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aur aapne jo sher kkah diyaa hai baaton baat me, yakeeen maniye mujhe itna mutassir kar gayaa hai k main bayaan nahi kar saktaa..... bahut haseen..... bahut aala......
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28th October 2015, 09:50 AM
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aag hi aag hai har soo kahin raahat hi nahii
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Waaah....bahut khoob................
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28th October 2015, 02:47 PM
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haseen sher janaab....... bahut khoob...............................
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Shukriya shaad sahab ...................
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28th October 2015, 06:27 PM
kya gazab karte ho ishq me mujhko
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29th October 2015, 08:47 AM
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जो जले थे हमारे लिऐ, बुझ रहे है वो सारे दिये,
कुछ अंधेरों की थी साजिशें, कुछ उजालों ने धोखे दिऐ!!!!!!
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Bahut khoob....................
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29th October 2015, 08:53 AM
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kya gazab karte ho ishq me mujhko
muskarane ki duaa dete ho..
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बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने .................................
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29th October 2015, 08:58 AM
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29th October 2015, 09:08 AM
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29th October 2015, 09:19 AM
Bahut khoob sher ataa farmaye hai doston. Shaad bhai, Madhu aur Ayan khan sahab aapne ...meri jaanib se dheeron mubaarakbaad
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Bahut khoob....sher kaha hai janaab....
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Waah.....bahut khoob...
Ayan ji....maaf kijiyega par ek din me ek ya do sher se zyada post karne ki ijazat nhi hai is thread me.....
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Waah.....bahut khoob...
Ayan ji....maaf kijiyega par ek din me ek ya do sher se zyada post karne ki ijazat nhi hai is thread me.....
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aur yaqeen maniye mujhe aapko yahan dekh kar behad khushi ho rahi hai... aur ummeed karta hoon ab aap nirantar yahan aate rahenge aur yahan aapka waqt behad acchaa guzregaa.....
aur aaapka sher waaqai behad acchaa hai..... waaahhhh
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pahli koshish hai sds me , galti ho to maaf karna
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Chirag ji...bahut khoob sher hua hai....achcha laga aapko yahaan dekhkar....
Aate rahiyega......
Likhte rahein...
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Chirag ji aapka main tahe dil se SDC ki bazm me istaqbaal kartaa hoon...
aur yaqeen maniye mujhe aapko yahan dekh kar behad khushi ho rahi hai... aur ummeed karta hoon ab aap nirantar yahan aate rahenge aur yahan aapka waqt behad acchaa guzregaa.....
aur aaapka sher waaqai behad acchaa hai..... waaahhhh
likhte rahiyegaa.....
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30th October 2015, 07:19 PM
उनके आज हाथों में मेहँदी लगाने का फायदा ये हुआ कि..
रातभर उनके चेहरे से जुल्फे हम हटाते
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Waaahhh! Khoosoorat............
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30th October 2015, 09:55 PM
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