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Koii pall koi lamha nahii.n guzarta ( gazal)
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rajveeer
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Koii pall koi lamha nahii.n guzarta ( gazal) -
10th January 2015, 04:49 PM
दोस्तो अपनी नयी गजल के साथ हाजिर हूँ,
कोई पल कोई लम्हा नहीं गुजरता,
जब आखों में तेरा अक्स नहीं उतरता ।
बस तुझे भूलने को नहीं राजी,
वैसे तो दिल बगावत नहीं करता ।
थी हमको भी अजीज जां अपनी,
अब मैं तुझपे मरने से नहीं डरता ।
तुझे पूजा है सदा रब की तरहा,
इस बात से मैं इनकार नहीं करता ।
टीस कोई उठती तो है उसके दिल में,
वे वजह तो कोई आहे नहीं भरता ।
कुछ तो खोया है उसका तेरी गलियों में,
यूँ ही कोई मारा मारा नहीं फिरता ।
या तो कह दे वो खुदा नहीं तेरा,
या फिर कह दे तू इबादत नहीं करता ।
बडा तनहा बडा बेचैन लगा है रहने,
आज कल 'वीर' शायरी नहीं करता ।
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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11th January 2015, 03:07 PM
Waah....
Bahut khoob gazal likhi hai raaj ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th January 2015, 04:35 PM
Rajveeer ji,
bohot umdah ehsaas.
Daad qubool farmaayein.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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13th January 2015, 08:49 PM
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Madhu 14
Waah....
Bahut khoob gazal likhi hai raaj ji...
Madhu ji bhut bhut shukria jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya, saath dete rahiyega. Raj
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th January 2015, 04:07 PM
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Rajveeer ji,
bohot umdah ehsaas.
Daad qubool farmaayein.
Sagar Aashna
Sagar ji Adaab janaab bhut bhut shukria jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya, saath dete rahiyega. Raj
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th January 2015, 05:01 PM
Rajveer ji...waaaaaaaaaaaaah
bohot khubsurat gazal kahi aapne.....
Daad kubuk farmaiyega
Aapka apna
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23rd January 2015, 06:23 AM
good very good ........lekin sir g eh last wala sher kujh controversial jeha laga
बडा तनहा बडा बेचैन लगा है रहने,
आज कल 'वीर' शायरी नहीं करता ।
8 stanzas di lambi gazal likh bhi kehNdo ho आज कल 'वीर' शायरी नहीं करता khair gazal hai bahut badia.
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15th February 2015, 02:25 PM
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Rajveer ji...waaaaaaaaaaaaah
bohot khubsurat gazal kahi aapne.....
Daad kubuk farmaiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
Bhut bhut shukria bhushan ji..saath dete rahiyega..Raj..
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1st March 2016, 04:21 PM
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दोस्तो अपनी नयी गजल के साथ हाजिर हूँ,
कोई पल कोई लम्हा नहीं गुजरता,
जब आखों में तेरा अक्स नहीं उतरता ।
बस तुझे भूलने को नहीं राजी,
वैसे तो दिल बगावत नहीं करता ।
थी हमको भी अजीज जां अपनी,
अब मैं तुझपे मरने से नहीं डरता ।
तुझे पूजा है सदा रब की तरहा,
इस बात से मैं इनकार नहीं करता ।
टीस कोई उठती तो है उसके दिल में,
वे वजह तो कोई आहे नहीं भरता ।
कुछ तो खोया है उसका तेरी गलियों में,
यूँ ही कोई मारा मारा नहीं फिरता ।
या तो कह दे वो खुदा नहीं तेरा,
या फिर कह दे तू इबादत नहीं करता ।
बडा तनहा बडा बेचैन लगा है रहने,
आज कल 'वीर' शायरी नहीं करता ।
Rajveer ji.........khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th March 2016, 09:00 AM
Rajveer jee ko mera salaam....ghazal to dil mein utar gayi.......bahut khoob
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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11th March 2016, 09:10 AM
bahut khoob rajweer saahab... arse baad aapka koi kalaam nazar ke saamne aaya aur yaqeen maniye dil bhar aaya.....
kamaal ki adaaygee dikhi aapke is kalaam me bhii...
टीस कोई उठती तो है उसके दिल में,
वे वजह तो कोई आहे नहीं भरता ।
aate rahen, likhte rahen..
Shaad....
Shaad...
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