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Bazaar me khade hain....( Ghayel)
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Bazaar me khade hain....( Ghayel) - 7th January 2010, 01:19 AM

Bazaar* me khade hain, aao batein kare bazaar ki
Banake chehra sanjeeda kare guftugu bekaar ki

Jung aisi bhi hain dekhi, kehne laga sipahi
Sarhad ki hifazat hum kare, kaun hifazat kare parivaar ki

Subah ko baiju bavra sham hote hote ban jata hain majnu
Lanat bhejo aise aashiqo pe, kya halat kardi pyaar ki

Itna bhi kya sajna sawarna, ke shakl hi na pehchani jaye
Sach poocho to yaro ab kaha woh lazzat deedar-e-yaar ki

Jo man me aaye likhta hain, na adab na shaoor shayri ka
Aur us par GHAYEL ki himmat dekho, mange dad apne har aashar ki


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7th January 2010, 04:25 PM

Sajid Bhai Aadaab .........

Janab aapki yeh kalam to bahut gehri hia yakin janiye matla aur secound sher bahut hi umda laga......... phir uske bad ke sher bhi kamal ke hai........

Bhai aisi creation's kabhi kabhar hoti hai ise dard forume per hi pot kijiye, waise aapko padhne wale kahin bhi aapko padh hi lenge jaise humne padh liya.......

Dil se daad kabool kijiye........
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Khush rahiye,
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Reps pending, adaa kar dunga, jis din aada karunga us din samjhna maine apna karza yaad se chukaya,



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7th January 2010, 08:25 PM

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Sajid Bhai Aadaab .........

Janab aapki yeh kalam to bahut gehri hia yakin janiye matla aur secound sher bahut hi umda laga......... phir uske bad ke sher bhi kamal ke hai........

Bhai aisi creation's kabhi kabhar hoti hai ise dard forume per hi pot kijiye, waise aapko padhne wale kahin bhi aapko padh hi lenge jaise humne padh liya.......

Dil se daad kabool kijiye........
+++Reps added ... likhate rhaiye,
Khush rahiye,
Khuda hafez........

Reps pending, adaa kar dunga, jis din aada karunga us din samjhna maine apna karza yaad se chukaya,
Aapka bohat bohat shukriyaa Kwahish saheb, aap jaise dost jab mera likha pasand karte hain tab kahi jaker thoda yaqeen hota hain ke main bhi likh leta hu.....


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25th January 2010, 09:40 PM

Hello niceeeeeee shayriiiiii ,,,,,,keep it up....bye take care


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27th January 2010, 11:56 AM

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Nawazish karam hain Kishor Jee.............


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Wah wah Sajid sahab badi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Padhkar bahot achha laga.
   
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Wah wah Sajid sahab badi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Padhkar bahot achha laga.
Nawazish karam Riyaz saheb..........


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24th February 2010, 07:31 PM

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Bazaar* me khade hain, aao batein kare bazaar ki

Banake chehra sanjeeda kare guftugu bekaar ki

Jung aisi bhi hain dekhi, kehne laga sipahi
Sarhad ki hifazat hum kare, kaun hifazat kare parivaar ki

Subah ko baiju bavra sham hote hote ban jata hain majnu
Lanat bhejo aise aashiqo pe, kya halat kardi pyaar ki

Itna bhi kya sajna sawarna, ke shakl hi na pehchani jaye
Sach poocho to yaro ab kaha woh lazzat deedar-e-yaar ki

Jo man me aaye likhta hain, na adab na shaoor shayri ka

Aur us par GHAYEL ki himmat dekho, mange dad apne har aashar ki
Maqtaa is mind-blowing, Ghayel Ji...! Aap ke andaaz bahut pasand aaya...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...!

Wit blessings



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Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Maqtaa is mind-blowing, Ghayel Ji...! Aap ke andaaz bahut pasand aaya...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...!

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Badi meharbani Mushkil saheb........yuhi sath banaye rakhna.


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