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27th August 2007, 01:30 PM
Maaf karna doston.. Mujhse ek khata ho gayi.. Muskurane ki khata. Main ye bhool gaya tha ki mujhe hansne ki ijazat nahin di
hai mere muqaddar ne... Zara bhool ki ke sailab aa jata hai.. Apni aukaat bhoolkar hansne ke liye chit-chat forum mein chala gaya tha.. Par mera aashiyana muskurahat nahin Dard hai.. dard-e-Dil hai.... Yun to khoob aazmayi meri mohabbat usne Khuda se kai baar lagayi meri shikayat usne Uski har ek dua mein meri ruksati ki hasrat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi Uski in adaon ka bhi main, deewana hua baitha tha Uske dil mein jo panah mili, use apna aashiyana kehta tha Uski aankon ki Dilkashi maano jaise meri Jannat thi Par meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi Usse Ishq ka shauk rakhne wala, uske liye ek Gair tha Jitni mujhe mohabbat thi, use utnaa hi mujhse Vair tha Meri maut ki aarzoo mere, mashooq ke liye ibadat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi Kai baar zakhm diye the usne kai baar namak lagati thi Bahut pyaar aata tha uspar uske baad jab wo muskurati thi Muskurakar mujhe yun khushi dena, ye uski mujhpar inayat thi Meri mehbooba ko lekin, meri..Aashiqi se nafrat thi Aaaj bewafaai ki inteha ko wo gairon ki baahon mein So gayi.. Mujhe todne ki hasrat itni thi, wo kisi aur ki ho gayi.. Kisi aur ka uska ho jaana mere liye qayamat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri ZINDAGI se bahuttt nafrat thi Aaj pehli baar usse meri mohabbat par yakeen aaya hai Uski aankhon ne bhi aaj ek ashq ka katra chalkaya hai Pal bhar mohlat de de khuda,pal bhar ko uth jane de Dekh meri maiyat par mera mehboob aaya hai,, Dekh meri maiyat par mera mehboob aaya hai.... |
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29th August 2007, 02:20 PM
Wafa ka Vaada mujhse karke,
Gairon ki Mohabbat ke Talabgaar rehte hain Koi ungli na uthao mere Mehboob par doston, Wo khud ko,,, Wafadaar kehte hain.... |
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29th August 2007, 09:16 PM
Hello "Amit Widhani"
bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne, aapne te taa kamaal hi kar diya dost  GOD IS GREAT
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Amit ji aaj aap ko pehli baar padhaa to sach maaniye padhtaa hii reh gaya, aap ke is kalaam men bahut dard bhara padaa hai aur men to kehtaa hoon aap ke kalaam men hee nahii aap ke dil men bhi dard hai jise aap yun ghazal ke jhariye bayaan kar rahe hai, aap ki yeh bayaani kaabil-e-taariff hai. mai sochata thaa ki sirf mere dil men aur ghazal men hee dard hai magar aap ka ye jakhmi ,lahoo se lathpath kalam padh kar men apna dard bhool gaya.Aap ki yeh nazm mere dil ko chhoo gayi, aap ka kalaam maine 2-3 baar padhaa mujhe yeh kuchh lines bahut hi achhi lagi. Yun to khoob aazmayi meri mohabbat usne Khuda se kai baar lagayi meri shikayat usne Uski har ek dua mein meri ruksati ki hasrat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi Uski in adaon ka bhi main, deewana hua baitha tha Uske dil mein jo panah mili, use apna aashiyana kehta tha Uski aankon ki Dilkashi maano jaise meri Jannat thi Par meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi Usse Ishq ka shauk rakhne wala, uske liye ek Gair tha Jitni mujhe mohabbat thi, use utnaa hi mujhse Vair tha Meri maut ki aarzoo mere, mashooq ke liye ibadat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se Nafrat thi aaj bewafaai ki inteha ko wo gairon ki baahon mein So gayi.. Mujhe todne ki hasrat itni thi, wo kisi aur ki ho gayi.. yunhi likhate rahiyega regards manu |
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Aadab amit ji, kaise hain aap? hame yakin hai aap bohot achhe honge,,hai na?  kyunki jo shaks itna achha likhta ho,aur itna saaf dil rakhta ho,,woh achha hi hoga. pata hain aap jab bhi likhte hain,,esa mehsus hota hain,, jese Aapne koi nazam nahi likhi hain,,,balki apna dil hi nikal kar hum sab ke samne rakh diya ho. yakin maniye aapki nazam bohot hi pyari hai,, aur dil ko chhu gayi, DILSE nikli daad ko kabul kijiyega, aur haan aapki muskan bohot achhi hai,,ise kabhi khone mat dijiyega, is duniya me aansu muft me mil jate hain,per khushi nasib walo ko milti hain, to hamesha khush rehna. apna khayal rakhiye, KHUSH RAHIYE, ALLAH HAFIZ Apki dost HASSONI, ( HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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2nd September 2007, 02:58 AM
apke ehsaas se mere zehan mein bhi kuch khyal aaye...jo is tarah hai...ummeed hai ki apko ye ehsaas pasand nahi aayenge...
