veer aur preet ki kabhi na khatam hune vali love story

[chaahat]

Veer, Raajeev(Preet's wud be) ke baare me pata karta hai... to uske baare me har jagah Raajeev ke bure character ke baare me pata chalta hai.. Jaise Cigerette, Sharaab.. Veer ko Rajeev ke past ke baare me pata chalta hai to woh yeh jaan ke bahut dukhi hota hai ki Rajeev ki 4 gf's reh chunki hain jin me se kisi ke saath bhi uska affair emotionally nahi tha, sirf physically hi tha.. Raajeev me duniya ki har buraai thi.. lekin uski looks yeh sab chupa deti thi.. woh kisike saamne badtameezi nahi karta tha.. isiliye Raajeev ki family uske is charater ke baar eme kuch nahi jaanti thi.. aur Preet ke parents bhi is sab se anjaan the.. Preet ke parents to sochte the ki ladka Khaandaai hai, rayiis hai.. dikhne me acha hai.. koi liabiltiy nahi.. jaise ki har ladki ke maa-baap sochenge.. Lekin woh Raajeev ki asliyat se anjaan hi the.

Yeh sab jaanne ke baad Veer sochta hai ki agar woh Raajeev ki sachai hi Preet ke parents ke aage le aaye, to woh Preet ko yeh shaadi karne ke liye majboor nahi karenge.. Lekin ab problem yeh hai ki... use koi pukke suboot chaahiye honge.. kyunki sirf Veer ke kehne se hi to koi yakin nahi karega.. Lekin Veer is vakt apni family ko chod ke bhi nahi ja sakta.. jiske kaaran woh Raajeev ka parda faarsh karne ke liye poori tarah concenterate nahi kar pa raha..

Aur udhar dono taraf se tension bad rahi hai.. Preet bhi jaldi kar rahi hai.. aur yeh kya aaj to Veer ke Papa ne bhi Veer ko uski bhabhi ke saath shaadi karne ke baare me sochne ko keh diya...

To be Continued :


~Priya

[donlove]

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Hello
Priya di kya khub story appne aghe likh di hai bhot achi laggi
kaisi hoo app?

Ab kuch aghe likhne ki koshish karti hoon is umid ke sath ki app sabh nu pasand ave ghy




Story

Veer bhot jyada tension me tha udhar jabh je baat Preet ko pata chalti hai ki Veer bhot tension me hai to Preet fainsla karti hai ki vo Rajveev se sagai kar le ghy aur Veer ko caal karti hai kehti hai ki vo use milna chahati hai ek bhot jarrori baat karni ke liye. Veer dosre din jabh use milta hai to jabh Preet Veer ki halat dekhti hai to uske ankhon me ansu a jate hai aur kheti hai je sabh ab meri wajjah se oh raha hai tabh Veer use je batata deta hai ki uske papa uski shadhi uski bhabhi Neha se karne ko keh rahe hai. Preet kehti tum ha khedo kyon ki me ab tumse shadhi nahi karughy meine fainsla le liya hai ki me ab Rajveev se shadhi karughy. Veer us pal chup ho jyata hai aur kuch pal kamosh rehte hai dono firh Veer kheta hai me tume ek baat batana chahata hoon Rajveev ke vare Preet kheti hai khehi tumne je to nahi kehna ki rajveev me zamane barh ki buraia hai Veer kheta ha magar tuhme je baat kisne batai? Preet kheti hai ki use sabh pata hai to veer pochta je sabh jante hoe bhi tum use kyon shadhi karoghy preet kheti hai ki tum bhi kuch saal pehle aise hi the shet ise bhi burre yaad hai tuhme ja nahi. Veer je baat sunke hairan ho jyata hai ki uski preet ne use aise khaha aur kheta jo tuhme theek lagge vo karo me tume kuch nahi kahugha par ek baat ka jawab do tum mujhe kiya tumare parens ko pata hai ki Rajveer aisa ladhka hai preet kamosh rehti hai Veer firh pochta hai firh ek dam rohne lagh padhti hai aur Veer ke gale lagh jyati hai aur kheti hai mere paas ab aur koi rasta nahi tume bhi je manna hi hogha ab hum dono kuch nahi kar sakte tum apne parens ki baat manlo me apne ki hum dono ki balai ab isi me hai.
Veer Preet ko samjhata hai aisa karne se kuch theek nahi hoe gha hame himat nahi harni chahie mera yakken karo sabh theek ho jae gha…… preet kehti hai tum sirf mere vare me soch rahe ho zara apni bhabhi ke vare socho uska kiya bane gha agar tumne inkar kar diya apne parens ke vare socho agar tum ne inkar kar diya vo abhi to is sadhme hai ki une apna ek beta kho diya agar tum bhi unka yakken thodhne lagh padhe to unpar kiya beete ghy zara is vare me bhi socho tum aur rahi baat Rajveev ki to me puri koshish karughy ki uski sachai uske parens aur mere parens ke samne la saku mera vishvas karo me tuhare siva kisi ki nahi ho sakti mere dil pe tumara name hai jo hargis nahi mit sakta.
Aur ha is liye meri madat ab Pooja bhi kareghy vo kal ko yaha par a rehi hai kyon ki Rajveer se meri parso ko pehli mulakat hai to me aur pooja use parso ko pehli var mile ghe. Uske parens chahate hai ki me ek var sagi se pehle Rajveev se mil lu.

