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"meri maan" ufeq ke us paar se. - 31st March 2005, 11:34 AM

Azeez doston

Abhi pichle dinon kaafi bimaar raha.
Ek waqt mein to aisi haalat ho gaee ke mein ne kaha ke bas ab zindagi tamaam hui.
Magar doston is aalam e naza mein mujhe apni marhooma maan aur un ki mohabbatein kis tarah yaad aati raheen aur voh mujhe jeena ka walwala aur hausla deti raheen, mere dil mein maan ki azmaat ashkaar karti raheen.
Yeh chand lines jo mere dost shahzad naiyyer ki tahreer karda hain mager meri tarjumaan hain. Aap doston se share kerta hoon.

Safaid aanchal ke ek kone mein
Mere aansu sanbhaal ker is tarah se boli
“Na aise rona
Ey mere bachchay
Yeh zindagi; ek doosra naam hai dukhon kaa
Tumhare aansu mere jiger per tapak pare hain
Na mere bachchay
Na aise rona”
Mein rote rote hi so gaya thaa
Ufeq ke us paar se meri maan
Mere dukhon per udaas ho ker
Meri tassalli ko aan pohnchi
Vehi muqaddas nadeem aankhein
Rahim aankhein, karim aankhein
Ufeq ke us paar se jo mujh ko
Bari mohabbat se dekhti hain
Meri nigahon se duur hain
Per mere dukhon ki nami in aankhon mein jaane
Kyun ker chalak uthi thi
Voh meri maan hai
Jo mere ashkon ko pallu mein baandh ker
Aasmaan ke us paar le gaee hai
“Yeh loag kehte hain ; maayein merti hain”
“ Maayein mar ker bhi jaagti hain”
“Jo bachchay royein to soti keb hain”
“Yeh maayein bachchon ko khoti keb hain “

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Re: "meri maan" ufeq ke us paar se. - 31st March 2005, 12:26 PM

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Azeez doston

Abhi pichle dinon kaafi bimaar raha.
Ek waqt mein to aisi haalat ho gaee ke mein ne kaha ke bas ab zindagi tamaam hui.
Magar doston is aalam e naza mein mujhe apni marhooma maan aur un ki mohabbatein kis tarah yaad aati raheen aur voh mujhe jeena ka walwala aur hausla deti raheen, mere dil mein maan ki azmaat ashkaar karti raheen.
Yeh chand lines jo mere dost shahzad naiyyer ki tahreer karda hain mager meri tarjumaan hain. Aap doston se share kerta hoon.

Safaid aanchal ke ek kone mein
Mere aansu sanbhaal ker is tarah se boli
“Na aise rona
Ey mere bachchay
Yeh zindagi; ek doosra naam hai dukhon kaa
Tumhare aansu mere jiger per tapak pare hain
Na mere bachchay
Na aise rona”
Mein rote rote hi so gaya thaa
Ufeq ke us paar se meri maan
Mere dukhon per udaas ho ker
Meri tassalli ko aan pohnchi
Vehi muqaddas nadeem aankhein
Rahim aankhein, karim aankhein
Ufeq ke us paar se jo mujh ko
Bari mohabbat se dekhti hain
Meri nigahon se duur hain
Per mere dukhon ki nami in aankhon mein jaane
Kyun ker chalak uthi thi
Voh meri maan hai
Jo mere ashkon ko pallu mein baandh ker
Aasmaan ke us paar le gaee hai
“Yeh loag kehte hain ; maayein merti hain”
“ Maayein mar ker bhi jaagti hain”
“Jo bachchay royein to soti keb hain”
“Yeh maayein bachchon ko khoti keb hain “

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wah wah - 31st March 2005, 12:27 PM

MUSHI DOST
APNE SACH KAHA HAI MAA HOTI HAI AISE, bache ke dukh dard apne main samet leti hai, take care. bahot hi khubsurat likha hai.


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1st April 2005, 10:55 AM

kunal mere bhai

Is post per aap ka aanaa aur apne jazbaat ka itna khubsurat izhaar aap ke dil aur ruuh ki pakeezgi ka aaiyna daar hai.
bhai meri duayein aap ke liye aap ke puure pariwaar ka liye.
khush rahein.

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1st April 2005, 10:56 AM

mita dost

aap ka shukriyaa.

Thanks a lot .
God bless you.

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2nd April 2005, 07:51 AM

mere mushi dost,

kya kahu aapki baat par.........

kai baar padhhi par maan nahi bhara.....
ek ek labz maa ko pookar raha hai.. aur yunh lagta hai ..... maa, apne aanchal maie oon sabhi labz ko samet rahi hai...

aap apna khayal rakhiyega.....
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2nd April 2005, 01:24 PM

Musharrafhusain saahab.....aap swasth haiN or waapas ham dostoN ke saath haiN, ye badi khushi ki baat hai....

Maa ke prati aapki ye rachna parhi....sach parhkar bada sukooN mile....sahi kaha aapne Maa hamesha hamare saath hi rehti hain...ye anubhav to hame bhi huva hai hamaare bure dinoN me...

