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Mein tumhe fir miloongi -
11th January 2006, 08:35 PM
Doston...Amrita Pritam ji ki antim kavita pesh kar rahi hoon.
mein tumhe fir miloongi kahan ? kis tarah ? nahin jaanti shayad tumhari kalpana ki chingari bankar tumhare cainvas par utroongi ya shayad tumhare cainvas ke oopar ek rahasyamay rekha bankar khamosh tumhe dekhti rahoongi ya shayad suraj ki kiran bankar tumhare rangon mein ghuloongi ya rangon ki baahon mein baithkar tumhare cainvas ko pata nahin kaise kahan ? par tumhe zaroor miloongi ya shayad ek chashma bani ho Ongi aur jaise jharnon ka paani udta hein mein paani ki boonden tumhare jism par maloongi aur ek thandak si bankar tumhare seene se liptoongi mein aur kuchh nahin jaanti par itna jaanti hoon ki waqt jo bhi karega is janam mere saath chalega ye jism hota hein to sab kuchh khatm ho jata hein par chetna ke dhaage kaayanati kaNon ke hote hein mein un kaNon ko chunoongi dhaagon ko lapetoongi aur tumhe mein fir miloongi..... khaak mein jab mil gaye, dono barabar ho gaye !!! |
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12th January 2006, 06:04 PM
Amrita Pritam ji or unki is rachna ko mera salaam pahuNche
Shukriya Gayathri ji. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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12th January 2006, 07:41 PM
priy Gayathri,
yah nazam ka ansh hi tha mere paas or maine oose post kiya tha.. aaj poori nazam pa kar khush hui hu. tumahra dhanywaad... Amrita pritam ne bimaari se pahlay antim nazam likhi thi.. imroz k liye... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...=&pagenumber=3 Imroz ne kaha hai... muje fir milegi amrita. mera to kabhi pooner janam ya Ishwer par bharosa nahi raha.. par amrita ka khub raha hai. oosne apni aakhri nazam mai mujse kaha hai - mai tumhe fir milungi. amrita ki baat par to mai bharosa kar hi sakta hu. amrita k liye imroz ki kavita......... ghosla ghar ab yah ghosla ghar chalis saal ka ho chuka hai tum bhi ab oodne ki taiyaari mai ho is ghosla ghar ka tinka tinka jaise tumhre aane par sada tumhara swagat karta tha vaise hi is oodaan ko is jaane ko bhi is ghar ka tinka tinka tumhe alvida kahega. ------------ tumhari didi |
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kabhee nahee laga lafz kam hain -
14th January 2006, 08:26 PM
ya shayad ek chashma bani ho Ongi
aur jaise jharnon ka paani udta hein mein paani ki boonden tumhare jism par maloongi aur ek thandak si bankar tumhare seene se liptoongi kabhee nahee laga lafz kam hain par aaj lag raha tareef zyada hai dil main aur alfaz kam hain itnee sunder bahut sunder rachana kee prashansa ke liye shabd bhee tum se mangne honge bhaw bhee tum se lene honge aur kuch nahee kahana jo panktiyan saab se sunder lageen ooper hain ek nishabd Anil |
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