meree ghazal kuchh bhee naheeN. izzat-afzaayee ke liye behad mamnoon huN. apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa. dheer |
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4th March 2009, 10:49 AM
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ummeed hai sab khairay hogee! kam lafzoN meN apnee baat kah rahaa huN. Quote:
shaairee ke lihaaj se mohataram Sarwar Alam Raz kee rahnumaayee mere liye vardaan saabit huee. iske alaavaa jahaaN jis kisee se jo bhee seekhne ko milaa use GaaNTh baandh kar rakhaa hai. Quote:
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bahut kuch jaan.ne ko mil raha hai aapke bare meiN -
4th March 2009, 11:00 AM
Dear Dheer.....kaise ho aap??
accha lag raha hai aapke sawaal aur jawaab ke silsilley ko padna.....! main aapse yeh poochna chahti hoon ki jab aap SDC par aaye thy pheli baar....aapka kya nazriya raha tha tab SDC ke bare meiN aur ab kya nazriya hai ? kya aapko aisa kuch lagta hai ki SDC par kuch kamiya haiN unko door kaise kiya jana chahiye, agar hai to pls unka khulasa kijiye...aur apne suggestion bhi dijiye ! aapki diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th March 2009, 01:36 PM
Dheer Sahab,
Bahot bahot shukriya aap ka.. aap ne hum sab ke sawaalo.N ka bahot hee acchi tarah se jawab diya hai........... Rahi baat mere naam ki to aisa koi mauqa ab tak naseeb nahi huwa ke aap se jaan pahechaan ho... waise sab Purvi ke naam se jante hai Dheer Sahab, AAp ne mere sawaal ke jawab mein jo khaamiyaaza diya hai... uske liye tahe dil se shukra guzaar hoon..... agar pahele pata hota ke aisa khaamiyaaza milega to thode aur sawaalat kar leti..... khair der to abhi bhi nahi huwi... Jaise ki aap ne apne jawaab mein Zainy jee se kaha hai : Quote:
Ummid rakhti hoon jyada pareshan nahi kiya hai meine ... Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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4th March 2009, 02:12 PM
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izzatafzaaye ke liye behad shukriyaa!! jawaab kuchh is tarah hai! Quote:
pehlii baar yahaaN meree aamad binaa kisee khaas maqsad ke thee. nah to maiN sukhanwar thaa aur nah hee sukhan'fehm so SDC mere liye ek normal saa forum thaa aur kuchh naheeN! aaj chuN'k thoRaa bahut likhnaa seekh liyaa hai aur sanjeedah shaa'iree kee or meraa rujhaan hai so ab yahaaN meree aamad ek adabee mehfil meN kisee shaair kee aamad ke jaise hai. haalaa'Nk yahaaN adabee guftgoo kuchh dostoN tak hee seemeet rah gayee hai. magar meraa nazariya saaf hai. Quote:
chhoTee see baat hai magar mujhe maanee khez lagtee hai so itne meN hee apnee baat kah raha huN. koee bhee forum ek khaas maqsad liye hotaa hai jo keh forum kaa uske members se taalukaat kee waj'h hotaa hai! raa'i sirf aur sirf yaheeN hai keh members is forum ke maqsad ko samjhe. aur woh maqsad kisee se chhipaa naheeN--- shaa'iree aur adab kee khidmat!! shukriyaa!! |
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4th March 2009, 02:21 PM
