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5th February 2010, 11:20 PM
SDC k sabhi haazireen ko Adaab!
Due to insisting of some of my close, lovable members especially Danny Boss, Sameer Bhai, Vikaas Bhai, Dhaval Bhai, Tahir Bhai, Vikram Bhai etc. I am back on SDC with this "Ghazal". I'll wait for your precious comments:- apni wehshat ko hum-safar kar ke youn bhi dekha guzar basar kar ke aik nasha hai is amal mein bhi koi dekhe to dar guzar kar ke aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke us ki jaanib se hai boht yeh bhi kuch to bola agar magar kar ke kitne sar-sabz ho gaye HSN aik pooday ko tum samar kar ke tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th February 2010, 02:29 AM
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Kafee achchaa likhaa hai Hassan, yeh bahot hi achche rahe aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke us ki jaanib se hai boht yeh bhi kuch to bola agar magar kar ke abhee tumhaaree baaton men gehraayee aa rahee hai  किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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6th February 2010, 01:56 PM
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achha likha hai aur gehra bhi.... mujhe pasand aaya...aage bhi isi traha likhte raheN.... meri duaeN aapke saath haiN.... aapka dost, vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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welcome back -
6th February 2010, 03:42 PM
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HSN BHAI.........accha laga aapki gazal padkar, aap accha likhtey ho, bas yehi iltija hai aapse ki aapni shayri ki kabhi toheeN mat hone dena, ek din aapki shayri aapki pahchaaN hogi, yeh mera daava hai. pyar aur duao.n ke saath aapki baaji .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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6th February 2010, 03:55 PM
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6th February 2010, 04:58 PM
Hassan Ji...Aadaab ! aapki waapsi ki raha dekh rahe the...so aapne puri kar di.....ek khubsurat Ghazal padhwaa kar....sabhi ashaar bahut ache bane hai....aapko yaha padhna acha lagta hai.....yuhi aate rahen....apni behtar ghazal kehte rahen....khush rahen
is behtar khayal aur ghazal ko ...tahe dil se daad hazir hai...kabul farmaayen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Be-had shukriya.... Aur lehje ki sanjeedgi ko samjhne k liye manooN hoooN.... Saath dete rahiye ga,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7th February 2010, 12:09 PM
Lagta hai Hassan Naraaz hai..... kuch jawab hi nahi diya mere post ka....
Probably bahut sanjeeda hogaya hai munda.... Chill Dude  |
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7th February 2010, 12:46 PM
aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne
hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke Wah Hassan Saheb Jawab nahi aapki is peshkash ka........dil khush kar diya janab aapne. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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7th February 2010, 04:58 PM
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Please wait for your turn......  Regardzz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7th February 2010, 08:00 PM
aik nasha hai is amal mein bhi
koi dekhe to dar guzar kar ke kya khoob sher kaha hai maza aa gaya waah us ki jaanib se hai boht yeh bhi kuch to bola agar magar kar ke bhut khoob, Daad hazir hai qubool karein aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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8th February 2010, 05:03 PM
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Is qadar pazeerayi k liye be-hadd shukriya.. Younhi saath dete rahiye,,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th February 2010, 04:39 PM
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Is qadar pazeeraayi k liye be-hadd manooN-o-mashkoor hooN, aur aagay se aap ko meri taraf se koi gilla nahi ho ga (INSHALLAH).. Younhi saath dete rahiye ga,,, DuaooN k saath,, Aap ka bhaii,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th February 2010, 04:58 PM
Hassan bhaa'ii:
Aadaab! KhuShii hu'ii aapko aur aapki koShiSh ko bazm meN deKh kar...maiNe pehle bhee aapse kahaa thaa ki aap Khoob liKhate hai.n.. yeh koShish bhee Khoob rahiiN! yeh safar yuuNhi zaaree rahe.n! Khudaa se duaa yahee hay! dil se daad! liKhate rahe.N... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat Khudaa haafiz aapka ~ Dhaval |
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9th February 2010, 05:10 PM
HassaN Bhai AadaaB.........
Ek behad umdaa gazal pesh ki hia janab, sare ashaaron ne dil jit liya, yeh mujhe aapki abtak ki gazaloN mein sabse jyada mutmain karne wali gazal lagi........ Har sher kamal ka hia bhai tarif aur daad hi nikali hia har sher par, Masha Allah janab kalam to bahut tez ho gayi hia aapki Mubarak ho....... Aise hi likhate raho, Dil se daad kabool karo......... keep writting ........ take care, Khuda hafez...... 
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10th February 2010, 03:33 PM
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Probably you did not saw "etc"....! Anywayz....Thanks for praise....! Regardz,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th February 2010, 04:12 PM
hahaha......tou ab mein.....Extras mein aney laga hoon.......
