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बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" & -
30th November 2008, 01:34 AM
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,
वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,
कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,
कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
This poem is for my beloved sister...........
From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...
नलिन (गुड्डू)
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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1st December 2008, 09:48 AM
sach kahu di bhi tumhari poem padh ke kaafi khush hongi,
ki tum unhein itna pyar karte ho
unki har baat ko samajhte ho
aur sabse badi baat unki tumhare life mein value kya hain
waise abhi tak unhone ise padha hain
shayad emotional ho jaayengi
nahin to zor se hans padengi
good emotion
aur bahot sahi tarah se
tum waise khaate kya ho itna achha likh lete ho
just kidding
good one
wish u all d luck to u and ur family
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1st December 2008, 10:01 AM
Nalin jii...............es rishte ke aage kuch kahe ko rah hi nahi jata.....aapne apne dil ki baat bakhoobi kahi hai....har bhai bahen ka pyar aisa hi hota hai, par lafzo.n mein har koi bayaaN nahi pata, jaisa ki aap kar gaye....bhagwaaN aapki didi ko aur aapko sadha kush rakhe.....yeh pyar yoon hi bana rahe.
duao.n ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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7th December 2008, 02:47 PM
dearest muskaan,
itni tareef ke liye shukriya, main kya kahat hun, yeh toh mujhe bh pata nai. he he he.
yeh toh meri didi se mera emotional attachement hai jisne mujhse yeh poem likhwa di, ehsaas aur jazbaat yahi toh ek acchi poem ke liye zaruri hote hain....
thanks again
Nalin
dearest sunita,
itni tareef ke liye apka shukriya, bas aise hi ap logon ko pyaar milta rahega, toh koshish yahi rahegi ki, behtar aur accha likh sakun.
thanks again
yours poetic frnd
Nalin
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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31st March 2009, 12:38 AM
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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31st March 2009, 11:29 AM
Wow! yaar, bhai behen k is pyaar ko bht hi khoobsurat andaz diya hai tumne....u r a versatile poet...awesome, KEEP IT UP
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1st April 2009, 12:34 PM
THANK YOU NAZNEEN...................... THIS POEM IS VERY CLOSE TO MY HEART IT IS FOR MY DIDI..................SHE IS THE MOST SPECIAL ONE IN MY LIFE..............
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Wow! yaar, bhai behen k is pyaar ko bht hi khoobsurat andaz diya hai tumne....u r a versatile poet...awesome, KEEP IT UP
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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3rd April 2009, 02:35 PM
MaiN bas itna kahuNga .. in alfaazoN ko kisi tarah ki tareef se taula nahi jaa sakta .. shukriya inhe humse share karne ke liye
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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3rd April 2009, 10:53 PM
Nalin Dost.......
u knw my prob...
Ab jb itni taareef hui hai aapki ghazal ki , to mujh pe thoda taras kha lo yaaaaar...
Raha ni jaara, is poem ko padhe bina...
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5th April 2009, 03:51 PM
@ Buland bhai, deri keliye maafi chahta hun, par waqt milte hi iska roman hindi version post karunga
@ KUNAAL bhai, apne is nacheez ki is kavita par nazar dali wahi karam tha, aur apne ispar jo khubsurat andaaz me tareef padi hai, uska shukriya ada karne ke liye mukammal lafz hai nahi mere pass..................... but i can say that, this is the best compliment i have ver got about my poem...................... thanks alot
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Nalin Dost.......
u knw my prob...
Ab jb itni taareef hui hai aapki ghazal ki , to mujh pe thoda taras kha lo yaaaaar...