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apnee kaavish ko likh kar 1-2 din baad phir se dekhiye aur dushman kee nigaah se. ek khayaal ko sher meN dhaale to ek se ziyadah sher kahiye. phir dekhiye unmeN se behtar kaunsaa hai. har shaair ko apnaa sher khoobsoorat lagtaa hai. apne sher se dil to lagaayiye magar dimaaGh ko uskee khilaafat karne deejiye. phir dekhiye!! janaab R.P Sharma kaa ek sher yaad aa gayaa. चुटकियों में कोई फ़न आता नहीं सीखने को इक ज़माना चाहिये! isliye dheeraj dhariye aur kahee gayee baatoN pe amal keejiyegaa. asar zaroor dikhegaa! par phir waheeN baat kahnaa chaahuNgaa keh is fan ke liye aapkaa jazbah ruhaanee honaa chaahiye. shukriyaa!! dua go dheer |
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6th March 2009, 09:21 AM
Dheer bhaiya:
namaste!! aapka interview ke kaTh-Ghare meiN swaagat haii!! baRii KhuShii hu'ii !!  waise to aapke baare meiN bahot kuch jaantaa huuN ! par aaj mauqaa milaa haii to aapko aapki bachpan ki aur school aur clg ke dinoN kii yaadoN meiN fir se le jaanaa chaahuNgaa maiN!to yeh rahe.N mere kuch sawaal: 1 >> bachpan meiN aapkaa sab se Fav. Khel kauN saa thaa? 2 >> school dinoN meiN aapka sab se Fav subject kauN saa thaa ?? aur kyuuN?? 3 >> kabhee aapko Teacher kii bahot DaaNT paRii ho aisaa kissa sunaa'iiye 4 >> School ke dinoN meiN aapkii aisii koii Sharaarat bataa'iiye jisse aap aaj bhee yaad kar ke haNste hoN? 5 >> "bachpan" !! kuch lafz aapki aur se.. 6 >> Hmm School ke dinoN meiN kabhee buNk kiyaa hai kyaa bhaiya aapne.. udaipur achchee city hai Ghumne-firne waali jaGah zeyaadaah haii lakes hi lakes agar jawab haaN haii to aap buNk lagaake kahaaN jaanaa pasaNd karte the?? haalaaNki maiN bhee ab udaipur meiN paRhtaa huuN !! par maiN buNk nahiiN kartaa 7 >> aapki Clg life kaisii rahiiN ?? Hostel life ziNdagee meiN bahot kuch seeKhaa deti haii kyaa maiN saHeeH huuN ?? kyaa kehnaa haii aapka Hostel life ke baare meiN? 8 >> aapkii Engg. ki paRhaa'ii jab Khatam ho ga'ii thee.. tab aapko clg chhoRte huye kyaa mehsoos huaa thaa us waQt ? filhaal ke liye itanaa hii duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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6th March 2009, 10:55 AM
Dhaval Namaste!!
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8th March 2009, 03:57 PM
Dheer ji ek baar phir hazir hoon..aapke jawaab waqay qabil-e tareef hain...
"apne kalaam ko paraayii yah yuN kahiye dushman kee aankh se dekhiye. apnee mistakes khud hee ko door karne kaa is se aasaan tareekaa naheeN ho saktaa" aapki ye baat main ta-zindegi yaad rakhungi..yaqeenan apne kalaam ko parakhne ka isse behtar koi aur tareekha nahi ho sakta.. chaliye jaate jaate aapse ek do sawaal aur pooch leti hoon.. 1:kya Abhilasha jee ko bhi shayri ka shauq hai,kya wo bhi shayri karti haiN, ya aapki shayri ki tareef karti haiN, wo jab aapki shayri ki tareef karti haiN to aapko kaisa mehsoos hota.. 2.aapki khoobsurat shayri ka source of inspiration kya hai, ya kaun hai??? filhaal itna hi... zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th March 2009, 07:57 AM
shukriyaa zainy saHiba!!
