husn walon mein mohabbat ki kami hoti hai

[allahabadrptds]

husn walon mein mohabbat ki kami hoti hai
chahne walo ki taqdeer buri hoti hai
aag pahel to mohabbat ki laga dete hain
phir uksaar ka deewana bana dete hain
phir bhaaron pe guzarte hain magar mar mar ke
mar gaye humto hasino pe bharosa karke

[sweet_nashaa]

hi
bohoth hi acha likhe hain aap ne.

It's very nice



Keep writing


Amrita

[allahabadrptds]

mere is shabdon ke tane bane ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya

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aviral

[dilselovergirl]

Husne pe marne wale
Dil bhi rakhte hai hum..
Husn ki parwa karne wale
Dil ki parwa nahi karte...
Pyaar to dil se kiya jata hai
Husn ki banavat pe nahi...

This might offend everybody who looks the outer bueaty..but sorry..its true..you don't love somebody like that... "Love Based on Beauty, Dies, Soon as the Beauty Dies"

[ashna_shah]

:) shayar ji shabhi shayeriyo ko salam......hamare samaj me aye unki bato ka kya javab ?na aye jo samaj me un bato ka kya javab ? kahe te hai hum to sab khuch na sune vo jo kahete hai hum kuchh to uske pakke irado ko salam jo bhi ho vo ho hai magar sare jahan ko salam.........

[allahabadrptds]

to dilselovergirl

namashkaar
aap ka naam hi bata deta ki pyar dil se karti hain, sach hai ki soorat koi maayene nahi rakhti keemat seerat ki hoti. lekin mujhko sirf ek baat batayie ki koi premi apni premika ke bare sabse pahle kya taareef karta hai

"tum kitni khoobsoorat ho" ya "tum bahut khoobsoorat ho"

aur har ladki bhi to yahi sunna chahati hai.
aap boliye ki aap apne premi se phele kya sunna pasand karengi

"tum bahut khoobsoorat ho" ya " tum dil se kitni aachhi ho"
aap mujhko galat kehne ke liye shayad second option chunnegi lekin haqeeqat main bhi janta hoon aur aap bhi aur vo sab log bhi jo mujhse itefaq rakhte hai.

mere shabd shayad aap ko thoda naaraaz kare lekin mere hisaab se "husn jahaan hai ishq wahaan hai"
seerat janne mein waqt lagta lekin phela aakarshan to soorat se hi hota hai.



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[Shayar 4ever]

Very very well said...

Husn waalon mein mohabbat ki kami hoti hai..
Chahne waalon ki taqdeer buri hoti hai..

Kya baat hai..Aapne to jaise humein hila hi diya..well aapke post ke reply pade..Thoda sa sahi laga thoda sa galat.

Maine to kabhi pyaar nahi kiya..Isliye main kuch keh nahi sakta..par jo dilselovergirl ji ne kaha woh bhi sahi hai..Husn se pyaar nahi ho sakta..Aur aap bhi sahi hai..Aapne reality kahi hai.

well...Thanx dilselovergirl aur aviral ji...Aapse bahut kuch sikhna hai..pyaar ke baare mein..

Hamza Ali

[dilselovergirl]

hello! True that all the womans want to hear compliment about themselves...and when i wrote that lil shayri i didn't directly tant you..it just came to my mind thinking...that husn is not everything that we girls would think AS IF husn sab kuch nahi hota hai...I mean i don't know what happend between you and your gf, i don't know what was the reason whatever happend, but i was writing this from a point of view, where girl has a reason to step back, and you are kind of scolding her with using the words of husn and so forth....and i wrote as if i was defending my self.

Galti se kuch bura likh diya ho, aur agar aapko bura laga ho to Maaf Kar Dena...

Tulsika

[allahabadrptds]

namashkaar

apne is kriti ko pasand kiya uske liye shukriya
aur dil se se kahen to aap ke salaam karne ke andaaz ko humaara salaam.


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[merajhashmi]

aadaab

kya baat kahi hai apne ekdam aisa laga ki baat dil ke sabse gehre hisse se nikli hai
likhte rahiyega




~~~meeraj~~~

[allahabadrptds]

namaste

aapka postreply phad kar aachha laga aur jaan kar khushi hui ki aap logo ko humaari post pasand aayi

janaab pyaar to humne bhi kabhi nahi kiya ya shayad kiya ho to nahi jaante ki pyaar kis cheez ka naam hai. jab janne ki koshish ki to jo tajurbaa hua usi ko shabdon mein kahe dala bas.

hum aapko kuch sikhane ki kuwat to shayad nahi rakhte par aap se guzaarish hai ki agar aap jaan jaaye to humko zaroor sikha dijiyega.


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aviral

[allahabadrptds]

first of all i must say aapka naam bahut aachha hai. aur maine kabhi ye naam suna nahi
next thing aapki koi bhi baat mujhko buri nahi lagi kyonki maine koi bhi baat likhi ya kahi sirf taareef sunne ke liye nahi balki sirf apni baat kahene ke liye. mera sirf ye maannaa hai ki
"husn sab kuch to nahi lekin husn kuchbhi nahi, aisa bhi nahi"
these words of mine is definately not because of any argument with my gf cause i dont have any and if there is any in future she is definately free from my side

"gulshan mein phoolon ke saath saath
sochta hoon babool bhi honge
kya hua jo usne bewafaai ki
uske kuch apne usool bhi honge"

aur humne to sirf "sher" likha tha koi "sher" nahi choda tha ki aap apne aap ko defend karnelagi. maafi maang kar aapne humko sharminda kardiya hai.

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aviral

[allahabadrptds]

namashkaar

ye baat dil ki andar se nikli ki nahi ye to mujhko nahi pata haan maine koshish ek zaroo ki thi aur aap logo ki hausla-afzaai se lagta hai ki meri koshish kaamyaab rahi
aap sab logoon ki dua rahi to aage bhi likhta rahoonga


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