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maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti.. -
9th February 2005, 11:25 PM
Doston,
Kal meri maa ka JanaM Din hai...Bahut samay se soch raha raha hoon ki kya doon unhe mein...Dil mein jo khayalaat the tofhe ke roop mein unhe bhej raha hoon ... socha aap sab se bhi share kar lun...
maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
kaun rakhtaa tujhe aye khudaa seene mein
mamtaa gar seene mein tumne na basaayi hoti
aapne roop ki chaavi tumne banayi 'maata'
pyaar itna tu bachhon ko kaha de paata
Yeh kaaya tujhko bhi bhagwan itni bhaayi thi
Kya isliye har maa 'yashoda' si hi banaayi thi?
Tere dar par to paap punay ki baat aati hai
Ek Maa jo bina jaane hi jaan lutaati hai
Usko kadmon ke tale hi bantaa hai mandir mera
Jiski har aah par meri khushi aati hai
aaj is din pe tofha mein kya bhijwaaunga
Duur itnaa hoon ki charnon na chuu paaungaa
tere dar phirse baitha hoon is hasrat ko liye
aankh khulte hi uskaa haath sar pe paaungaa
sach gar maa tumne na banaayi hoti
is jahaaN ko ibaadat kabhi na aayi hoti
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9th February 2005, 11:38 PM
BAHOOT KHOOB DOST MAST.....hamari taraf se unhe wish for lambi umer....
pappu.
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9th February 2005, 11:45 PM
Shukriya pappu bhai...I will for sure is pure parivaar ki taraf se....
-aapka apnaa
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Namaskar Mast bhai -
9th February 2005, 11:56 PM
Namaskar Mast bhai
Ma ko kitna pyara sa qalam uphar mein de rahein hain aap........aapki Mummy ko hamare bhi shubhkamnai........Happy Birthday to Aunty .........Sade walon twanuun inney sonhey qalam de uttey mubarkaan....
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9th February 2005, 11:59 PM
tuhaadi mubaarkaan naal muh mithaa ho gaya...shukriyaa sukanya ji...aap sab ki shubhkaamyen paakar yeh din aur bhi jyaada khushi degaa
-aapka apnaa
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10th February 2005, 12:07 AM
Mast,
Aakhir tumne ye maa ke baare me Wakai hi MAST likha hai.. Keep writing!
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10th February 2005, 05:28 AM
Yeh kaaya tujhko bhi bhagwan itni bhaayi thi
Kya isliye har maa 'yashoda' si hi banaayi thi?
Tere dar par to paap punay ki baat aati hai
Ek Maa jo bina jaane hi jaan lutaati hai
sach gar maa tumne na banaayi hoti
is jahaaN ko ibaadat kabhi na aayi hoti
Anu mere azeez...
tumne bahut hee behtereen tohfa diya hai 'maa' ko...meri aankhein bhar aayin...tumhare khayal padh kar...tumhari soch pe bus bahut garv mehsoos kar rahi hoon...bahut gehre hain yeh ashaar...ki bhagwaan ko yeh maa ki kaaya itni pasand thee ki usne har maa yashoda si banaayi...waah...!
phir tere dar pe swarag nark kee baat aati hai...lekin maa ka pyaar self less, unconditional hota hai...sach bahut acha likh gaye ho tum yahaan...proud of you...
meri or se Mummy ko b'day zaroor wish karna...ok...
paras
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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
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10th February 2005, 10:01 AM
maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
Bhai!
Aankhen nam ho gayin aapke sundar ehsaas padhkar.. Kitna Sach hai bhai, We owe so much to our parents.... Maa kaa laad, Maa ka Pyaar, Maa ki Daant... Sab kucch... It always helps us to be a better human being....