Raha ni jaara, is poem ko padhe bina...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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Roman Version For My Friend Buland Shayar -
6th April 2009, 03:05 AM
This roman hindi version is on special request for my friend "Buland Shayar"
woh madham sa muskurana aur woh jhooth-mooth ka gussa dikahana,
samajhna meri har baat ko aur mujhe har baat samjhana,
woh ladna tera mujhse aur phir pyar jatana,
bahut yaad aata hai "didi" tumhara mujhe "bhai" kehke bulana,
woh sham dhale karna baatein mujhse aur apni har baat mujhe batana,
sunke meri bewakufiyaan tumahara zor se hans jaana,
meri har galti pe lagana daant aur phir us daant ke baad mujhe pyar se samjhana,
koi aur na hoga tumse pyara mujhe yeh aaj maine hai jaana,
woh rakhi aur bhai-dooj pe tumahara teeka lagana,
kumkum me doobi ungli se mera matha sajana,
khilana mujhe mithai pyar se aur dil se dua de jaana,
bandh ke dhaga kalai pe meri pane pyar ko jatana,
kabhi ban jaana maa meri aur kabhi dost ban jaana,
dena nashihatein mujhe aur hidayatein dohrana,
jab chhaye gham ka andhera to khushi ki kiran banke aana,
haan tumhi se to seekha hai maine gham me muskurana
kehta hai man mera rehke door tumse mujhe ab ek lamha bhi nahi hai bitana,
ab to bas "guddu" ko apni "pari didi" ke pass hai jaana,
hai bahut se ehsaas dil me hai samaye ab pata nahi inhe kaise hai samjhana,
bas jaan lo itna "didi" bahut yaad aata hai tumhara "bhai" kehke bulana..
This is dedicated to my beloved sister.
Form a Poetic Brother
Nalin (Guddu)
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,
वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,
कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,
कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
This poem is for my beloved sister...........
From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...
नलिन (गुड्डू)
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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6th April 2009, 10:51 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra
This roman hindi version is on special request for my friend "Buland Shayar"
woh madham sa muskurana aur woh jhooth-mooth ka gussa dikahana,
samajhna meri har baat ko aur mujhe har baat samjhana,
woh ladna tera mujhse aur phir pyar jatana,
bahut yaad aata hai "didi" tumhara mujhe "bhai" kehke bulana,
woh sham dhale karna baatein mujhse aur apni har baat mujhe batana,
sunke meri bewakufiyaan tumahara zor se hans jaana,
meri har galti pe lagana daant aur phir us daant ke baad mujhe pyar se samjhana,
koi aur na hoga tumse pyara mujhe yeh aaj maine hai jaana,
woh rakhi aur bhai-dooj pe tumahara teeka lagana,
kumkum me doobi ungli se mera matha sajana,
khilana mujhe mithai pyar se aur dil se dua de jaana,
bandh ke dhaga kalai pe meri pane pyar ko jatana,
kabhi ban jaana maa meri aur kabhi dost ban jaana,
dena nashihatein mujhe aur hidayatein dohrana,
jab chhaye gham ka andhera to khushi ki kiran banke aana,
haan tumhi se to seekha hai maine gham me muskurana
kehta hai man mera rehke door tumse mujhe ab ek lamha bhi nahi hai bitana,
ab to bas "guddu" ko apni "pari didi" ke pass hai jaana,
hai bahut se ehsaas dil me hai samaye ab pata nahi inhe kaise hai samjhana,
bas jaan lo itna "didi" bahut yaad aata hai tumhara "bhai" kehke bulana..
This is dedicated to my beloved sister.
Form a Poetic Brother
Nalin (Guddu)
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Guddu ji 1st of all thanx 4 ur precious time,whch u spent on my request...
sach me maine bhai behan k pyaar k upar likhi ye pehli poem padhi hai, wakai kunaal ji ne sahi kaha, is rachna ko tareef k lafzo se nahi tola ja sakta...
Aapke ehsaas bahut he khoobsoorat hain...
Aapki poem ko padh k lagta hai k aapki Pari didi aur Aap dono he khushnaseeb ho...
Shayad aapki pari didi aapse badi hain,
meri b 2 behan hai lekin mujhse choti hain...
Kaash meri b koi badi didi hoti aapke jaisi...
To mai aapki poem chura k unko dedicate kar deta
neways Thanx again bhai...
