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2nd July 2015, 07:44 PM
adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
madhu
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Na ashiq naam hai tera na mera dil dewaana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
suno tarkeeb uski bas tera ye muskarana hai
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
kadam ek saath rakhne haiN hame manzil ko pana hai.
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wah Madhu jee bahut umda peshkash dil se daad kubul karen
likhti rahen
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Na ashiq naam hai tera na mera dil dewaana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
suno tarkeeb uski bas tera ye muskarana hai
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
kadam ek saath rakhne haiN hame manzil ko pana hai.
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3rd July 2015, 08:21 AM
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Na ashiq naam hai tera na mera dil dewaana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
suno tarkeeb uski bas tera ye muskarana hai
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
kadam ek saath rakhne haiN hame manzil ko pana hai.
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Khoob hai Khoob hai Khoob hai Khoob hai
Muqarar Muqarar awaaz aa rahi hai
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
Wah Wah yeh sirf ek sher nahi aapke dil ki sachaai bayaan kar raha hai...Bahut Bahut khoob likha Madhu aapne...aapne havaale se ek sher diye jaa raha hoon..
bharose par mere mujhko na tum ab chodh ke jaana
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6th July 2015, 02:27 PM
Madhu jee
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Dil ko khush kar dene waali aapki is umdaah koshish ke liye dil se mubaaraqbaad.. likhte rahiye
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7th July 2015, 01:52 PM
wah wah.......................mazaa aa gaya madhu.
bohut khoob................ bohut khoob........................
yunhi mehfil ko apne khoobsurat kalaamon se sajati raho.
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
madhu
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Madhu ji .......bahut khoobsurat adaygi hui hai ehsaason ki......ek asar chod gye kuch ashaar to .....
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai
Apke is khoosboodaar gusdaste ke ye do phool bahut achche lage
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9th July 2015, 09:16 PM
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
Madhu ji ,
aap ki is aakhri line tau mera dil loot liya ...bahut hi pyara kalaam madhu ji , ek ek sher per ke luthf aa raha tha ..
Aap ki lehni aise hi ujagar hoti rahe aage bhi , bas yehi dua aapke liye ..
Dil se daad .
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
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Ghazab ka kalaam..!
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duaon ke saath
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Aate rahiye.......
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Ghazab ki ghazal huii hai. Dher saari mubarakbad Madhuji. Pyaar ho to aesa ho.
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Bohot bohot bohot achhe madhu ji...waaaaah
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Daad hazir hai
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shukriya bhushan sahab bas yoon hee hausla afzai karte rahiyega...koshish zari rahegi....
aate rahiye......
khush rahein....
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jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
Wah Wah yeh sirf ek sher nahi aapke dil ki sachaai bayaan kar raha hai...Bahut Bahut khoob likha Madhu aapne...aapne havaale se ek sher diye jaa raha hoon..
bharose par mere mujhko na tum ab chodh ke jaana
hai iska hashr-o-nashr kaisa yeh qissa bhi puraana hai
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adaab mast sahab...
pahle to daad qubool kijiyega kya khoob sher kaha hai.....waah..
aur mujh pe jo bharosa apka jawaab padhkar mahsoos hua...
uske liye tah e dil se shukriya....
aap sab ke haseen alfaaz qalaam ko aur khoobsoorat bana dete hain...
salamat rahein...
aate rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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waah boha,t khub madhu g
boha,t acha,a likha,a hai a,ap ne
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
madhu
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Madhu jee
Namaste
Dil ko khush kar dene waali aapki is umdaah koshish ke liye dil se mubaaraqbaad.. likhte rahiye
Aapka
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Aapko pasand aayi khushi huyi dhaval ji...
Aate rahiyega..
Takecare..
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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wah wah.......................mazaa aa gaya madhu.
bohut khoob................ bohut khoob........................
yunhi mehfil ko apne khoobsurat kalaamon se sajati raho.
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Thank u sarika......aapke reply me apka muskurata chehra nazar aa raha hai.....
Yun hee khush raho....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Madhu ji .......bahut khoobsurat adaygi hui hai ehsaason ki......ek asar chod gye kuch ashaar to .....
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai
Apke is khoosboodaar gusdaste ke ye do phool bahut achche lage
Aapki aur aapke kalam ki salamati ki duaon ke saath.....ijaajat
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Aapki duaon aur vaqt ka behad shukriya nawab sahab....
Aapko kalaam pasand aaya achcha laga jaankar..
Yun vaqt nikal kar kahne aur sunne ka ye silsila barkarar rakhiyega....
Aate rahiyega...
Take care. ..
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
Madhu ji ,
aap ki is aakhri line tau mera dil loot liya ...bahut hi pyara kalaam madhu ji , ek ek sher per ke luthf aa raha tha ..
Aap ki lehni aise hi ujagar hoti rahe aage bhi , bas yehi dua aapke liye ..
Dil se daad .
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namaskaar sanjay ji....aapko kalaam pasand aaya bahut achcha laga...
aapka sneh aur sath yun hee bana rahe yahi chahoongi main...
aate rahiyega..
salamat rahein..
regards
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Ghazab ka kalaam..!
Simply superb. Mohabbat se labrez iss kalaam pe aapko dheroN mubarakbaad.
Likhte rahiye.
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tareef ka shukriya janaab....
aapka sath aage bhi milta rahega...yahi dua hai...
apna khayaal rakhein..
madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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26th January 2016, 12:15 AM
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adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal...
Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai
bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai.
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan
nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai.
takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne
jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai
mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.
duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
madhu
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Madhu,
Aapke saadgi se bhare aashaar khoobsurati se bayaani kar rahe hain. Yun to poori ghazal hi khoobsurat hai, yeh sher khaas dil ko bhaya:
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
Meri dil se daad kubool karen aur likhti rahen.
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Ghazab ki ghazal huii hai. Dher saari mubarakbad Madhuji. Pyaar ho to aesa ho.
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Bahut bahut shukriya fakhri ji.......
Aate rahiyega..
Madhu
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waah boha,t khub madhu g
boha,t acha,a likha,a hai a,ap ne
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shukriya nawazish mohtarma...
lekin aap kahaan gayab hain....sdc pe intzaar hai aapka...
khush rahiye...
aate rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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2nd March 2016, 06:40 PM
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Bahut khoob likha hai madhu jee aapne......
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shukriya arvind sahab......
aate rahiyega.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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7th March 2016, 08:08 PM
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Madhu,
Aapke saadgi se bhare aashaar khoobsurati se bayaani kar rahe hain. Yun to poori ghazal hi khoobsurat hai, yeh sher khaas dil ko bhaya:
mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum
magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai
Meri dil se daad kubool karen aur likhti rahen.
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Bahut bahut shukriya pulkit..
Achcha laga aapne kalaam ko pasand kiya..
Aate rahiyega..
Tkcr
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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