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Love ਅਣਖ ਨਾਲ.... - 16th April 2008, 02:43 AM


ਅਣਖ ਨਾਲ ਜੇ ਜਿਊਣਾ ਤਾਂ ਗੁਰੂ ਦੀ ਮੇਹਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਕਰਨੀ ਜੇ ਬਦਮਾਸ਼ੀ ਤਾਂ ਦਿਲ ਸ਼ੇਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਲੜਨ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਅੱਖ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੜਕ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਪਿਆਰ ਪਾਉਣ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਯਾਰ ਦੀ ਪਰਖ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ...
   
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16th April 2008, 02:40 PM

Balley kudiye kadh ditta ajj juice. Fantastic. Eh lok tath category shayad kisey ne pehli waar try keeti hai. Bas ik arz hai ki ehnaa chaar lines naal gall poori nahi banani. Es rachnaa nu hor wadhaao. Parmaatmaa zaroor mehar karegaa.

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17th April 2008, 10:51 AM

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ਅਣਖ ਨਾਲ ਜੇ ਜਿਊਣਾ ਤਾਂ ਗੁਰੂ ਦੀ ਮੇਹਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਕਰਨੀ ਜੇ ਬਦਮਾਸ਼ੀ ਤਾਂ ਦਿਲ ਸ਼ੇਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਲੜਨ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਅੱਖ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੜਕ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਪਿਆਰ ਪਾਉਣ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਯਾਰ ਦੀ ਪਰਖ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ...
.............bilkul sahi keha hai tusi


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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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18th April 2008, 01:17 AM

tooooooo gud jee,tk cr,

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23rd April 2008, 12:58 AM

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ਅਣਖ ਨਾਲ ਜੇ ਜਿਊਣਾ ਤਾਂ ਗੁਰੂ ਦੀ ਮੇਹਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਕਰਨੀ ਜੇ ਬਦਮਾਸ਼ੀ ਤਾਂ ਦਿਲ ਸ਼ੇਰ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਲੜਨ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਅੱਖ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੜਕ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ,

ਪਿਆਰ ਪਾਉਣ ਤੋਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਯਾਰ ਦੀ ਪਰਖ ਜ਼ਰੂਰੀ ਏ...
Dil kadd ke lai gya tuhaada e sher... boht hi vadiya...

Inj hi likhde raho...

Jiyonde Vasde raho!

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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

   
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aag - 30th April 2008, 03:13 PM

eh aag ve ki a
jihri do tra di jindgi jeondi a
jad e bandi a jugnoo ta bhhule-batkian nu raah dikhondi a,
par banke lawa a plaa vich har cheez nu jlaundi a
viah wele ta eh saat janam tak saath nibhaun dia kasma dilondi a
par dahej de roop vich a sirf auart da hi naamo nishan mitaundi a
a aag ve ki a jihri do tra di jindgi jeondi a.
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Question aag - 1st May 2008, 02:31 PM

eh aag ve ki a
jihri do tra di jindgi jeondi a
jad e bandi a jugnoo ta bhhule-batkian nu raah dikhondi a,
par banke lawa a plaa vich har cheez nu jlaundi a
viah wele ta eh saat janam tak saath nibhaun dia kasma dilondi a
par dahej de roop vich a sirf auart da hi naamo nishan mitaundi a
a aag ve ki a jihri do tra di jindgi jeondi a.
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