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8th May 2009, 10:28 AM
Buland bhai, apne is nacheez ki tareef kari, apka bahut bahut shukriya.....
is poem ka shrey meri didi ko jaata hai, woh hai hi itni acchi ki, meri jagah koi aur bhi bhai hota, toh woh bhi aisi kavita unke liye likh jaata.......
tareef ke liye phir se shukriya
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Originally Posted by Buland Shayar
Guddu ji 1st of all thanx 4 ur precious time,whch u spent on my request...
sach me maine bhai behan k pyaar k upar likhi ye pehli poem padhi hai, wakai kunaal ji ne sahi kaha, is rachna ko tareef k lafzo se nahi tola ja sakta...
Aapke ehsaas bahut he khoobsoorat hain...
Aapki poem ko padh k lagta hai k aapki Pari didi aur Aap dono he khushnaseeb ho...
Shayad aapki pari didi aapse badi hain,
meri b 2 behan hai lekin mujhse choti hain...
Kaash meri b koi badi didi hoti aapke jaisi...
To mai aapki poem chura k unko dedicate kar deta
neways Thanx again bhai...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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13th May 2009, 04:56 PM
Waow...... Nalin so so amazing.....
Arey yaar ab to may tarif kare nahi takhaunga par mere alfaz hi mujhe dhokha de jate hai...
Sach me yaar kya feelings bayan ki hai tumne so so cute...
Tumhare is kavita ko may bahut hi kareeb rakhunga,..... Bus Tumhari Izzazt chahiye...
Is rishte ko bahut hi badiya bayan kiya hai tumne...
Yaar yunhi likhte raho....
aur mehfil sajate raho...
Khush raho ab ke dua rahengi ki tumhare didi ka sath tumhe hamesh naseeb ho...
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14th May 2009, 08:02 PM
Tareef Ke Liye Behad Shukriya, Arey jab ham ne apno apna maan liyahia toh hmarai kavita bhi aphi ki hui, toh izzazat ki baat hi nahin hai, ap is kavita ko apne kareeb rakhenge toh mujhe pe karam hoga, behad shukriya................
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Waow...... Nalin so so amazing.....
Arey yaar ab to may tarif kare nahi takhaunga par mere alfaz hi mujhe dhokha de jate hai...
Sach me yaar kya feelings bayan ki hai tumne so so cute...
Tumhare is kavita ko may bahut hi kareeb rakhunga,..... Bus Tumhari Izzazt chahiye...
Is rishte ko bahut hi badiya bayan kiya hai tumne...
Yaar yunhi likhte raho....
aur mehfil sajate raho...
Khush raho ab ke dua rahengi ki tumhare didi ka sath tumhe hamesh naseeb ho...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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22nd May 2009, 12:50 AM
Kunaal Bhai Behad Shukriya Aapka
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MaiN bas itna kahuNga .. in alfaazoN ko kisi tarah ki tareef se taula nahi jaa sakta .. shukriya inhe humse share karne ke liye
Kunaal
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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23rd May 2009, 04:17 AM
Nalin jee,
bhai bahen ke Rista hi anmol hai ....
is anmol Riste ko labzo meiN bayaan karna bahot muskil hai ..........
aapne itne khubsoorati se ehesaas ko bayaan kiye hai ki mere pass shabd nahi hai
kuchh tareef karne ko sachi
Didi ka ladla bhai ..........
humesha khus raho
aapki dost
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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23rd May 2009, 09:06 AM
Diya Ji, ap is thread pe aayi toh mujhe bahut aacha laga, maine aaj tak jitni bhi poems likhi, unme se yeh meri personal favorite hai, aur mere dil ke bahut kareeb bhi hai.......
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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1st July 2009, 06:12 PM
Kunaal Bhai, apka bahut bahut dhanyawaad, jo apne waqt nikal ke is kavitako pada, deri se reply ke liye muaafi chahta hun...........
apka
Nalin
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Originally Posted by sacccha_pyar
MaiN bas itna kahuNga .. in alfaazoN ko kisi tarah ki tareef se taula nahi jaa sakta .. shukriya inhe humse share karne ke liye
Kunaal
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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1st April 2010, 08:48 PM
nalin,
aaj aapki i's kavita par nazar padi...kya kahuN, bahut khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko liye hai aapki kavita....bahut pasand aayee mujhe....mujhe kya jo bhi koi padhega, use aapki yeh kavita aur aapke yeh ehsaas bahut pasaNd aayeNge...