Well dude i do SOLO................ |
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11th February 2010, 12:25 PM
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Dear Naresh Jii,,, Adaab! Boht boht shukriyaa... Jis tarah se aap likhay ki tareef karte haiN, boht achaa lagta hai..... Younhi saath dete rahiye ga,,, DuaooN k saath,, Aap ka,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th February 2010, 01:24 AM
Hassan ji,
Ghazall aachi lagiii .... ehsaas dil fareeb rahe.... likhtey rahee.. khush rahe duaaoon ke saath mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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12th February 2010, 03:09 PM
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Meri ghazal se kisi ko khushi mile... yeh mere liye boht badi baat hai...... Saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, Faqat,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Boht Shurkiyaa.... -
13th February 2010, 03:20 PM
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Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-hadd manooN hooN... Saath dete rahiye ga,,, DuaooN ke saath,,, Faqat,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th February 2010, 02:15 AM
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Yaha sher hamein kuch jyaada pasand aaya dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke Likhte rahein aur apna khyaal thik se rakhein,ok...? God bless you Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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15th February 2010, 11:48 AM
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Is qadar hausla afzaai k liye aap ka be-hadd manooN -o-mashkoor hooN.. Younhi mere khaak lafz phadhte rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, Faqat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th February 2010, 06:40 PM
kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki
kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke us ki jaanib se hai boht yeh bhi kuch to bola agar magar kar ke kya baat h hasan ji.. aapki rachnaye din-b-din behad acchi hone lagi h ye kuch sher pasand aaye.. |
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16th February 2010, 09:34 AM
aapki ghazal hume bahut pasand aayi. yeh do sher toh bahut ache lage.
kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke daad. Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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16th February 2010, 10:04 PM
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Adaab! Bas bhai aap jese saathiyooN ki duaaooN k asar hai jo itnaa achaa likh pataa hooN... warnaa jab maiN yahan aaya tha, kuch bhi nahi tha... Aaj main jo hooN... aap sab ne banaya hai..... Younhi saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath, Aap ka bhai,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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17th February 2010, 10:38 PM
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Aap k teh-e-dil se manooN hooN k aap nay apnaa qeemti waqt mere likhay per surf kiya... aur housla afzaai ki..... Younhi saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath, Faqat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th February 2010, 11:27 AM
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Aap yahan aa gaye... meri ghazal mukammal ho gayi... Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,, DuaooN k saath,, Aap ka sub-ordinate... ,,tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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20th February 2010, 10:42 AM
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Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-hadd manooN hooN... Saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath, Faqat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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23rd February 2010, 11:22 AM
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Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-hadd maskhoor hooN... Saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath, Faqat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th February 2010, 06:56 PM
aik nasha hai is amal mein bhi koi dekhe to dar guzar kar ke aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke bahut achy sher hai bhayee lekin ye wala ....... bas ki kamaal hai . kaun ayega safar karke ..... beautiful .............!! kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke repss for this verse |
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25th February 2010, 11:31 PM
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hasan bhai radhe radhe bahut khoob likha hai aapne pasand aaya dil se daad hazir hai...aise hi likhte rahen aur bazm ko roshan karte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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26th February 2010, 03:08 PM
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Jis tareeqe se aap likhay ko appreciate karte ho, bas mazaa aa jataa hai.... aur kia kahooN! Saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, Aap ka bhai,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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27th February 2010, 11:21 AM
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Hassan sahab, bahot hi khoob kaha hai aapne..yeh kuch sher to kamaal lage.. aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke dil ko lutna tha lut gaya aakhir karen kia kisi ko khabar kar ke maine aapko pehle bhi padha hai aur ab jab padhta hun to kuch naya hi dekhta hun..aap bahot hi acha likhne lage ho..god bless aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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27th February 2010, 05:55 PM
aaj bhi ek Ghar ki Khwahish ne,
Hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar ke. Bohot khoobsurat aur kuch meri daastan sa lagaa yeh sher. Bohot acchi lagi aapki ghazal. Shukriya aapka. Likhte rahiye. Talib. |
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1st March 2010, 09:37 AM
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Aap ka yahan aana aur sarhaa'na boht maaiinay rakhta hai mere liye...... Saath dene aa jaya kariye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, Faqat,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Mashkoor hooN janab.... |
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Mere ehsaas kisi ko apne jese lagieN to mere liye yeh boht badi baat hai...... Saath dete rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath, Faqat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Khaak lafz aap ko ache lagay... is se badi aur kia baat ho sakti hai! Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga.. DuaooN k saath ijaazat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th December 2011, 09:51 AM
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hasan sahab aadab,bahut-2 acchee ghazal banee hai.sar se paa tak lajawaab. lekin ye kuch sher to kamaal.........bas kamaal ho gaye aaj bhi aik ghar ki khwaaish ne hum ko rakha hai dar-ba-dar kar kis ko fursat hai hum se milne ki kon aaye ga ab safar kar ke us ki jaanib se hai boht yeh bhi kuch to bola agar magar kar ke is sundar peshqash par aapko dili daad o mubaraqbad. |
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16th December 2011, 09:51 AM
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Uff ak jii.... Daad aur pazeeraayi k liye be-had mashkoor-o-manooN hooN... Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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