Veer mujhse vada karo ki tum apne ghar me aisa koi fainsla nahi sunaughe jise tumare ghar me koi problem aye theek hai Preet me ghar me aisa kuch nahi kahugha jise koi problem aye par tum je vada karo aghe se mujhe is tara nahi sataoghy tume pata nahi aj mujhe kitna dard hua jabh tumne mejhe je yaad diladia ki me bhi ek var tumse milne ke pehle Rajveer jaisa hi tha aur ek aur burri baat laggi vo je jabh tumne kaha ki tum ab Rajveer se shadhi karo ghy tabh to mera dil hi nikal ghea tha kyon ki me tume ek pal ke liye bhi rohti ja dhukhi nahi dkeh sakta is liye vada karo aghe se tum aisa kuch nahi kaho ghy Preet kehti theek hai je sabh meine is liye kaha tha ki shet tum mujhse door chale jao ghe par agar tum door chal ghe me mar jama ghy je ehsah badh me hua ab aghe se koi aisi baat nahi kahughy………………

Acha Veer ab me chalti hoon jabh Pooja aghy tabh tume call akrughy firh baat kare ghe ki Rajveer ka parda fash kaise kiya jae…………
Bye Veer Bye Preet apna khiyal rakhna tum bhi………..

Ab Pooja aghy hai to Preet call karti hai Veer ko baat ke karte hai………………………………..




To be continue................


appki preet

[chaahat]

Are Preet.. yeh jo naya Pooja ka character add kiya hai.. iski introduction to do.,. kaun hai kahan se aayi... kyun aayi..

tabhi kahani aage chalegi..

Take Care..

~Priya

[donlove]

Originally Posted by chaahat

Are Preet.. yeh jo naya Pooja ka character add kiya hai.. iski introduction to do.,. kaun hai kahan se aayi... kyun aayi..

tabhi kahani aage chalegi..

Take Care..

~Priya

hello priya di

priya di shuru me meine likha tha ki preet ki choti bahen hai pooja
uski entry is liye hoty hai kyon ki preet ko uski jarrorat hoty hai rajveev ka pardha pash karne ke liye


ab aghe likho app

take carekhush rehiye aise

pagal preet

[apnekahamilte]

je kya di humne sabh sath milke ek love story shuru ki thi aur appne vo adhuri hi chodh di
aise to nahi karan chahiye tha


plz di is story me aghe bhi kuch likhi je nahi likhana chahate to likh dena preet bhi mar ghi aur veer bhi bas baha par hi love story khatam ho ghy

me ise likhana chahati thi par rabh nu manjoor nahi hoe hun me tuhadi preet ta mar hi rahi ha ta is nu hath jodh ke benti kardi isnu ta puri plz kardeo tusi sare jane ral ke plz
sare nu request kardi ha

umid hai tusi meri akhri tamana samjh ke puri jarror karughe

rabh tuhanu sare nu khush rakhe and HAPPY NEW YEAR tuhanu sare nu

tuhadi pagal preet