Aunty ko meri taraf se bhi janmadin ki shubhkamnayein.. Kucch phool chun laya hoon
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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10th February 2005, 11:47 AM
Mast veer......
sach keha hai....ki rab kol inha vel hi nahi ki saarayan nu vekhe.... taanhi ta maa banayi hai.... oh taan rab da hi dooja roop hai.....
aacha hum party di gal kar layie.... uhdaan vi main partiyaan len vaaste badnaam haan..... mainu taan bus ek mauka chaahida hai.....
teh oh tu de dita apna veer nu.....
doston sabko party milegi.... sab khaayenge cake aur rasgulle.....
vada veer.....
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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10th February 2005, 12:43 PM
Pyare Mast bhai,
Aaj toh aapne rula hi diya maa ke naam itna pyara kalaam likh ke. Sach hi to hai bhai, Maa khudaa ka dusra roop hai. Unhi se humari duniya shiru aur khatam hoti hai. Bohot bohot pasand aaya aapka yeh tribute.
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10th February 2005, 09:01 PM
bhai...
sabse pehle to maa ko dher sari shubhkamnaye unke janamdin pe ... bhagwaan kare... unka saya sada humpe bana rahe ... aur hum unki sewa kar payeN.... janamdin bohat bohat mubarak ho maa tumhe ......
aur bhai aapke is kalaam pe maiN kya kahuN.. har ek lafz jitna asardaar hai usse kahiN jyada asardaar hai... aapke is kalaam pe sir jhuka ke salaam karta huN maiN ... aap bhi apna khayal rakhiye ... aur yuN hi apne dil ke jazbaat humse shere karte rahiye... jate jate adat se majboor kuch keh hi duN maa ke liye...
meri jindgi ki subah tum ...
meri jindgi ki shaam tum...
teri mamta meri jindgi...
mere liye durga tum, raam tum...
meri jindgi ki subah tum...
tera saya mujhpar saugat jaisa
tera pyar mere liye qainaat jaisa...
tere dum se mera jahaN-e-saccha_pyar...
mere liye dev tum, bhagwaan tum..
meri jindgi ki subah tum...........
bhai yahi likh paya
apna khayal rakhna
tumhara bhai...
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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10th February 2005, 10:09 PM
Mast sahab,
Meri aur se mata Shri ko sa-aadar pranam kijiyega aur shubhkaamnayeN bhi... Allah kare aapke sarr par mamta ka saya sada bana rahe..yeh kuch jhumle hai jo kabhi likhe the... gar aap apni maaji ke charnoN mein pesh karne laayak samjhein to kubool kijiyega....
Tu na hoti to mera kya hota,
Jo bhi hota bahot bura hota.
mein na hota jahan hunn aaj khada,
su-e-sang raah mein paDa hota.
tere aanchal ki Dhaal hai warna,
chiraag-e-umr bhujj gaya hota.
kayee gul khil uthe the apne ghar,
gul-e-rozi bhi gar khila hota.
Khuda ne duniya banayee warna,
yeh jahan parastaar-e-maa hota.
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Re: maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti.. -
11th February 2005, 12:49 AM
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Originally posted by mast
Doston,
Kal meri maa ka JanaM Din hai...Bahut samay se soch raha raha hoon ki kya doon unhe mein...Dil mein jo khayalaat the tofhe ke roop mein unhe bhej raha hoon ... socha aap sab se bhi share kar lun...
maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
kaun rakhtaa tujhe aye khudaa seene mein
mamtaa gar seene mein tumne na basaayi hoti
aapne roop ki chaavi tumne banayi 'maata'
pyaar itna tu bachhon ko kaha de paata
Yeh kaaya tujhko bhi bhagwan itni bhaayi thi
Kya isliye har maa 'yashoda' si hi banaayi thi?
