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Khol akh wekh roshni chuferay........ - 17th May 2011, 07:37 AM
SDC di mehfil ch shirkat karn walay sab dosta nu sat sri akaal.dosto kafi dina toN waad kujh likhia hai.....aap de rubru hai...kinjh laga jaroor likhna.



Khol akh wekh roshni chuferay
ik pal ch ne mitde ghor haneray.

wekh ambraaN vich suraj khalota
nighi nighi dhup teri shat te khileray.

sutiaN reheNga j ik gal samajh lai
sufne haqikat kad hone teray.

ho sake taN dulay ber hajay v chug lai
zindagi de kujh pal reh gay ne teray.

bharma bhulekhyaN ch ainweiN q rujhya
akheer nu taN sach de hone ne nibaray.

shad de tu 'seep' yaraaN mitraN nu tolna
kon aaya naal kinay naal jana teray.

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SDC di mehfil ch shirkat karn walay sab dosta nu sat sri akaal.dosto kafi dina toN waad kujh likhia hai.....aap de rubru hai...kinjh laga jaroor likhna.



Khol akh wekh roshni chuferay
ik pal ch ne mitde ghor haneray.

wekh ambraaN vich suraj khalota
nighi nighi dhup teri shat te khileray.

sutiaN reheNga j ik gal samajh lai
sufne haqikat kad hone teray.

ho sake taN dulay ber hajay v chug lai
zindagi de kujh pal reh gay ne teray.

bharma bhulekhyaN ch ainweiN q rujhya
akheer nu taN sach de hone ne nibaray.

shad de tu 'seep' yaraaN mitraN nu tolna
kon aaya naal kinay naal jana teray.

rajinderseep...
Ji .. Pranaam Bhaiya, kaise hai aap .. ?? Bhaiya hum ko punjabi nahi aati .... kitani baar padhane pe thodi thodi si samajh aayi aap ki rachanaa .. aur jo samajh aaya uske liye kahe sakte hai ke .. hammesha ki tarhaa dil chhune waale ehsaas rahe ...

Baaki fir aa jaayenge .. wo ek bhaabhi hai naa paas hi rahete hai .. unhe mast punjabi aati hai .. unko ye padh ke sunaayenge .. unse meaning jaan lenge .. aur fir apne Bhaiya ko tang karne ek baar aur haazir ho jaayenge ... ... ab jaldi jaldi kuchh hindi mai bhi likhiye taaki Gudia bhi padh sake .. aur apne bhaiya ko tang karte huye replies de sake ... areee Gudia ka haq bantaa hai .. jee chaahe jitnaa sataaye apne bhai ko ... .. keep smiling always ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki: Gudia

Jay Ambe

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Mital pali ji bahut bahut shukria.......

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18th May 2011, 12:09 AM
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Originally Posted by rajinderseep
SDC di mehfil ch shirkat karn walay sab dosta nu sat sri akaal.dosto kafi dina toN waad kujh likhia hai.....aap de rubru hai...kinjh laga jaroor likhna.



Khol akh wekh roshni chuferay
ik pal ch ne mitde ghor haneray.

wekh ambraaN vich suraj khalota
nighi nighi dhup teri shat te khileray.

sutiaN reheNga j ik gal samajh lai
sufne haqikat kad hone teray.

ho sake taN dulay ber hajay v chug lai
zindagi de kujh pal reh gay ne teray.

bharma bhulekhyaN ch ainweiN q rujhya
akheer nu taN sach de hone ne nibaray.

shad de tu 'seep' yaraaN mitraN nu tolna
kon aaya naal kinay naal jana teray.

rajinderseep...
Ji .. Pranaam Bhaiya, kaise hai aap .. ?? Bhaiya hum ko punjabi nahi aati .... kitani baar padhane pe thodi thodi si samajh aayi aap ki rachanaa .. aur jo samajh aaya uske liye kahe sakte hai ke .. hammesha ki tarhaa dil chhune waale ehsaas rahe ...

Baaki fir aa jaayenge .. wo ek bhaabhi hai naa paas hi rahete hai .. unhe mast punjabi aati hai .. unko ye padh ke sunaayenge .. unse meaning jaan lenge .. aur fir apne Bhaiya ko tang karne ek baar aur haazir ho jaayenge ... ... ab jaldi jaldi kuchh hindi mai bhi likhiye taaki Gudia bhi padh sake .. aur apne bhaiya ko tang karte huye replies de sake ... areee Gudia ka haq bantaa hai .. jee chaahe jitnaa sataaye apne bhai ko ... .. keep smiling always ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki: Gudia

Jay Ambe


Gudia ji pehlay to jawaamb meiN deri k liay muaafi chahunga.
baki aap ne is ko padne ki koshish ki or sraha bhi aap ka tehay dil se shukria.

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Changa likhya Rjinderseep jee aapne. Toda vadda shukriya jee!

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