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20th April 2015, 02:01 PM
Bheeni se khushbu gaaoN ke uss paar se aati hai Apne des suhaani rut hai, yeh sandesa laati hai Koyal aur papiha boleiN sun re manwa banjaare Maa ke haath ki roti wapis apne des bulaati hai Kaaghaz ke phuuloN se khushbu kab bhala aapayegi KyuN phir meri aankheiN harpal jhuute khwab sajati haiN Aadhi raat ko jhoNpdi se siskiyaaN aane lagiN Bhuke pait jo soyeiN bachche niiNd unheiN kab aati hai Iss jhuggi se uss mahal tak sadiyoN ka hai faasla Dekho qismat ban madaari kaise khel dikhaati hai Jis ne khoya ho apna ghar, wahi to samajh paayega Ujde huye chaman meiN bulbul naala kyuN dohrati hai KyuN le aaya 'Aashna' usi sheher meiN phir se aaj JahaN meri barbaadi ke qisse ki yaad sataati hai **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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20th April 2015, 02:27 PM
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bahut khoobsurat likha hai...kuch sher to emotional hi kar gye  Aadhi raat ko jhoNpdi se siskiyaaN aane lagiN Bhuke pait jo soyeiN bachche niiNd unheiN kab aati hai sabhi ehsaas pasand aaye, par yeh sher dil ko chu gya. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th April 2015, 03:30 PM
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kyaaa kahne saagar saahab.................. kamaal likh diyaa hai aapne is baar bas ke kuch bolte na ban rahaa hai......... dil se daad pesh hain aapko is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye... har sher apne aap me lajawaab.... likhte rahen.. salaamat rahen Shaad..... |
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20th April 2015, 04:42 PM
Waaah sagar jiii..jazbaton ko kya khoob alfaz diye hain aapne ki dil tak utar gaya aapka ye kalaam...bahut sarii daad aur mubarak baad apko is umda peshkash ke liye...
Khush rahein.. likhte rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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21st April 2015, 02:17 PM
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bahut hi sunder aur bhavvibhor ker dene vala aapne likha hai.. taarif jitani karu kam hi lgati hai.. marmik chhano sjiv chitran kavita ke madhyam se aapne pesh kiye hain.. so daad Kabul karein.. shubhkamnao sahit Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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21st April 2015, 04:13 PM
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Sunita di, Namaste ! Be-had khushi huyi mehfil meiN aapki maujoodgi jaan kar Pasand karne keliye bohot bohot shukriyaa. YuNhi hausla baDhate raheiN. Regards **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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21st April 2015, 04:15 PM
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Nawazish, mehrbaani, shukriya. Aapka saath, masarrat ki baat **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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21st April 2015, 04:48 PM
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ham to har pal aapke saath hai .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st April 2015, 08:39 PM
WAh AAHSNA SAHAB wah,,,, Aapne to hum ko aaina dikha diya,, hum UAE me rahte hain aur apne hindustan ko aur ghar waaloon ko harr saans k saath miss karte,, haa ye bhi sahi a wohi log ahsaas kar pate hain jo dooor ho apnon se,, shukriya aapka
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22nd April 2015, 12:16 PM
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Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakheiN. Regards **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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22nd April 2015, 12:18 PM
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Bohot bohot Shukriyaa. Uss ke bina to shayad SDC meiN rounak bhi nahi rahegi Regards **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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22nd April 2015, 12:21 PM
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Akant saahib, Namsate ! Aapki nazar-e-karam keliye maiN ehsaanmand rahunga. Rehbari karte rahiyega. Khair andesh **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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22nd April 2015, 12:23 PM
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Bhai achha laga jaan kar ke aapne khud se co-relate kiya iss kaavish ko. Bohot bohot Shukriya waqt dene keliye. Aate rahiye. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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