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26th March 2004, 09:39 AM
ishq main kaun wafa karta hai,
kahin esa bhi hua karta hai! pal main damsaaj ye sukune ishq, har dil-o-jaan ka jia karta hai! julm sah kar bhi dua karta hai, dil mera mujhse daga karta hai! ishq ka imtihaan musalsal hai, dard ke saath badha karta hai! meri dunia main koi aur nahin, tera hi aks mila karta hai! kuch ye damsaaj naya karta hai, ranj safhon pe bayan karta hai! |
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28th March 2004, 07:05 PM
Damsaaj ji,
Dil ko choo gayi aapki poori ki poori ghazal. Itni pyari shayri, jawab nahi janab aapka. Khass taur per yeh lines: julm sah kar bhi dua karta hai, dil mera mujhse daga karta hai! ishq ka imtihaan musalsal hai, dard ke saath badha karta hai! meri dunia main koi aur nahin, tera hi aks mila karta hai! Bahot hi sahi farmaya janab aapne. Yeh dil kuch ajeeeeeb hi hota hai, wakai mei "Julm seh kar bhi dua karta hai", aur sahi kaha janab aapne "Ishq ka imthihan musalsal hai, dard ke saath saath badha karta hai". Lekin kya yeh sach nahi k dard jitna gehra ho utna hi maza deta hai. Daad kabool keejeeye. Chaltee hu.n iss ummid k saath k aage bhi aapke issi tarah se acchey-acchey aur dard se bhary kalaam pardhne ko milte rahenge Dua k saath Seema "Jitni shiddat se tarastee, hoon mai uske liye Uutni shiddat se tho, unse mujhe chaha bhi na tha" |
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30th March 2004, 11:07 AM
seemakshi.!....hello!
! ishq to dard ka dariya hai, rula deta hai, magar jab had se gujarta hai, maja deta hai ! sahi kaha aapne ki dard bhi maja deta hai!........ seemakshi ...! aaj main aapse aapke baare main poochna chahata hoon. kya karti hain aap , kahan rahatin hain?,kya pasand hai aapko, aur haan ! ..... AAPKA ID JAROOR BHEJIYEGA ,main aapko apni freidlist main add karna chahata hoon. DAMSAAJ |
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2nd April 2004, 12:39 PM
ishq main kaun wafa karta hai,
kahin esa bhi hua karta hai! pal main damsaaj ye sukune ishq, har dil-o-jaan ka jia karta hai! julm sah kar bhi dua karta hai, dil mera mujhse daga karta hai! ishq ka imtihaan musalsal hai, dard ke saath badha karta hai! meri dunia main koi aur nahin, tera hi aks mila karta hai! kuch ye damsaaj naya karta hai, ranj safhon pe bayan karta hai! |
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2nd April 2004, 12:44 PM
my derest nickeyyy;
wah...wah...wah...wah... kya likhti ho yaar; bahot khub; god has given u such a wonder ful art; i became ur fan; don;t mind; dear nickey yy keep it up.  |
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10th April 2004, 10:40 AM
ishq main kaun wafa karta hai,
kahin esa bhi hua karta hai! pal main damsaaj ye sukune ishq, har dil-o-jaan ka jia karta hai! julm sah kar bhi dua karta hai, dil mera mujhse daga karta hai! ishq ka imtihaan musalsal hai, dard ke saath badha karta hai! meri dunia main koi aur nahin, tera hi aks mila karta hai! kuch ye damsaaj naya karta hai, ranj safhon pe bayan karta hai! |
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