meri sabse pehli shayri...hehehe -
8th July 2010, 12:52 PM
meri aankhen itni sundar
inme se chalkta hai sagar...
mere kesh itne ghane
tu dekh k ho jayega pagal...
ek baar tu dekh meri jhalak
tere upar mandrane lage ge badal...
tu cheez hai tuch mere samne
ye shayad tujhe nahi hai pata...
dil karta hai k aaj tujhe
dun main ye bata...
tujhe lagta hai k tu bhi
dikhne me nahi hai kam
ye sochana teri hai ik
sabse badi khata...
main hun ek haseen
pankhdi gulaab ki...
tu hai ek bikhra huya
sukha murjhaya patta...
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
are kya tha ye...?? lag raha hai jaise koi do aldkiyaaN ladd rahiN hoN is baat pe ki tu jyada khubsurat ya maiN jyada khubsurat...!! waise maine aapko pehle v padha hai, aur pehle ki posts aapki isse behtar rahin haiN, ye thoda sa bachpane se bhara laga, plz bura mat maan.na aaj kal waise v bahut behas baazi ho rahi hai aaj kal corfrections aur comments ke upar... keep writing dear....!!
are kya tha ye...?? Lag raha hai jaise koi do aldkiyaan ladd rahin hon is baat pe ki tu jyada khubsurat ya main jyada khubsurat...!! Waise maine aapko pehle v padha hai, aur pehle ki posts aapki isse behtar rahin hain, ye thoda sa bachpane se bhara laga, plz bura mat maan.na aaj kal waise v bahut behas baazi ho rahi hai aaj kal corfrections aur comments ke upar... keep writing dear....!!
okk ghayal ji...........WAISE YE SHAYARI MENE SABSE PEHLE BNAYI THI 3 K SAAL HOGYE.....SOCHA YE B POST KARDUN............
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
Last edited by gazzal; 8th July 2010 at 01:16 PM..
okk ghayal ji...........WAISE YE SHAYARI MENE SABSE PEHLE BNAYI THI 3 K SAAL HOGYE.....SOCHA YE B POST KARDUN............
3 k = 3 thousand :eek
You wrote it 3 thousand years ago
misr ( mummiyo ka desh ) se aayi ho kya ???
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
meri aankhen itni sundar
inme se chalkta hai sagar...
mere kesh itne ghane
tu dekh k ho jayega pagal...
ek baar tu dekh meri jhalak
tere upar mandrane lage ge badal...
tu cheez hai tuch mere samne
ye shayad tujhe nahi hai pata...
dil karta hai k aaj tujhe
dun main ye bata...
tujhe lagta hai k tu bhi
dikhne me nahi hai kam
ye sochana teri hai ik
sabse badi khata...
main hun ek haseen
pankhdi gulaab ki...
tu hai ek bikhra huya
sukha murjhaya patta...
****
My eyes so beautiful
like oceans in motion
my hair so thick
you'll go crazy very quick
once you see my charm
clouds on you will swarm
what do you think you are
still you have no idea
I feel like telling you
once and for all
you think you're no less handsome
buy you'll be sorry for this wholesome
I am beutiful like a rose petal
and you, a wayward withered
leaf of an old tree.
Last edited by Ravi Kopra; 16th October 2010 at 03:54 PM..
My eyes so beautiful
like oceans in motion
my hair so thick
you'll go crazy very quick
once you see my charm
clouds on you will swarm
what do you think you are
still you have no idea
I feel like telling you
once and for all
you think you're no less handsome
buy you'll be sorry for this wholesome
I am beutiful like a rose petal
and you, a wayward withered
leaf of an old tree.
ravi bhai ji very very good......................................
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......