kunaal saheb ne theek hi kaha hai...maiN bhi is se zyada bolne ki auqaat nahi rakhta....
aapka dost,
vikram...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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2nd April 2010, 10:29 PM
nalin shaeb,
main bhi kunaal bhai se iqteffaq rakhta hu.....badi behan ka pyaar kismat valo ko milta hai...aur lagta hai aap kismat se dhani hai....
anmol alfaaz hai....koi mol nahi inka......
aquaat meri bhi utni nahi......
kush rahiye.....likhte rahiye.....
reps+++
aapka
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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6th May 2013, 09:09 PM
Vikram ji, Bahut Bahut shukriya kavita padhne ka aur haan main sach main bahut kismet wala hu, itni acchi didi paake...
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
nalin,
aaj aapki i's kavita par nazar padi...kya kahuN, bahut khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko liye hai aapki kavita....bahut pasand aayee mujhe....mujhe kya jo bhi koi padhega, use aapki yeh kavita aur aapke yeh ehsaas bahut pasaNd aayeNge...
kunaal saheb ne theek hi kaha hai...maiN bhi is se zyada bolne ki auqaat nahi rakhta....
aapka dost,
vikram...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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6th May 2013, 09:11 PM
Amit Ji, Tareef Ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya.... aap Jaise Doston Ka Pyaar Paake mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai....
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nalin shaeb,
main bhi kunaal bhai se iqteffaq rakhta hu.....badi behan ka pyaar kismat valo ko milta hai...aur lagta hai aap kismat se dhani hai....
anmol alfaaz hai....koi mol nahi inka......
aquaat meri bhi utni nahi......
kush rahiye.....likhte rahiye.....
reps+++
aapka
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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7th May 2013, 08:22 AM
nalin jee...itni sundar panktiyan padne se main vanchit reh jata agar kal aap is pe reply na karte..bahut sundarta se aapne bhai behn ke rishton ko samjhaya hai..its marvellous...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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7th May 2013, 09:01 AM
Jitni bhi taareef ki jaaye kam hai,
saBd nahi hai mere paas ,
uttammmmmmmmmmm,
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9th May 2013, 07:54 PM
arvind ji, tareef ke liye bhead shukriya, waise mujh jaisa nacheez itni tareef ke kabil nahi hai...
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nalin jee...itni sundar panktiyan padne se main vanchit reh jata agar kal aap is pe reply na karte..bahut sundarta se aapne bhai behn ke rishton ko samjhaya hai..its marvellous...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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9th May 2013, 07:55 PM
Bahut Bahut dhanyawadd Rajeev Ji, apne waqt nikal ke is kavita ko padha....
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Jitni bhi taareef ki jaaye kam hai,
saBd nahi hai mere paas ,
uttammmmmmmmmmm,
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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10th May 2013, 09:22 AM
Waaahhhh Nalin jii.............
aapki behad purani aur behad khaas kavita hhai yeh... sach kahun to mann gadgad ho utha is marmik kavita ko padh kar.. atyant samvedansheel... likhte raheN.... khush rahiye...
Shaad....
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11th May 2013, 12:25 AM
waaooo nalin ji dil ko chu gayi...bas inta saa dukh hain ki meri koi behan nahi hain...
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Originally Posted by nalinmehra
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,
वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,
कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,
कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,
This poem is for my beloved sister...........
From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...
नलिन (गुड्डू)
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11th May 2013, 06:43 PM
shaad bhai, behad shukriya padhne ke liye, sach kahun toh meri didi itni acchi hai k meri jagah koi aur hota, toh who bhi aisa hi kuch likh deta unke liye....
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Waaahhhh Nalin jii.............
aapki behad purani aur behad khaas kavita hhai yeh... sach kahun to mann gadgad ho utha is marmik kavita ko padh kar.. atyant samvedansheel... likhte raheN.... khush rahiye...
Shaad....
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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11th May 2013, 06:45 PM
Sudhir ji, bahut bahut shukriya tareef ke liye.........
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waaooo nalin ji dil ko chu gayi...bas inta saa dukh hain ki meri koi behan nahi hain...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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