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khwab kal raat ka - 19th September 2011, 01:41 PM
Kal raat humne unko, fir dekha tha dobara
Meri zindagi ki khushboo, mere khwabo ka sahara

Aayi thi samne wo, karke haya ka parda
jhuki thi'N unki nazarein, dhadka tha dil hamara

Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
wo kaum thi hamari, mazhab tha wo hamara

Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara

Main khamosh hi khada tha, na halchal koi badan mein
Is pal ko jeena chahta tha, agar na ho samna dobara

Fir kho gayi kahi wo raat ke andhero mein
aankhein thi dhoondti use, dil ro raha tha hamara

wo door ja chuki thi par aks rah gaya tha
ab is anjaan e ashq ka wo aks hai sahara

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19th September 2011, 03:52 PM
AnjAAn Sahab, aapke ehsaas mujhe bahut pasand aaye.

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara
kya baat hai sahab, esa hi ek sawal kisi ne haal hi main pucha tha mujhse par main usse theek se jawab na de saka shayad naraz hoon usse.....

khair, aapne ehsaasoN ko issi tarah kagaz par utarte rahiye....

aapka.

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19th September 2011, 04:24 PM
Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

MashAllah!!..Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai Anjaan sahab....

Very romantic and touching..



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19th September 2011, 04:39 PM
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Kal raat humne unko, fir dekha tha dobara
Meri zindagi ki khushboo, mere khwabo ka sahara

Aayi thi samne wo, karke haya ka parda
jhuki thi'N unki nazarein, dhadka tha dil hamara

Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
wo kaum thi hamari, mazhab tha wo hamara

Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara

Main khamosh hi khada tha, na halchal koi badan mein
Is pal ko jeena chahta tha, agar na ho samna dobara

Fir kho gayi kahi wo raat ke andhero mein
aankhein thi dhoondti use, dil ro raha tha hamara

wo door ja chuki thi par aks rah gaya tha
ab is anjaan e ashq ka wo aks hai sahara
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19th September 2011, 08:05 PM
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AnjAAn Sahab, aapke ehsaas mujhe bahut pasand aaye.

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara
kya baat hai sahab, esa hi ek sawal kisi ne haal hi main pucha tha mujhse par main usse theek se jawab na de saka shayad naraz hoon usse.....

khair, aapne ehsaasoN ko issi tarah kagaz par utarte rahiye....

aapka.
Bahut bahut dhanyawad sahab aapka jo aapne is chhoti si koshish ko saraha. Or ek baat or apna samajhkar kehna chahunga ki jo dil mein hai wo kabool karo. Kabhi agar waqt nikal gaya to pachtave ke siwa kuch nai kar paoge.

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19th September 2011, 08:42 PM
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Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

MashAllah!!..Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai Anjaan sahab....

Very romantic and touching..
Shukriya Zainy ji, aapne meri is chhoti se peshkash pe nazar e inayat hi badi baat hai. Bas apna sneh or mohabbat banaye rakhein. Dhanyawad

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Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

MashAllah!!..Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai Anjaan sahab....

Very romantic and touching..
Shukriya zainy ji, aapne jo meri is ghazal par dhyan diya. Aage bhi aate rahein or ye sneh or mohabbat banaye rakhein.

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Kal raat humne unko, fir dekha tha dobara
Meri zindagi ki khushboo, mere khwabo ka sahara

Aayi thi samne wo, karke haya ka parda
jhuki thi'N unki nazarein, dhadka tha dil hamara

Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
wo kaum thi hamari, mazhab tha wo hamara

Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara

Main khamosh hi khada tha, na halchal koi badan mein
Is pal ko jeena chahta tha, agar na ho samna dobara

Fir kho gayi kahi wo raat ke andhero mein
aankhein thi dhoondti use, dil ro raha tha hamara

wo door ja chuki thi par aks rah gaya tha
ab is anjaan e ashq ka wo aks hai sahara

waah behad umdah aashaar .. har sher ek se badhkar ek anjaan bhai.. daad ki aqeedat pesh hain.. qubool farmaaen...
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waah behad umdah aashaar .. har sher ek se badhkar ek anjaan bhai.. daad ki aqeedat pesh hain.. qubool farmaaen...
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Bahut bahut shukriya shaad bhai jaan. Aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi. Sach kahein to bus aapka hi intezaar ho raha tha ki aapka comment kya aata hai. Par is baar aapne khaamiyon pe roshni nai dali. Kya hua humse koi galti ho gayi huzur ya aapko laga ki ye banda kabhi khamiyon ko durust to karta hi nai hai to bata kar kya fayda.

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Kal raat humne unko, fir dekha tha dobara
Meri zindagi ki khushboo, mere khwabo ka sahara

Aayi thi samne wo, karke haya ka parda
jhuki thi'N unki nazarein, dhadka tha dil hamara

Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
wo kaum thi hamari, mazhab tha wo hamara

Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara

Main khamosh hi khada tha, na halchal koi badan mein
Is pal ko jeena chahta tha, agar na ho samna dobara

Fir kho gayi kahi wo raat ke andhero mein
aankhein thi dhoondti use, dil ro raha tha hamara

wo door ja chuki thi par aks rah gaya tha
ab is anjaan e ashq ka wo aks hai sahara
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Bahut bahut shukriya shaad bhai jaan. Aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi. Sach kahein to bus aapka hi intezaar ho raha tha ki aapka comment kya aata hai. Par is baar aapne khaamiyon pe roshni nai dali. Kya hua humse koi galti ho gayi huzur ya aapko laga ki ye banda kabhi khamiyon ko durust to karta hi nai hai to bata kar kya fayda.