Tere dar par to paap punay ki baat aati hai
Ek Maa jo bina jaane hi jaan lutaati hai
Usko kadmon ke tale hi bantaa hai mandir mera
Jiski har aah par meri khushi aati hai
aaj is din pe tofha mein kya bhijwaaunga
Duur itnaa hoon ki charnon na chuu paaungaa
tere dar phirse baitha hoon is hasrat ko liye
aankh khulte hi uskaa haath sar pe paaungaa
sach gar maa tumne na banaayi hoti
is jahaaN ko ibaadat kabhi na aayi hoti
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mere anu,
aaj tumne muje wahi sawaal kiya jo ek din maine tumhe kiya thha.....
tumse pahlay muje praveen dost aur bedil ne bhi yahi baat ki.
khaire... maie yaha aa gayi hu.....
maa.......ek dil ka ahesaas jise tumne dil se bayaan kiya....
khush raho.......
di
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11th February 2005, 06:49 AM
Hi Mast dost,
Aapne sach mein bahut hi acha likha hai...
in khayalaton ko padh kar ...... aapke liye dua hi nikalti hai...
aap yunhi likhte rahein aur aapki maa ko meri taraf se janamdin ki shubhkamnayein
Thanks
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10th May 2015, 10:59 AM
Doston aaj phir mother's day par yeh likhe ashaar yaad aaye...skhuriya sabhi doston ka jo aapne saath diya
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11th May 2015, 12:32 AM
maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
Bahut khoob ehsaas mast saheb................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th May 2015, 12:42 AM
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maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
Bahut khoob ehsaas mast saheb................
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Behad shukriyaa Madhu ji........
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11th May 2015, 06:06 AM
very emotional ,well said
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11th May 2015, 09:39 AM
bahot khoob anu bhai... main bebaak ho gayaa hoon, alfaaz saath nahi de rahe hain ke kaise aapko mubaarakbaad doon.. bas dil chaah raha hai ke aapko gale lagaa loon.....
bahot hi naazuk kavita likhi hai aapne.... bas sab par Maa ka aashirwaad uskii duaaen banii rahe yahi merii aarzooo hai.... khush rahen..
Shaad....
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very emotional ,well said
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Shukriyaa raj bhai...yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
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bahot khoob anu bhai... main bebaak ho gayaa hoon, alfaaz saath nahi de rahe hain ke kaise aapko mubaarakbaad doon.. bas dil chaah raha hai ke aapko gale lagaa loon.....
bahot hi naazuk kavita likhi hai aapne.... bas sab par Maa ka aashirwaad uskii duaaen banii rahe yahi merii aarzooo hai.... khush rahen..
Shaad....
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Shaad bhai - aapko gale se lagaane ki chah to humhare bhi dil mein hai..shukriyaa bhai aap jo hameshaa is tarah se haunslaa bhadhaate hai, yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
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11th May 2015, 05:52 PM
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Doston,
Kal meri maa ka JanaM Din hai...Bahut samay se soch raha raha hoon ki kya doon unhe mein...Dil mein jo khayalaat the tofhe ke roop mein unhe bhej raha hoon ... socha aap sab se bhi share kar lun...
maa agar tumne na banaayi hoti
kaise pehchaan khud ki karwaai hoti
kaun rakhtaa tujhe aye khudaa seene mein
mamtaa gar seene mein tumne na basaayi hoti
aapne roop ki chaavi tumne banayi 'maata'
pyaar itna tu bachhon ko kaha de paata
Yeh kaaya tujhko bhi bhagwan itni bhaayi thi
Kya isliye har maa 'yashoda' si hi banaayi thi?
Tere dar par to paap punay ki baat aati hai
Ek Maa jo bina jaane hi jaan lutaati hai
Usko kadmon ke tale hi bantaa hai mandir mera
Jiski har aah par meri khushi aati hai
aaj is din pe tofha mein kya bhijwaaunga
Duur itnaa hoon ki charnon na chuu paaungaa
tere dar phirse baitha hoon is hasrat ko liye
aankh khulte hi uskaa haath sar pe paaungaa
sach gar maa tumne na banaayi hoti
is jahaaN ko ibaadat kabhi na aayi hoti
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Maa jese haseeN rishte ke liye yeh ehsaas dil meiN utar gaye.....
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Maa jese haseeN rishte ke liye yeh ehsaas dil meiN utar gaye.....
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Hassan bhai aapki inaayat ka behad shukriyaa Janaab, kabhi kabhi kuch alfaaz dil se nikalte chale jaate ha, yeh rachnaa bhi kuch aise hi huyi thi...
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