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Ho lene do... -
30th May 2003, 09:18 PM
Khote hai agar jaan to kho lene do,
Eh dost jo ho jaaye ho lene do, Tujhse jo chute to sabra kar lenge kabhi, Iss waqt to jee kholke ro lene do! Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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31st May 2003, 03:10 PM
HAATH APNA BADDA DIJIYE
KUCH TO WFAA KA SILLA DIJIYE HUM CHAAND KE MUNTAZIR NAHI CHEHRA APNA HI DIKHA DIJIYE. |
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31st May 2003, 05:58 PM
Thanx mohit kuch post karne ke liye iss page par. Waise i just emailed you, aur maine PM bhi bheja hai padh lena. bye.
Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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31st May 2003, 06:31 PM
rymjhim
bohat achcha laga mujhe aap ka yeh qata. behad saada aur simple magar bohat rawan. waqaee ek naee jahad ka ehsaas hua is ko parh ker. mujhe pata naheen kyun eik shaiyr john eliaa ka yaad aa raha hai. "JANE KYAA WAQEAA HAI HONE KO DIL BOHAT CHAHTAA HAI RONE KO" Bohat khoob rymjhim, keep it up musharrafhusain |
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31st May 2003, 08:17 PM
musharrafhusain ji,
Aapka bahaut bahaut shukriyaa, aapne itni tareef kardi abhi lagta hai ki maine dil se likha hai  . Aapne meri doosri post padhi Unse mulakaat waali, padhiyega woh maine bahaut dil se likhi hai Shayri E Dard mai .Ek baar phir se shukriya hausla afzai ke liye .Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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2nd June 2003, 10:02 AM
Nice one Rimjhim,aise hi likhte rahiye
Ek Benaam shayar |
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2nd June 2003, 11:25 PM
hi rimji
how r u? this was really nice one chand lafjo me bahot kuchh baya kar diya keep writing sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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3rd June 2003, 11:01 PM
Shukriyaa rami ji,
aapne apna kimti waqt nikala aur reply diya, bahaut acacha laga. thankyou once again. Rim dil_e_sikast ji aapak bhi bahaut bahaut shukriyaa, ji main koshish karti hoo ki poore dil ka hala chand lafz mai hi kah jaoon par kya karoon kah nahi paati hoo lekin jitna bhi kah paati hoo to dil halka mahsoos karti hoo .Thankyou once for appreciating my poem. Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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Kya baat hai. -
4th June 2003, 11:15 PM
Itna dard dil me liye ghoom te ho. Doston se bat lijiye dard kam hojayega.
I appreciate your way of telling it. sam_an@sify.com |
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