Jab Jab manie tumhari Gazalon ko padha hai… M hai har Lafz tumhari Gazlon mein… Pyar hai…Wafa hai…Kaza hai…Haya hai… Lekin… mainaine…Ek naya jeevan Jiya hai… Yun toe Sirf tumhari Nafrat ko piya hai… Ye Ehsaas mere nahi Tumhare hai… Mere andar bhi to Tu hi tu Basa hai... Ye mere Bepanah pyar ka Sila hai… Tabhi to mujhe Duaa mein tu hi Tu mila hai… Chahe jitna Door ho tu Mujhse… Lekin jara Aakar dekh… Mere charo orr… Tera hi Silsila hai… Isliye to maine Teri Nafrat ko Chuna hai… …mahuaa…  ..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi.. Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge.. Shayad Nahi.. Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to.. Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi.. Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi.. Main janti hun..Magar.. Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥.. ..nm.. ...mahuaa... |
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3rd September 2007, 06:36 AM
namaste amit ji
wah, dard ki aishe bayaan kiya hai aapne k, k aisha lagta hai jaise lafz ro rahein ho. dard hi dard hai aur kuch b nahi, ek kahani jaisi lagti hai yeh pesh-kash. bahut khub amit ji. daad hajir hai, kabul kijiye. khush rahein aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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Bahut Bahut shukriya heer ji. Ye aap jaise doston ki hi duayein hain ki main likh pata hoon. Warna ashkon se tasweer banana asaan nahin hota... |
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3rd September 2007, 11:23 AM
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Manu Ji aapne jo mere liye kiya hai wo main kabhi nahin bhool sakta. Maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki kisi ko ye Ehsaas itna khoobsurat bhi lag sakta hai. Ahemdabad mein hote hue aapne mujh padhte hi phone kiya aur itna dilkash reply bhi kiya. Bahut bahut shukriya dost.. Agar itni mohabbat apno ne di hoti to aaj is Ehsaas ka janam hi nahin hota.. |
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3rd September 2007, 11:27 AM
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Aadaab soni ji. Ji aapne theek samjha. Main bahut schha hoon. Umeed karta hoon aap aur Hasan Ji bhi bahut achhe honge. Ab aapke reply ko lekar kya kahoon. Yakeen maniye ab jb bhi koi post likhta hoon, jab tak aapka reply na aaye, adhoori lagti hai. Har baar is tarah saath dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Soni Ji... Magar haan ye aapne sahi samjha ki main kabhi poem nahin likhta balki sahi mayno mein apne aansuon se dard ki tasweer banane ki koshish karta rehta hoon... Aur jahan tak muskurahat ka sawaal hai Zamana lakh koshish kar le rulane ki, par jab tak aap jaise doston ka saath hai, muskurata rahoonga.. Vaada krta hoon aata rahoonga.. |
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3rd September 2007, 01:35 PM
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..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi.. Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge.. Shayad Nahi.. Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to.. Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi.. Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi.. Main janti hun..Magar.. Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥.. ..nm.. ...mahuaa... |
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3rd September 2007, 02:47 PM
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Kai baar zakhm diye the usne kai baar namak lagati thi Bahut pyaar aata tha uspar uske baad jab wo muskurati thi Muskurakar mujhe yun khushi dena, ye uski mujhpar inayat thi Meri mehbooba ko lekin, meri..Aashiqi se nafrat thi Aaaj bewafaai ki inteha ko wo gairon ki baahon mein So gayi.. Mujhe todne ki hasrat itni thi, wo kisi aur ki ho gayi.. Kisi aur ka uska ho jaana mere liye qayamat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri ZINDAGI se bahuttt nafrat thi widhani ji uper jo ashar quote kiye bohat achay lagay main aap ke itnay dard pe shayad kuch bhi na keh paoon dua hai aapko zindagi se jitne shikway shikayatain hain woh door hojayen