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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.
Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body
Shaad...
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15th July 2013, 10:15 AM
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
waah! shoiab bhai...bahut khoob...maza aa gaya....dheron daad aapko.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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15th July 2013, 12:41 PM
Nahi dekhaa chali .... waah waah kya baat hai sameer ji
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16th July 2013, 09:23 AM
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Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
waah! shoiab bhai...bahut khoob...maza aa gaya....dheron daad aapko.....
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai.... jaan kkar behad khushi hui ke aapko ye kalaam pasand aa saka..... saath dete raheN......
Shaad.....
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16th July 2013, 09:51 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.
Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body
Shaad...
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bahut khoob..
well done !...
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16th July 2013, 10:15 AM
Super... Bhut umda likha hai app ne...
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16th July 2013, 10:30 AM
lut rahi the wafa sare raah, aakhon main zakham the ki koi wafadar nahi tha.....
Bewafai khel rahi the dard se , yea uska aandaz tha koi majak nahi tha.....
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16th July 2013, 11:03 AM
Bahut acha n rooh ko chu lene wala likha h aapne..
Ise padhte huye jaise dil ko ek ajab sa sukun mila..
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16th July 2013, 01:41 PM
Shaad Ji ,
Exellent !!!!!! I dont have words to praise your creation.
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16th July 2013, 05:30 PM
aur shoaib saaheb, kaise haiN...?? bade dinon baad in galiyoN meN aana huN, aur aapki ghazal saamne aa gayi, ahcha laga janaab aapko padh kar, bas aakhiri sher kuch jaNcha nahiN.... Baanki ke saare sher dil fareb rahe, mazaa aa gaya padh kar, aage bhi yuNhi apne kalam se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...!!
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17th July 2013, 09:27 AM
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bas aakhiri sher kuch jaNcha nahiN....
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Aadaab Taish miyaaN... sabse zyaada aashcharya aapko yahaan dekh kar ho raha hai, aur har baar hota hai jab aaap "BADE DIN BAAD YOONHI" aate hue nazar aate hain...
Waise aapne jis aakhri sher pe nishaaandehi ki hai.. agar waazeh kar denge to behtari hogii.... warna mujhe nahi lagta sher me koi dikkat hai...
shukriyaaa.....
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17th July 2013, 11:28 AM
amaaN miyaaN aap ustaadoN ke saath yahi dikkat hai, aap har cheez ko bareeqiyoN, wazn aur jyadti bana dete hain.... mere kehne ka bas ye matlab tha ki
vo sher baaNki ghazal se kamtar sa laga mujhe, aur atpata sa isliye kyuNki shayad mujhpe dhang se khula nahin... agar aap iske saani ko khol deN to badi mehrbaani... baaNki pehli baar padhne meN mujhe baaNki ghazal se kam hi laga sher isiliye kaha tha saaheb... aap khaamakhaN naraaz ho baithe...
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17th July 2013, 11:44 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.
Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body
Shaad...
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Bahut hi baddia line
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Utha jo gir ke to dhad pe sar na raha
ye to or bhi mast tha
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
~@ :SULTAAN
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17th July 2013, 04:43 PM
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Nahi dekhaa chali .... waah waah kya baat hai sameer ji
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Mannjeet ji.... aate rahen... padhte rahen...
saath dete rahen... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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20th July 2013, 12:41 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.
Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body
Shaad...
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wah bohat khoob .....................................
Manshaa Thaakur
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23rd July 2013, 05:13 PM
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bahut khoob..
well done !...
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behad shukriyaa aaapka Monika ji.............................
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Super... Bhut umda likha hai app ne...
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Vikas ji................ tashreef laate rahgiyega...
Shukriyaa
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Bahut acha n rooh ko chu lene wala likha h aapne..
Ise padhte huye jaise dil ko ek ajab sa sukun mila..
Thank you very much for sharing such a heart touching thought..
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Behad mehrbaani aapki Puneet ji , jo aap aisaa samjhte hain......... aur aapko ye choti si koshish pasand aa saki, ye meri khushnaseebi hai.... aate rahiyegaa.... apna khyaal rakhiye.
Shaad......
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Shaad Ji ,
Exellent !!!!!! I dont have words to praise your creation.
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Hello Swaraa ji,
thanks for coming here and providing your valuable thoughts.......
do keep coming here, keep reading us, and remember us in your prayers.....
thanks.
Shaad.......................
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24th July 2013, 02:21 PM
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Bahut hi baddia line
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Utha jo gir ke to dhad pe sar na raha
ye to or bhi mast tha
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aapka behad shukriyaa Sultaan bhai................... asli kadrdaan wahi hai jo zubaan ke peeche ke ehsaason ko bhaamp jaae..... bahot bahot shukriyaa...... aate rahiyegaa
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25th July 2013, 01:38 PM
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wah bohat khoob .....................................
