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Woh naam mera hi to hain! -
26th August 2004, 03:49 PM
Hatheli par jise likh ke mitate ho,
Woh naam mera hi to hain. chupke ke jise chumte ho, Woh naam mera hi to hain. Tere hothon pe jo kaanp raha hain, Woh naam mera hi to hain. Dhadkan mein jo gunj raha hain, Woh naam mera hi to hain. Apna naam jisse joda hain tune, Woh naam mera hi to hain. Tere naam ke bina jo adhura hain , Woh naam mera hi to hain, Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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beautifull -
26th August 2004, 04:10 PM
hi mausam
jis alfaz par likhi hai tumne jo dastan woh nam bhi mera hi toh hai Har ek saans jisse dhadakti hai teri woh nam mera hi toh hai.... mausam ek hassen ehsas..!!! Sal!m.....!!! |
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Bahut achchhe -
26th August 2004, 07:03 PM
Bahut hi behtreen....or romantic ...likha hai aapne....
Bahut khoob...yoNhi likhte rahiyega.. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Re: Woh naam mera hi to hain! -
26th August 2004, 07:14 PM
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mausam, bahu j saras....... kaik poorani yaad taji thhai gayi........ maru naam maru naam rame chhe tara hothh par ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun. maru naam vaansali bani tara hothhe vadge chhe; ne relaay chhe je sur, lohi banine dode chhe mara rom-rom ma ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun. tu bani jaay chhe warsaad laagni no ne mane bhinjve chhe tarbole.. bani jaay chhe aapno sambandh lilochham ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun. hu tane kadiy nahi bhulu priye ne kadiy nahi visru taro prem jyaare-jyaare aapna prem na sarovar ma mara naam ni hodi tu tarti mukae chhe hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe. ~ meena |
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BAHOT KHUB -
26th August 2004, 07:28 PM
Mausam
bahot khub. thanks 2 meena she told me about this shayri.maza aa gaya, very sweet. |
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26th August 2004, 07:42 PM
Hello musumji
kaise hia aap? bhaote hi aacha likha hai specially akhri do line bhoate hi achi hia. nice wrok agae bhi hum intezare rehga padne ka keep it up. Mushkan |
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26th August 2004, 08:24 PM
mausam...hmmm itnaa koobsurat likhaa hai tumne kii...gumm ho gaye hum tao khayalo mai......mobile par ghantii bajii tao dimaag kii ghantii bajii bhaii......jaago...
 bohooot hii pyaari rachan likhii hai tumne mausam....dil se daad nikal rahii hai..kabool karen......Sanju!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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27th August 2004, 03:01 PM
Hi Mausam Ji,
Real heart wrenchin words there. Gosh they brought out soooo many memories. Really beautiful n luved them a lot. Hope 2 c more from u. Luvs Salim |
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27th August 2004, 07:38 PM
hiii salimjee,
shukriyaaa...... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:41 PM
thanks chandji,
for the compliments keep smiling, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:46 PM
namaste meenaji......
apko accha laga,hame badi khushi hui.......apne jo hame guj mein ghazal bheji uske liye shukriya, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:48 PM
namaste meetaji,
shukriya apka jo apko hamari shairi acchi lagi aur meenajee ka bhi jinhone apko bataya...... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:50 PM
hi mushkaanjee,
thanks for liking it! mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:54 PM
hi sanjoo,
thanks .....tum gum ho gaye the...itni acchi lagi hamari shairi..mera dil garden garden ho gaya..... ghum hain kisiki shairi mein yeh sanju subah sham, mobile ki ghanti sun na paaye ,dekho usko dhyan...hai ram.../. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 07:56 PM
hello samlimjee urf candyboy,
thanks that u liked it.... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 11:02 PM
hi mausam ,
gr8...... congs... on this fantastic poem . vo mera naam tha bahut khub likha hai ekdum masum sa ehsans ho jaise ,pehle pehle pyar ka aisa mahsoos hua padh ke aapki ye kavita. keep writing mayu |
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29th August 2004, 10:39 AM
thanks mayu,
for liking this poem, best wishes 2 u also, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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Nice Composition -
31st August 2004, 03:57 PM
Mausam bahut hi sundar naam hay.............Aur utney hi masum
aapke Rachna.Kitney khoobsorat motey jaise shabdon mein aapney naam ko piroya hay..............Bahut khoobsorat sa aehsaas Aur meray paas shayd lafz nahin hain kitna sundar aehsaas chuppa hay is kavita mein. take Care |
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1st September 2004, 10:31 AM
thanks sukanya....
for appreciating the poem... tc, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2014, 11:36 AM
Bohat hi khoobsurat rachna mausam ji........
Lovely.....and touching. ... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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