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11th March 2009, 01:28 PM
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..to unmein se aapki TOP 5 shaitaniyaan yaha vistarpurvak bataye taki humko bhi pata chale ki sanjida hone ke saath saath aap shararati bhi the.........IN DETAILS PLS................Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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12th March 2009, 07:38 PM
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.. still guzaarish par kuchh kaarnaame yaad aa gaye so likh rahaa huN 1. science fare meN karo-petro gas ke model kee gas pipe nikaal ke lab meN aag lagaa dee. 2. humon skeleton ke bulbs ko short kar ke model jalaa diyaa. 3. sazaa ke taur par bench par khaRaa kiyaa gayaa to fan kee arms muRaa dee. 4. translation karne liye kahaa to dharmendra kee aawaaz meN kiyaa. 5. class-teacher kee eyebrows ke beech lasor torch Daalnaa. is se ziyadah kharaab --> censored krapaya sawaal badal deejiye! |
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12th March 2009, 09:09 PM
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13th March 2009, 02:16 PM
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Maine to apke words ko hi follow kiya jaise apne dhaval ko kAHAa..ki aap soch bhi nahin sakte ..TO HUMNE SOCHA CHALOyeh bhi karke dekh lete hain ki socha jaaye..........ki jaisi apki image hain uske viprit aap kaise honge.....par aapke jawab se hume bilkul bhi tasalli nahin hui  ................aapne shayad humare sawaal ko thik se padha nahin......IN DETAIL PLS........ humne is post ke words badhane ke liye nahin likha tha.......Answer to aise diye hain jaise jabarjasti main apko maar ke likhwa rahin hun. .....are shaitani ki hain to garv se bataneka usmein kya hain jaise dhaval karta hain....aur main bhi......usmein kya sharmane kaa...... Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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13th March 2009, 02:58 PM
aap likhte bahot Umda ho bhai......aapse kuch bhi poochne ki himmat nai hai meri
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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13th March 2009, 03:01 PM
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mera bhi koi interview lo pls. lolzz Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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14th March 2009, 10:56 AM
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14th March 2009, 10:57 AM
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14th March 2009, 11:11 AM
Abhilasha ko poetry kaa shauq naheeN hai. but she likes to read mine.My every new piece of poetry has to be gone through her eyes. agar koee likhee ho aur use nah bataau aur kabhee baad meN woh dekh leN to shaamat aa jaatee hai
Wow !! so sweet ..mashallah mashallah..khuda aap dono ke is pyar-o.mohabbat ko ta qayamat qayam rakhe "ameen"...dheeraj ji aap se batein karke aapke kayi ruq aur pehluon se ru ba ru hone ka mauqa mil raha hai hum sab ko..mehfil ki aur se ,aap se ek guzarish hai,is baar aap shayri-e-ishq per kuch likhiye..abhilasha ji ko dedicated.. 1. science fare meN karo-petro gas ke model kee gas pipe nikaal ke lab meN aag lagaa dee. 2. humon skeleton ke bulbs ko short kar ke model jalaa diyaa. 3. sazaa ke taur par bench par khaRaa kiyaa gayaa to fan kee arms muRaa dee. 4. translation karne liye kahaa to dharmendra kee aawaaz meN kiyaa. 5. class-teacher kee eyebrows ke beech lasor torch Daalnaa. is se ziyadah kharaab --> censored krapaya sawaal badal deejiye! arre wah....kya kehne aapke...itni zyada shaitaaniya,aur kuch censored bhi hain..wah ji wah.....aapka naam to worlds best shaitaniyon me nominate hona chahiye... .....aapki sanjida ghazalon ko padhker, mehfil me kabhi kisi ko aysa laga hi nahi ke aap bhi aysa kuch kar sakte ho...but anyways bohat bohat accha laga hum sab ko aapke baare me detail me jaan ker... chaliye aa hi gayi hoon to ek sawaal aur pooch leti hoon: jab koi aapse naraaz hota hai to aap usay kaise manaate hain....??? Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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16th March 2009, 07:49 AM
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एक नज़्म अपनी हमनफ़स के नाम मिरी जाँ तेरी आँख खुलने से पहले चला हुँ मैं ये रात ढलने से पहले! मैं पत्तों से थोड़ी सी शबनम उठा लूँ, मैं सूरज की पेहली किरण को चुरा लूँ किसी फूल की खिल-खिलाती हँसी को, किसी खेत की लह-लहाती छवी को! चहकते हुए पंछियों की सदाएं, ठुमकती हुई हिरणियों की अदाएं! भरी दो-पहर में इक अम्बिया की छाया, महकती हवा और नदिया की धारा! जो हो जाये फिर शाम को लाल अम्बर मैं थोड़ा सा सिन्दूर उस का चुरा कर! ज़रा अपनी आँखों की डिबिया में भर लुँ, मैं पलकों के पीछे इन्हें क़ैद कर लुँ! इसी आशियाने में चन्दा निकलते, मैं आ जाउँगा लौट कर शाम ढलते! तेरे ख्वाब का शहर इन से सजा के, तेरी रात के घर की रंगत बढा के! तेरे चेहरे को रात भर मैं तकुंगा तेरी नींद की पासबानी करुंगा! यही सोच कर आज घर से चला हुँ, मेरी जाँ तेरी आँख खुलने से पहले! चला हूँ मैं ये रात ढलने से पहले! ================================================== == jahaaN tak aapke sawaal kee baat hai to ki koee mujh se naaraaz ho jaaye to maiN kaise manaataa huN? :-yeh depend karta hai keh jo naaraaz hai us se meree intimacy kitnee hai aur doosaraa keh ghaltee kiskee thee. koee apnaa huaa aur ghaltee par hai to bhee pyaar se manaa lungaa yah phir baat aayee gayee hone ke baad pehle saa maahaul banaane kee koshish karunga. koee paraayaa ghaltee par hai , phir bhee mujh se naaraaz hai to maiN ziyadah care naheeN kartaa. agar maiN ghaltee par huN to muaafi maangne meN naheeN hichaktaa. biwi ko manaane ke liye hotel, movie hai naa. aur kabhee kabhee binaa kharche ke bhee maan jaatee hai ? |
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16th March 2009, 12:34 PM
Dheer ji aap thode sanjida kism ke insaan hai isilye ek sanjida sawaal karna chahta hoon aapse......... !