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behad shukriyaa aapkaa thakuraain.................. aati raheN, padhti rahen....
apna khayaal rakkheN....
shukriyaa
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25th July 2013, 10:58 PM
Khoobsurat ghazal hai shayar sahab
Dard pe wah karne ki gustakhi kar raha hai
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Khoobsurat ghazal hai shayar sahab
Dard pe wah karne ki gustakhi kar raha hai
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meri khushnaseebi hai diggaj bhai jo aap tashreef laaye.... shukriyaa duaaon se nawaazne ke liye.... shukriyaaa
Shaad....
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30th July 2013, 03:56 PM
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
vaise to saare hi sher bahot achhe hain sahab ... par mujhe ye kuch khaas pasand aaya ...
achha laga padh kar aapka kalaam ...
Aise hi likhte rahiyega ...
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Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
vaise to saare hi sher bahot achhe hain sahab ... par mujhe ye kuch khaas pasand aaya ...
achha laga padh kar aapka kalaam ...
Aise hi likhte rahiyega ...
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behad mehrbaani huzoor jo aap itne arse baad hamaari bazm me tashreef laaye... behad khushi hui aaj aapko yahan dekh kar... aur us sher ke liye alag se shukrguzaar hoon aapka.... aate rahiyega...
apna khayaal rakhiye
Shaad.......
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27th August 2013, 01:18 PM
Bohot khoob janaab, daad kubool kare...
Duaon ki guzarish,
Abrar.
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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28th August 2013, 09:19 AM
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Bohot khoob janaab, daad kubool kare...
Duaon ki guzarish,
Abrar.
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behad mehrbaani hai huzoor.................... tashreef laate rahiyegaa...
khush rahiye
Shaad....
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5th November 2013, 12:37 PM
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behad shukriyaa aaapka Monika ji.............................
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swagat hai .....................................
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6th November 2013, 11:35 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.
Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.
Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!
Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body
Shaad...
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Behterin peshkash. Kya umda qalaam hai. Har ek sheyr me wazn hai.
Likhte rahiye.
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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6th November 2013, 11:39 AM
Chand ki surkh roshni main bhiga....
Tera chehra meri sakhoon ko lut kar le gaya....vikas....
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6th November 2013, 12:27 PM
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi
Wwwwwaaaaahhhhhh !!! Aaj hi is khoobsurat qalaam ke deedaar huwe .... Khaas baat ye lagi ki kis tarah sulagte huwe pursoz ehsaasaat ka bayaan ek mast pawan ke jhonke ki tarah kiya gaya hai is ghazal mein ... aap ke fan ka pooraa lutf uthaayaa hum ne .... meri jaanib se aap ko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad Shaad bhai !!!
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6th November 2013, 01:23 PM
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Behterin peshkash. Kya umda qalaam hai. Har ek sheyr me wazn hai.
Likhte rahiye.
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aapki nazre inaayat hai janaab...... behad shukrguzaar hoon aapka...
Shaad.....
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Chand ki surkh roshni main bhiga....
Tera chehra meri sakhoon ko lut kar le gaya....vikas....
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Thanks Vikas ji for nice sher,...................
Shaad...
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Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi
Wwwwwaaaaahhhhhh !!! Aaj hi is khoobsurat qalaam ke deedaar huwe .... Khaas baat ye lagi ki kis tarah sulagte huwe pursoz ehsaasaat ka bayaan ek mast pawan ke jhonke ki tarah kiya gaya hai is ghazal mein ... aap ke fan ka pooraa lutf uthaayaa hum ne .... meri jaanib se aap ko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad Shaad bhai !!!
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Zarraa bhai, aadaab, behad khushi ki baat hai jo aap tashreef laaye... yaqeen maaniye mujhe behad khushi hoti hai jab jab aap aate haiN.... aur aapki tareef ke liye behad shukriyaa.. bas aap ki duaa bani rahe hame aur kyaa chahiye.... aapko kalaam pasand aaya bahot khushnaseebi hamaari...
aate rahiye, apna khayaal rakhiyega... khush rahiye
Shaad.................
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7th November 2013, 12:50 PM
Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi th
bahut hi khubsurat ashar likhe hai aapne bahi daaaaaad pesh hai
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Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.
Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi th
bahut hi khubsurat ashar likhe hai aapne bahi daaaaaad pesh hai
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bahot bahot shukriyaa Shakir bhai............... tashreef laate raheiyegaa...
Shukriyaaa
shaad....
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