Anjaan ab aisaa nahi hai ke hameshaa se maine Khaamiyaan nikaalne ki Zimmmedaari le li ho.. bhai yeh humse nahi hotaa... haan magar kai baar jab aapko padhaa to dil me khayal aata thaa iske bajaay ye zyada suit hotaa, ye aise ke bajaaay aisaa hotaa to zyadaa nikhartaa.. isliye kah detaa thaa..

Lekin s baar aapki koshish hame sahi maayne me bahot pasand aai... Is baar main ehsaasoN me kahin kho gayaa thaa, aur bas dil ne chaha ke is baar Tareef hi kar di jaae bande ki... Khair bahot khoob likhaa hai aapne.. yehi rawaanii barkaraar rakkhen... Khush rahen.

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Anjaan ab aisaa nahi hai ke hameshaa se maine Khaamiyaan nikaalne ki Zimmmedaari le li ho.. bhai yeh humse nahi hotaa... haan magar kai baar jab aapko padhaa to dil me khayal aata thaa iske bajaay ye zyada suit hotaa, ye aise ke bajaaay aisaa hotaa to zyadaa nikhartaa.. isliye kah detaa thaa..

Lekin s baar aapki koshish hame sahi maayne me bahot pasand aai... Is baar main ehsaasoN me kahin kho gayaa thaa, aur bas dil ne chaha ke is baar Tareef hi kar di jaae bande ki... Khair bahot khoob likhaa hai aapne.. yehi rawaanii barkaraar rakkhen... Khush rahen.

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shukriya sameer bhai, aapse ek apnapan sa ho gaya. Isiliye aap se galtiyaan janne mein maza aata hai warna sudharta kitna hu ye aap bhi jante hain. Main to bas wahi likh deta hu jo dil se awaaj aati hai. Bas apna sath banaye rakhiye or khamiyaan ginaate rahiye. Dhanyawaad kuch or bhi likha hai jaldi hi post karunga. Umeed hai aapko pasand aayega.

Jee Zaroor ... !! hame intezaar Rahegaa.. Shukriyaa

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Kal raat humne unko, fir dekha tha dobara
Meri zindagi ki khushboo, mere khwabo ka sahara

Aayi thi samne wo, karke haya ka parda
jhuki thi'N unki nazarein, dhadka tha dil hamara

Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
wo kaum thi hamari, mazhab tha wo hamara

Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

Bada shokh tha wo jhaunka, parda tha kheencha jisne
kaha shukriya hawa ko, diya sath jo hamara

Dheere se apni palkein, fir uthayi usne upar
wo sawaal puchti thi, kya haal hai tumhara

Main khamosh hi khada tha, na halchal koi badan mein
Is pal ko jeena chahta tha, agar na ho samna dobara

Fir kho gayi kahi wo raat ke andhero mein
aankhein thi dhoondti use, dil ro raha tha hamara

wo door ja chuki thi par aks rah gaya tha
ab is anjaan e ashq ka wo aks hai sahara
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Thanks Rohin, I'll try to put some more clarity to my thoughts next time. Keep coming

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Hi AnjAAn ji.......bahut hi nayab thought pesh ki he aapne....I like that.thanks a lot .....
Shukriya Sneha ji.......aap ko mere thoughts pasand aaye ye meri khushkismati hai..... Aap bas aati rahein hum ek se ek koshish karte rahenge ki aapko pasand aaye

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Good one. Thanks for sharing this wonderful post.
Thank you very much mittal ji. Keep coming and appreciating. Take care

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Wow !!! Its wonderful thought...thanks a lot for share nice poem.I think its lovely theme.........bahut hi khooob alfaaz he .......keep it up
Thank you very much dear. It is very pleasing to see you here. It is ultimately my pleasure that you liked those thoughts. Next time I'll definitely improve that you may like the poem (Or ghazal) as a whole.
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hmmmmmmmmmmm.....bada mast mast likha hai.....sabhi ahsaas acche lage....keep it up.

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hmmmmmmmmmmm.....bada mast mast likha hai.....sabhi ahsaas acche lage....keep it up.

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it's such a beautiful wordings ......................so nice
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Is jahan se door dono, khoye ek doosre mein
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Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
jo hizaab se chann raha tha, wo noor tha hamara

bhai wah Anjaan ji, in do ehsaaso ne samaa baandh diya. bahut khoob
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Kuch kehna hum jo chahein, to lafz jam gaye they
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bhai wah Anjaan ji, in do ehsaaso ne samaa baandh diya. bahut khoob
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aahhhhaaaaaaa kya baat hai AnjAAn ji jitna padhte ja rahe hain aapko aapke ehsaas dil me utarte ja rahe hain... bht khubsurat peshkash har ek sher kuch yaadein kuch mulakatein jawan kar gaya........ lovely creation keep writing and sharing ur feelings....
   
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aahhhhaaaaaaa kya baat hai AnjAAn ji jitna padhte ja rahe hain aapko aapke ehsaas dil me utarte ja rahe hain... bht khubsurat peshkash har ek sher kuch yaadein kuch mulakatein jawan kar gaya........ lovely creation keep writing and sharing ur feelings....
Jaroor Mohtarma, hum yunhi likhte rahenge. Aap bas aise hi padhte jaiye or ho sake to duao'n mein yaad rkhein.

Koi jabardasti nai hai haan.......

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