ameeeeeeeen zindagi se kisi surat mayoos mat hon bas yehi dua hai khush rahiye apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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Jise Khuda ki mafik pooja hai maine wo ladki ek fareb hai Main akela hi uska aashiq nahin, uske yaar anek hain Apna haq samjha tha jispar wo gairon ki amanat thi Meri mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se nafrat thi Chaand Sitare tod lane ka jazba jiske liye rakhta tha Us Sang-Dil Bewafa se main bahut mohabbat karta tha Par usse mere saath aur deewaono ki bhi zaroorat thi Meri Mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se nafrat thi Meri Mehbooba ko meri Aashiqi se nafrat thi.. |
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4th September 2007, 11:29 AM
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Kaise hai aap???.. Aapka shukriya ada karna chahunga ki aap is post par aaye, apna waqt diya aur is dard ko samjha. Bahut bahut shukriya dost.. |
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4th September 2007, 11:31 AM
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Aapne kisi kami ko poora nahin kiya Mahuaa balki ek kami paida ki hai. Ek nasoor Zakhm diya hai.. And U must know I _ _ _ _ u for that... |
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4th September 2007, 02:12 PM
Amit ji namaskar
aapke iss dard bhare alfazo ko padha bhaut hee dard dekha aake iss kalam me aur aapne apne iss dard ko bhaut hee gehreai se likha hai aisa lagta hai ki ye dard aapne kafi kareeb se mehsos kia hai par aapka kalam kabil e tareef hai |
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5th September 2007, 01:55 PM
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aapne mere dard ko samjha aur is Ehsaas ko pasand kiya, yakeen maniye bahut achha laga... Shukriya.... |
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Namaskar Tanah Safar Ji. Main aapka naam to nahin janta par aapne is ehsaas ko padha, dard ko samjha aur alfaazon ko saraha, iske liye bahut bahut shukriya... |
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22nd September 2007, 12:24 PM
Aalam-e-Ishq Ki kashti mein sawar hokar
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9th September 2008, 07:18 PM
Ibadat Ki ibadat hai mohabbat ki mohabbat hai.
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10th September 2008, 10:58 AM
amit sahib !
kafii dard bara likha hai ! par theek likha hai ! pasand aaya ! daad ke sath ! |
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10th September 2008, 04:19 PM
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Dukh ki raah mein dard hi hamdard hota hai........ jab koi chor kar chala jaye to dil chupke se kyo rota hai..... kisi ki judai ka gam to aisa hota hai........ isiliye to begana veeran jagaho per rota hai......nm  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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rhkar khayalon mein kyun sapno k aashiyane sajata hai shayad sirf tutna hi likha ahi iski dagar mein isliye hi ye dil begani taqdeer k sawaab mein dafn ho jata hai" |
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10th September 2008, 06:29 PM
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Is dil ko humne unka aashiyana bana rakha hai Kahi unhe na chu jaaye iski aag ki lapte isliye "Ehsaas" ne apne dil ko jalne se baccha rakha hai.... |
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11th September 2008, 02:29 AM
AmiT Sahib...
Acccha Likha AapNe.... Thread Ka Title! Hamari Samajh Se Thoda Bahar Hua! Anyway's Acchi Koshish Hai Aap ki Accha Lega Pad Kar AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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15th September 2008, 06:02 PM
Hi Amrit Ji,
Thanks a lot for the appreciation and love |
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Kai baar kaha, ashqon se mehfilon mein na aaya karo Tere dard-e-gum mein ye achaknak hi chalak jaate hain Bole ashq "Ehsaas" tujhe jab wahan akela paate hain Tera saath dene hum mehfilon mein bhi chale aate hain |
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