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Nahin Jaanta -
13th January 2003, 10:44 AM
Nahin jaanta hoon ki maszid kahan hai
na main jaanta hoon ki mandir yahan hai. Nahin jaanta hoon ki pandit kahan hai nahi hai khabar ki woh insaa khafa hai. Anndhe hain sab ...sabki aankhen jali hai anpado ke mohalle mein tu reh raha hai. Yeh basti badi hai magar jaan sasti ki insaa hee sabka lahoo pee raha hai. Insaa ke andar lahoo bhi hai neela tu apni deewaron mein rang kar raha hai. Samajhta nahi kyon tu khud ke makaan ko apne hee haathon se tung kar raha hai. 
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13th January 2003, 10:52 AM
Hamesha ki taraH, phir se ek baar bahot khoob likha hai.
Aapke lehk kabhi be-matlab nahiiN hote, aur aise hi ab bhi bahot acha matlab hai! Insaa ke andar lahoo bhi hai neela tu apni deewaron mein rang kar raha hai. Yeh to la-jawaab hai vipin sahab! Vichaar aapke bahot uuNche haiN... Likhte rahiye, Aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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13th January 2003, 11:27 AM
Vipin ji,
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne, shayad hamaari kahneki jaroorat hi nahin. aapka kavitha padne ke baad kuch aisaa lagaa ki,hum kitne chote hai ki sirf apni gumeke baare mein sochthe aayen hai (abt me), har ek aghar aap jaisaaa sochetho achcha hotaa. Bijili. Milna tha ittefaq bichadna naseeb tha Woh utnaa dur gaya jho jitna kareeb tha :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: |
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13th January 2003, 10:19 PM
Aman sahab,
Ek baar phir se aapka dhanyavaad jo aapne iss chote se insaan ki soch padi. Sach kahoon tow mujhe aapki shayri se bhi bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai. Dhanyavaad Vipin ...ek shoonya ================================== Bijli ji, Aapka bhi dil se dhanyavaad. Vaise tow her ek insaan ko koi na koi Gum hai. Dua karta hoon ki her insaan ka gum mitt jaye aur duniya khusi se jine ke liye rahe. Ek baar phir se dhanyavaad Vipin ...ek shoonya
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15th March 2006, 07:34 PM
vipin
ek anoki rachna hei ye tumari, acha laga padkar kanchan |
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15th March 2006, 10:22 PM
Kaanch
accha laga tumhare hastaakshar dekhkar. waise tumhne isse 'anokhi' ki sangya kis wajah se dee hai? kuch kami ho tow jaroor bataana. khair tumhara dhanyavaad vipin |
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16th March 2006, 09:56 AM
Samajhta nahi kyon tu khud ke makaan ko
apne hee haathon se tung kar raha hai. Mitr Vipin, meri soch kahti hai ke is tangdili ki vajah .... Vishwaas ki kami ... hai shayed.. pata nahi ... shayed nahi jaanti . |
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16th March 2006, 10:15 AM
bahut khoob chachaji bahut hi behtareen yuhi likhte raho
aap ka chottu wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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wah -
16th March 2006, 10:16 AM
kaheen na kaheen kuch aisa hoga tumahree kavita main jo gahara chhoo jatee hai bahut achee lagtee ey panktiyan
Anil Insaa ke andar lahoo bhi hai neela tu apni deewaron mein rang kar raha hai. Samajhta nahi kyon tu khud ke makaan ko apne hee haathon se tung kar raha hai -------------------------------------------------------------------- jin deewaron par mere geet meree tahreer thee aaj dekha to wahan bas naron kee bheer thee Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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1st April 2006, 02:09 AM
Pranaam Meena ji
aapne mujhe parha tow main aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon. ------ Dhanyavaad Mehul --------- Anil ji aapne isse parha, mehsoos kara tow bahaut accha laga aapka dhanyavaad vipin |
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