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Baitbaazi - 3rd May 2007, 11:57 AM



DostoN riyaayati baitbaaazi meiN aap ka swaagat hai.. yahaaN Sher ke aakhir akshyar(in hindi) se aap ko naya Sher kahna hai kisii bhii ustaad ka.. Jaise kii.,...... "yaaro.n" agar last word hai tho, aap ko "R" se shair start karna hai

ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
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4th May 2007, 11:56 AM

wel come mausam

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mere naGmaat ko a.ndaaz-e-navaa yaad nahii.n

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kis nazar se aap ne dekhaa dil-e-majaruuh ko
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gesuu-e- taabadaar ko aur bhii taabadaar kar
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jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue
huu.N shammaa-e-kushtaa** daraKhur***-e-mahafil nahii.n rahaa

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mayankjee ek baat aapne jo apni post me hi fi urdu istemaal ki hain woh agar meanings ke saath likhe to mere jaiso ke liye accha hoga...

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jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue
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mayankjee ek baat aapne jo apni post me hi fi urdu istemaal ki hain woh agar meanings ke saath likhe to mere jaiso ke liye accha hoga...

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Sunita jee aap khud ke Sher bhi likh sakte haiN.. aur kisii aur ke bhii..

Sunita jee>>> yaa

yaa to miT jaa_iye yaa miTaa diijiye
kiijiye jab bhii saudaa kharaa kiijiye

ab jafaa kiijiye yaa wafaa kiijiye
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sauda:deal
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hi fi urdu ??? : yeh kya hota hai??? chaliye aage har post meiN, maiN difficult words ke matlab saath meiN likh duNga... TC

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hi fi urdu bhi nahin pata to janaab hi fi mane jo aam logo se upar

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aapane 'Daag' ko muu.Nh bhii na lagaayaa afsos
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8th May 2007, 02:40 PM

ab samjh meiN aa gaya, aap ka hi-fi urdu se matlab:

koShish karuuNga kii aage aasaan likhuuN ....

ek Sher arz kiye deta huuN...

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ab samjh meiN aa gaya, aap ka hi-fi urdu se matlab:

koShish karuuNga kii aage aasaan likhuuN ....

ek Sher arz kiye deta huuN...

ii>>>

ek nazar dekh ke ham jaan gaye
aap kyaa chiiz hai.n pahachaan gaye


ye>>>
humne kab kaha asan sher likhe..likheye hi fi..par meanings bhi to likheye... dictionary mein meanings kaun dhundhe...

waise lagta hain yeh uparwala sher aapne hi likha hoga..kyun????

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Yeh Sher mera nahiiN hai, kahiiN paRha tha, aap ko paRh kar dhyaan meiN aa gaya... waise Sher ki pasandagii ke liye Shukriyah!

ro>>>

royaa kare.nge aap bhii paharo.n isii tarah
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naa taab hijr me.n hai naa aaraam vasl me.n
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Jab kabhi darwaza khulta hain,koi aur nazar aata hain!

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hmm.... jee haaN par thoRa thoRa.....

well.. aap ne Sher meiN 'hain' likha hai woh dar-asal 'hai' hona chaahiye..(shaayad)

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yeah right 'hai' hi hain..maine likhne me galti kar di....

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haaN, mujhe laga kii 'hai' hi hona chaahiye, kyuN kii singular words use huye haiN.. aur singular meiN 'hai' lagta hai, 'haiN' nahiiN.. ek baat aur, mausam, baitbaazi meiN aap ko last words ke aakhiri letter ko lena hai.. lekin Hindi ka, Roman ka nahiiN... Jaise kii aaNkheN heiN.. to last letter huaa 'kheN' i.e 'kha' means 2nd alphabet of hindi consonent..

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achhha guruji age se hindi aur roman pe dhyan rakhungi warna aap to hain hi batane ke liye

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hahahaha. guru jee..... Guru jee lafz se ek buRhe aadmi kii tashveer nazroN meiN aa jaati hai aur maiN....... ess liye Guru jee mat kaho.... haaaN GhaltiyoN ke liye, maiN huuN na...



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well, sara jee, aap mausam jee ke thread se baitbaazi keejiye, puuja jee ne Ghalti se post kiya tha...

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aapke iss swaagat ka maiN tah-e-dil se shukr_guzaar hooN ''Mayank'' sahab....

jhukii-jhukii si nazar be_qaraar hai ke nahiiN
dabaa-dabaa sa sahii dil meN pyaar hai ke nahiiN


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jhukii-jhukii si nazar be_qaraar hai ke nahiiN
dabaa-dabaa sa sahii dil meN pyaar hai ke nahiiN

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hijr kii raat Dhale na Dhale
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le lo bosaa apnaa vaapas kis liye takraar ki
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heeee nice one lamha....

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heeee nice one lamha....

kitnaa poshiidaa havaaoN kaa safar rakhaa gayaa
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jhoom ke jab riNdoN ne pilaa dii
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hamaare naam bhii ek din khatoot aate the
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hue mar ke ham jo rusvaa, hue kyuN na gharq-e-dariyaa
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dekhiye yahaaN ''kafeel'' sahab kyaa farmaate haiN..

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dekhiye yahaaN ''kafeel'' sahab kyaa farmaate haiN..

ajanabii lagane lage Khud tumheN apanaa hii vajood
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safar meraa kisii taur muKhtasar ho jaaye
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hai ye viiraana yahaaN paaN saNbhal kar rakhna
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