Bahut khoob hai aapke ye Ehsaas.

Shukriya inhe hamaare saath share karne ke liye.


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3rd April 2005, 11:03 PM

meena dost

mein samajh sakta hoon. ke maan ki mohabbat aur us ki aulaad se wabastgi ko tum se ziayada kon samajhta hai.thank you meena for your sentiments.

khush raho

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chaand dost

thank you for your wishes.

aap ne hamare ehsaas ko samjha, aur saraha . yeh sab aap ki mohabbat hai.
maan ke bare mein aap ke ehsaasaat se mein bakhoobi waaqif hoon aur aap ke ehsaasaat ki bari qader kerta hoon.

meri duayein aap mehsoos karein hamesha aap ke saath hain.

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5th April 2005, 11:53 AM

“Yeh maayein bachchon ko khoti keb hain “

Kabhi nahin ...kabhi nahin...

Mushi bhayyia...

aapke dost ne bahut se bachon ki bhavnaaon ko in lafzon mein rakh diya hai...padhte padhte aankhein nam ho gayin aur apni maa ki bahut yaad aayi...jab bhi phone pe zyada khush nazar aati hoon. tau unhein shaq ho jaata hai ki zaroor meri beti udaas hai...meri hansi pe woh poocheingi ki 'bata kya hua'...aur phir bus...main khud ba khud beh jaati hoon...

Vehi muqaddas nadeem aankhein
Rahim aankhein, karim aankhein

jinse kuch chupta nahin...sab bhed jaan leti hain...

aap apna bahut dhyaan rakhieygaa...behan tau hai na aapke paas...


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5th April 2005, 02:51 PM

Safaid aanchal ke ek kone mein
Mere aansu sanbhaal ker is tarah se boli

“Na aise rona
Ey mere bachchay

Yeh zindagi; ek doosra naam hai dukhon kaa
Tumhare aansu mere jiger per tapak pare hain

Maa vaqayi me apne bacche ko rotanahi dkh sakti kabhi!!


Na mere bachchay
Na aise rona”

Mein rote rote hi so gaya thaa
Ufeq ke us paar se meri maan

Mere dukhon per udaas ho ker
Meri tassalli ko aan pohnchi

Vehi muqaddas nadeem aankhein
Rahim aankhein, karim aankhein

Ufeq ke us paar se jo mujh ko
Bari mohabbat se dekhti hain

Shabd nahin hain bhai.. inki taareef ko!!


Meri nigahon se duur hain
Per mere dukhon ki nami in aankhon mein jaane

Kyun ker chalak uthi thi
Voh meri maan hai

Jo mere ashkon ko pallu mein baandh ker
Aasmaan ke us paar le gaee hai

Waaaahhh....


“Yeh loag kehte hain ; maayein merti hain”
“ Maayein mar ker bhi jaagti hain”

“Jo bachchay royein to soti keb hain”
“Yeh maayein bachchon ko khoti keb hain “

Very Touching!!!!

Mushi Bhai!!

Kaise hain aaap? Aapki post dekhkar humesha hi accha lagta hai...Aapko aasa paas dekhkar humne bhi confidence milta rehta hai...

Bhai poori rachna hi kamaal ki hai... Maa ke liey jo kucch likh diya jaaye kama hai... Maa ki mamta ko bahut hi pyaare ashaar me darshaya hai aapane... Mujeh bahut bahut pasand ayaa.....Kitne log hain jo apni maa ke liye aaj bhi aisa soch paate hain...hum to khuhsnaseeb hain jo humari sabhyata me maa ko itni izzat dii gayi hai!!


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6th April 2005, 06:08 PM

Paras meri behan

thanks for sharing such wonderful feelings.
maan ki maamta ko tum se ziayada kon samajh sakta hai.

hamari ek dost shayra ka shayr hai
"JIS ROAZ BANI MAAN MEIN USI ROAZ SE MUJH KO"
"LAGNE LAGI ACHCHI MERI MAAN AUR ZIAYADA "

Bhai ki duayein apni behan ke liye , uski khushiyon ke liye.
Just feel.

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6th April 2005, 06:13 PM

pulkit mere bhai

aap ke is forum per aane aur maan per likhi gaee is nazm se waabasta khayalaat ko share kerne ke liye aap ka shukr guzaar hoon.
bhai such kaha aap ne yeh rishta, aur yeh ehsaas hi aisa hai, jo hamein insaaniyet aur haiwaniyet ke farq se aagaah kerta hai.

aap ka behad shukr guzaar hoon.

meri dua hai aap jahan rahein khush rahein

bas meri yeh guzarish yaad rakhein ke apna bohat khayal rakhein.

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13th April 2005, 12:32 PM

Mushi Ji….

Maa ke pyar ko bakhubi bayan kiya hai aapne…..aur doston ka pyar aapki zindagi ko khushaal banaye….

Duwaaon ke saath izzazat…..

Aapka dost…..



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