Dheer ji, aaj kal ke mahol mein jahan har sakhs apne chehre par ek naqak Ode hue rehta hai......... to aap kis tarah shaqs ko pehchante hain........? Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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17th March 2009, 02:39 AM
dheerji,
aapke baare me paRhne ka avsar mila, achcha laga. aapka har ek kalaam behad sanjeedgi se, soch kar likhkha gaya lagta hai. iske liye aapko badhaye dena chahungi. like reading your poerty..may you always be blessed with fluency in thoughts for creating beautiful combinations of words on kindness, beauty, knowledge wisdom... best regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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17th March 2009, 07:20 AM
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.. aapke sawaal kaa jawaab mushkil hai. aadamee kee parakh chehre se to hotee naheeN. aur use ziyadah parakhne kee zaroorat bhee naheeN. aise log kam hee hote hai jinse aapkaa intimacy level high hotaa hai, so unheN parakhne kee waise bhee zaroorat naheeN aur kuchh logoN se sirf kaam se kaam rakhaa jaataa hai to iske ilaavaa unkee baakee zindagee meN bhee jhaaNkane kee kyaa zaroorat . aur ek baat. ek mulaaqat meN kisee ko pehchanne kee kalaa kudratan naheeN hotee, waqt dheere dheere sikhaa detaa hai. kabhee kabhee maaHir log bhee pehchaanne meN bhool kar dete haiN. woh kahte haiN nah "tairaak kee maut paanee meN hotee hai!" khairandesh |
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17th March 2009, 07:23 AM
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kaisee haiN aap? baRe dinoN baad aapse baat ho rahee hai. aapkee duaaoN aur Hauslaa-afzaayee ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa! apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa! |
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17th March 2009, 05:08 PM
Aapse koi sawaal nahi mujhe.. bas yehi kehne aayi thi, ki sabke sawaal aur aapke jawab padh ke acha laga Dheer ji!
Take Care ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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19th March 2009, 12:45 PM
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22nd March 2009, 09:03 AM
Dheer bhaiya:
namaste! maiN fir se aa gayaa apne kuch sawaaloN ke saath.. to huZuur ab taiyaar ho jaaye.n >> Ghazal liKhate waQt kauN- kauN sii baateN zeh'n meiN raKhni zeyaadaah Zaruuree haii yeh jaannaa chaahuNgaa! >> Shaa'iiree parivaar se juRne waale naye sadasyoN ko / naye liKhane waaleN sadasyoN ko aap kyaa kehnaa chaaheNge? >> ziNdagee ko aap kuch lafzoN meiN kis tarah bayaa.n kareNge? >> Khudaa se ko'ii daKwaaSht ? duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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23rd March 2009, 07:30 AM
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23rd March 2009, 01:08 PM
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10 days gone...............still waiting................  Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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23rd March 2009, 10:01 PM
leejiye mausam saHiba!
deree ke liye muafi chaahtaa huN. magar jitnaa yaad aayaa utna hee likh rahaa huN. namak mirch naheeN lagaayaa hai .Quote:
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